Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 25, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-14876 Biomechanical evaluation of unilateral subcondylar fracture of the mandible on the varying materials: a finite element analysis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kim, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please follow the reviewers comments strictly. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 07 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for giving me this opportunity to review this in vitro research article entitled, "Biomechanical evaluation of unilateral subcondylar fracture of the mandible on the varying materials: a finite element analysis". I here carefully reviewed the submitted set of the manuscript and found it possibly merits of publication. However, the article needs substantial revisions in order to meet the standard of scientific publication. Therefore, I would like to propose that the article should be revised thoroughly and need further reconsideration for re-evaluation whether this study article should be appropriate for acceptance or not. 1. What is the backgrond of this in vitro study. The ORIF of mandibular condyle fractures are well documented with some proved clinical evidence so far with various surgical approaches and various hardware materials. The back ground of this study must be well discribed using appropriate and recent references. The Introduction section and the Discussion sections are to be both the level of clinical reports of undergraduates, I'm sorry but, I need to say. The authors here also need to mention the ideal lines of double buttressing of mandibular condyle fracture should be well addressed in this section. 2. In the M&M section, all the materials tested for this research should be summarized including plate thickness, screw diameter, etc. "The thickness of the mini-plate was 2.0 mm, and the length and radius of the screw were 6.0 mm and 1.0 mm, respectively." is very unclear. The authors need to carry these photos as a figure. 1.0mm screw radius means 2.0mm diameter?? The surgeons don't describe the screw system with radius! 3. "The subcondylar fracture of FEA model was constructed that a 0.5 mm gap was set to minimize the effect of shear stress caused by the bony contact" seems hardly understandable. The authors need to further discuss this issue in the Discussion section well to persuade this idea. Actually the fractured segments are honestly well reduced as "buttressing as anatomical reduction" and the fixation should be done in a clinical setting. The present idea in in vito study should be against the clinical setting completely. 4. Statistical analyses are mandatory. I've never reviewed the article without any statistical evaluation like this article, I'm afraid. 5. The discussion sections should be by far well discussed mentioning and comparing the results obtained here with those reported previously and with the clinical issues in a clinical setting. The comprehensive structures of the Discussion should be further amended. The clinical relevance should be well discribed and discussed based on the results obtained here. Could you please let me further re-review after substantial revisions are to be done for reconsideration for suitability? Reviewer #2: 1. Summary of the research and my overall impression: The aim of this research is particularly relevant to the field of Craniomaxillofacial Surgery because it is related to oral fractures, more specifically to mandible condylar ones. This subject is really challenging. Sometimes, surgeons don’t choose the open access to treat these fractures either due to anatomic reasons because important structures can be found there or due to the difficulty to reduce and to fix the fractures. It is known that the open treatment is better than the closed one because it can facilitate the return to normal activities such as mastication and occlusion as soon as possible. Besides that, some complications caused by the non-surgical treatment can be avoided. This paper shows a study about four kinds of ORIF to treat the mandible subcondylar fractures: titanium (Ti), magnesium alloy (Mg alloy), biodegradable polymers such as poly-L-lactic acid (PLLA) and a hydroxyapatite/poly-L-lactide (HA-PLLA). It is justified by the increasing demand of re-absorbable materials to be used instead of titanium, which is the gold standard material, owing to some disadvantages. The methodology is especially interesting, based on other studies that have been published in high impact factor journals. 2. Discussion of specific areas for improvement Abstract: In order to be better understood by the readers of the journal, it would be interesting to follow the acronyms with the complete name of the materials. For example ti: titanium. I suggest removing this sentence: “Deformation of HA-PLLA was approximately 0.15 mm upon 300 N of masticatory loading”. It is hard to understand in this section and it is well explained in the results section. Introduction: Line 10: “Subcondylar fractures can be treated conservatively or surgically”. What does “conservatively” mean? The best term may be “non-surgically”, as we can have a conservative surgery, for example, depending on our care during the procedure. Materials and methods: In Figure 1, the posterior plate does not seem to be completely attached to the bone. I would like you to confirm this and try to explain it better. The second screws (considering the superior to inferior) are closer to the fracture line than the ideal. On the anterior plate, this screw seems to be in the fracture line. Depending on the direction of the perforation to install this screw, I think that the fracture can be “open”. Maybe, this fact can be considered a bias. I don’t think it can influence the results, but I think that you can try to reinstall this plate, virtually. I suggest you provide more information about the masticatory load that was applied. Why did you choose this load? Isn´t it too high? I would like to see other papers that justify this choice. Results: In Figure 2: “middle column, stress on fixations (mini-plates and screws) but we can just see the plates, without screws”. I think that you need to change this caption due to the fact that the screws are not there, just the plates. Do you have information about the bone? If so, you can insert main maximum tension and minimum tension to increase the amount of information and to make this article even more relevant. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Ricardo Augusto Conci [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-20-14876R1 Biomechanical evaluation of unilateral subcondylar fracture of the mandible on the varying materials: a finite element analysis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kim, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: Authors should improve English language by native English speaker for the whole text of the paper before consideration of publication />============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 11 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I here carefully re-evaluated the revised set of the manuscript and found it no merits of publication. I'm sorry but I can't support this study article. Further the re-submitted article would be wrongly carried with English grammatical corrections. Reviewer #2: Thanks for answering my questions. I think that the information now is better and you improved your paper.I appreciate it. ********** 7. 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Biomechanical evaluation of unilateral subcondylar fracture of the mandible on the varying materials: a finite element analysis PONE-D-20-14876R2 Dear Dr. Kim, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Essam Al-Moraissi Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: N/A Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: The design of this study is very unique and interesting. The data is clear and the manuscript is well corrected. It seems that there is no problem as a paper to be published. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: Yes: Ricardo Augusto Conci Reviewer #3: No |
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PONE-D-20-14876R2 Biomechanical evaluation of unilateral subcondylar fracture of the mandible on the varying materials: a finite element analysis Dear Dr. Kim: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Essam Al-Moraissi Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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