Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-22293 The absence of orthostatic heart rate increase is associated with cognitive impairment in Parkinson’s disease PLOS ONE Dear Dr. TANAKA, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 01 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2.Thank you for stating the following in the Financial Disclosure section: [R.T. reports personal fees from honoraria: not related to the current work: Takeda Pharmaceutical Co.,Ltd., Nippon Boehringer Ingelheim,Co.,Ltd, Dai-Nippon Sumitomo Pharma Co.,Ltd., Bayer Yakuhin, Ltd, Otsuka Pharmaceutical, Co.,Ltd, Pfizer Japan Inc., , DAIICHI SANKYO Co.,Ltd., Eisai Co.,Ltd., Bristol-Myers Squibb Co., Stryker Japan K.K., CSL Behring K.K. and Kowa Co.,Ltd. K.Y. reports grants from Grants from Grant-in-Aid for Scientific Research, and personal fees from honoraria for work unrelated to the current study: Pfizer Inc,, Takeda Pharmaceutical Co.,Ltd., Dai-Nippon Sumitomo Pharma Co.,Ltd., Bayer Yakuhin, Ltd, Otsuka Pharmaceutical, Co.,Ltd., DAIICHI SANKYO Co.,Ltd., and Novartis Pharma K.K. T.O. reports the following disclosures: None K.N. reports the following disclosures: Grant from Japan Society for the Promotion of Science (JSPS) KAKENHI Grant and a research grant from Biogen Japan Ltd. not granted for the current study. G.O. reports grants from Grants from Japan Society for the Promotion of Science; Grant-in-Aid for Young Scientists (B), honoraria from work unrelated to the current study: Medtronic, Boston Scientific, Otsuka Pharmaceutical, Sumitomo Dainippon Pharma, Novartis Pharma, MSD, Nihon Medi-Physics, FP Pharmaceutical Corporation, Kyowa Hakko Kirin, and Abbvie. A.U. reports grants from Grants from Japan Society for the Promotion of Science; Grant-in-Aid for Scientific Research (C), Research Grant from Novartis Pharma K.K, consultancy: Boston Scientific Japan, and honoraria: Medtronic Japan Inc., Novartis Pharma K.K, Kyowa Hakko-Kirin Co.,Ltd., Takeda Pharmaceutical Co.,Ltd. And Abbvie, for work unrelated to the current study. Y.S. reports grants from the Japan Society for the Promotion of Science, Grant-in-Aid for Scientific Research and speaker honoraria from Medtronic, Boston Scientific, Otsuka Pharmaceutical, Takeda Pharmaceutical CO, Sumitomo Dainippon Pharma, Novartis Pharma, MSD, FP Pharmaceutical Corporation, Kyowa Hakko Kirin, and AbbVie, Inc N.H. reports grants from the Japan Society for the Promotion of Science (JSPS); grants from Ministry of Education Culture,Sports,Science and Technology Japan, grants from Health Labour Sciences Research Grant, grants from Japan Agency for Medical Research and Development (AMED), AbbVie GK, FP Pharma. Co, Dai-Nippon Sumitomo Pharma Co.,Ltd, Eisai Co.,Ltd., and received honoraria of as a speaker and advisory boards from Kyowa Kirin Co., Ltd., Dai-Nippon Sumitomo Pharma Co., Ltd, Takeda Pharmaceutical Co., Ltd., Otsuka Pharmaceutical, Co., Ltd, AbbVie GK, Eisai Co., Ltd., FP Pharma. Co, Mitsubishi Tanabe Pharma Co., Otsuka Pharmaceutical, Novartis Pharma, MSD, Nihon Medi-Physics, Bristol-Myers Squibb Company, Ono Pharmaceutical Co., Ltd., EA Pharma Co., Ltd, Asahi Kasei Medical Co., Ltd., and Chugai Pharma Manufacturing Co., Ltd. Also he received honoraria from Biogen Japan Ltd for Subcontracting (Trial cases) and he has the Equity stock (8%) of PARKINSON Laboratories Co. Ltd.]. We note that you received funding from multiple commercial sources. 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Please know it is PLOS ONE policy for corresponding authors to declare, on behalf of all authors, all potential competing interests for the purposes of transparency. PLOS defines a competing interest as anything that interferes with, or could reasonably be perceived as interfering with, the full and objective presentation, peer review, editorial decision-making, or publication of research or non-research articles submitted to one of the journals. Competing interests can be financial or non-financial, professional, or personal. Competing interests can arise in relationship to an organization or another person. Please follow this link to our website for more details on competing interests: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/competing-interests Additional Editor Comments (if provided): The authors retrospectively analyzed 147 cases of clinically diagnosed PD to