Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 22, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-02032 Impact of viral suppression among persons with HIV upon estimated HIV incidence between 2010 and 2015 in the United States PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Samandari, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The reviewers have suggested some small changes and highlighted points including the potential confounding effects of undiagnosed HIV infections which we ask you to address in your revised manuscript. Please submit your revised manuscript by 29th September 2020. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: General comments: -This is a novel and important paper. The authors have written a very clear, descriptive, and ecological study with significant contribution to the literature. -what is “most recent test in each year”? Recent to each end of year follow-up? Were multiple tests (or even cumulative time suppressed) considered? -All the tables are clear; except table 2 I may suggest grouping (instead of alphabetical), but region so it is easier to see variation between states in each region -In model, was co-linearity a factor with some of the demographic measures? -If space allows, may I suggest a comment on ART coverage and testing rates by state in the discussion -solid discussion + limitations section; very thorough; addressed gaps appropriately Reviewer #2: Comments to the authors This paper describes the association between state-level viral suppression among HIV-diagnosed individuals and the fittest HIV incidence rate in the following year across the United States. The authors conclude that increased viral suppression is associated with a modest decrease in HIV incidence in the following year, and report declining trends in HIV incidence across most US states during the study period. This paper describes important population-level evidence to support U=U and Treatment as Prevention, and would be of interest to PLOS-ONE readership. The statistical analysis is sound and appropriate, however there are some major limitations in using viral suppression estimates among HIV-diagnosed individuals as a proxy of community-level viraemia, which should be further discussed. My overarching concern is that the authors have not accounted for undiagnosed HIV in their analysis. The authors state that viral suppression measures come from data reported to CDC from jurisdictions with complete reporting of HIV viral load tests, so the viral suppression parameter reflects the proportion of *diagnosed* individuals who are virally suppressed. However, the more proximal variable related to HIV incidence would be state-level viraemia, i.e. the proportion of the *entire population* which have detectable HIV. Therefore, large difference in rates of undiagnosed HIV across states / over time may bias results. Are there any estimates of HIV prevalence / rate of undiagnosed HIV in each state which could be used in conjunction with viral suppression rates among those diagnosed to estimate community-level viremia? If this is not possible this should be discussed in the limitations, or the authors should elaborate on the rationale for using viral suppression among those diagnosed as the driver of HIV incidence. Lines 89-92. The authors state that HIV incidence is estimated using first reported CD4 cell count after HIV diagnosis and a CD4 depletion model. It would be prudent to elaborate on the methods of this model, and the parameters used. Two citations are given, however it is my understanding that each of the paper cited use slightly different methods / parameters in the depletion model. Can the authors provide the model specs or formulae in supplementary materials? Line112. Can the authors provide a justification for using a 1-year lag period? Lines 118-119: “Quartiles for estimated HIV incidence rate and percent viral suppression were calculated across the entire time frame”.. do you mean they were calculated for each state for each year? The results “Most states did not experience changes to a lower quartile” suggests this is the case. If so please clarify.. “Annual quartiles for…” Table 3 please add p-values Line 193-195: “The impact on HIV incidence rate in Southern states diminished after adjustment for viral suppression and demographic characteristics to being 36% lower compared with the Northeastern states.” This statement is slightly confusing, the impact of what? Suggest changing to something such as “After adjustment for viral suppression and demographic characteristics, HIV incidence rate was 36% lower in Southern states compared to northeastern states” or “The relative difference in HIV incidence in Southern states compared to Northeasterns states diminished after.” Lines 251-252. “The increases of sexually transmitted diseases during this period in the United States – to the highest recorded levels – suggest that condom use did not increase.29” I think a citation here to actual data on condom use would be more suitable. Line 264 “In conclusion, our ecologic analysis suggests that between 2010 and 2015, the increase in viral suppression observed after the rollout of ART modestly reduced the estimated HIV incidence rate in the United States.” Given the limitations mentioned and the ecological nature of this study, authors should avoid causal terms, eg reduced. Consider “was associated with a reduction in”. ********** 6. 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Impact of viral suppression among persons with HIV upon estimated HIV incidence between 2010 and 2015 in the United States PONE-D-20-02032R1 Dear Dr. Samandari, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Anna C Hearps Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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PONE-D-20-02032R1 Impact of viral suppression among persons with HIV upon estimated HIV incidence between 2010 and 2015 in the United States Dear Dr. Samandari: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Anna C Hearps Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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