determine the association between the absence of a heart rate response and cognitive impairment in PD with OH. Among the patients with OH, neurogenic OH was diagnosed in cases without a heart rate increase, while all other patients were diagnosed with nonneurogenicOH. Dementia was found in 25 of 147 PD cases (17%) in this cohort. The presence of OH was an independent risk factor for dementia in PD in addition to the disease severity and years of education. Neurogenic OH was significantly associated with dementia compared to the no OH group (harzard ratio [HR] 8.2, 95% confidence interval [CI] 2.5-26.9, P<0.001), an association that was preserved after adjusting for age, gender and other covariant factors. However, no such association was observed for non-neurogenic OH (HR 2.7, 95%CI 0.7-10.5, P=0.13). While the cognitive impairment was significantly worse in the neurogenic OH group than the no-OH group, the groups were otherwise similar. The blood pressure decrease was significantly lower in both OH groups than in the no-OH group, despite no significant differences between the OH groups. The manuscript is interesting. However, I have a concern regarding the presence of syncope and/or unexplained falls in this sample. Please see and discuss Ungar A: Etiology of Syncope and Unexplained Falls in Elderly Adults with Dementia: Syncope and Dementia (SYD) Study. J Am Geriatr Soc. 2016 Aug;64(8):1567-73. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The paper is of interest and the association between orthostatic hypotension (OH) , cognitive impairment and Parkinson’s disease (PD) is clinically relevant. The association between the heart rate response and cognitive impairment was retrospectively analyzed in 147 cases of clinically diagnosed PD to determine the association between the absence of a heart rate response and cognitive impairment in PD with OH. Among the patients with OH, neurogenic OH was diagnosed in caseswithout a heart rate increase, while all other patients were diagnosed with non-neurogenic OH. Dementia was found in 25 of 147 PD cases (17%). Neurogenic OH was significantly associatedwith dementia compared to the no OH group (harzard ratio [HR] 8.2, 95% confidenceinterval [CI] 2.5-26.9, P<0.001), an association that was preserved after adjusting forage, gender and other covariate. No association was observedfor non-neurogenic OH (HR 2.7, 95%CI 0.7-10.5, P=0.13). The manuscript is well written, data support conclusions. Reviewer #2: The paper is interesting, resulting in a great impact on management of PD patients. The correlation of dementia in PD patients with neurogenic OH is a relevant finding to better understand evolution and prognosis of PD. However, some aspects should be more extensively argued to avoid confounding data. Major revision Materials and methods: In this study, drugs were not considered with exception of anti-hypotensive medications and levodopa. The influence of some classes of medications on postural response of arterial pressure is well known. In particular, there is no mention about beta-blockers. Patients with congestive heart failure were excluded from the study, but use of beta-blockers is also and often requested in hypertensive patients or in coronary artery disease (enrolled in this study). This class of medications could fade postural heart rate response leading to a wrong diagnosis of neurogenic OH. The study should be improved by adding data on medications to avoid that the association of neurogenic OH with dementia in PD patients is considered only a winsome suggestion. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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The absence of orthostatic heart rate increase is associated with cognitive impairment in Parkinson’s disease PONE-D-20-22293R1 Dear Dr. TANAKA, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Pasquale Abete Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): No further comments. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: The authors have fully addressed my comments. The correlation between the absence of heart rate response to postural change and dementia in patients affected by Parkinson disease should be an interesting subject to be more extensively treated in the future. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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