Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-09946 Transcriptome analysis revealed misregulated gene expression in blastoderms of interspecific chicken and Japanese quail F1 hybrids PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Matsuda, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 13 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Comments In this manuscript, Ishishita et al describes that the numerical chromosomal abnormalities due to segregation failure does not cause the lethality of chicken–quail hybrid embryos, and that the developmental arrest at the preprimitive streak stage in the hybrids is mainly caused by the downregulated expression of the genes involved in various biological processes. The later part is the important part of this manuscript, however it raises several questions in its current form. Please see below for my specific comments on this manuscript. Methods section: In methods section, the chicken management, semen collection, and AI is not clear. Line 125 indicates that the chicken eggs and semen were supplied by the National BioResource Project…Line 131 indicates that the chickens were maintained (locally?). Line 135 indicates that the semen was collected just before AI…. If the chicken egg and semen were supplied, no need of chicken maintenance, as the paper just deals with chicken embryos. In this case, authors need to write semen preservation. If the semen was collected by authors, statement in line 125 should be excluded. Lines 127-131. While both chromosome and gene expression analyses included in a single paper, it is not clear why Ehime-jidori chickens used for chromosome analysis only, and BL-E chickens used for gene expression analysis only. Please expand the molecular sexing procedure. When and how the sexing of early embryos (stage X – XIII/XIV) detected? Results section: In figure 1, please use different arrows to indicate CJA-Bgl II-M9 signal in 1E, and quail-derived chromosomes in 1F. In figure 4D, what does mean FC 1/2? Lines 345-353. Please indicate clearly that you are describing male embryos here. I understood only after reading the corresponding figure legend (Fig. 4). The female counterpart (shown in S1 figure only) is not described and cited in this paragraph. Lines 349-352. “The numbers of genes whose directions…” Please simply this sentence for clear understanding, and write the number of genes. Line 371-376. “genes whose expression is upregulated …. referred to as pattern D)”. It is little difficult to connect this message, Fig. 5A, and S2 Fig. in the current form. I suggest to split the S2 Fig. with grouping of those 28 male genes, 28 female genes and 4 common genes fall on pattern D in Fig.5A. Lines 370-409. This should be the major vital portion of the manuscript as the authors primarily claim in the title. However, it does not strengthen the manuscript, and raises many questions. 1. While avian/chicken specific GO terms are available in many databases including AmiGO, why the authors used Homo sapiens database as the reference? (stated in the methods section, lines 187-190). 2. What is the functional classification of genes listed in Fig. 5B, and how they differ from Fig.5D? does the other genes have no functional classification? 3. Except a very few term, most of the terms shown in Fig. 5B-D are not relevant to embryonic development at the analysis period, stage X – stage XIII/XIV. Authors need to screen terms closely related to stage X – XIII/XIV development. You may also include terms related to shortly before and after this time point. In addition, you can include the terms related to chromosomal properties to support the first section of this manuscript. 4. I suggest the authors to search and include the signaling pathways of those 60 misregulated genes and include as Fig. 5E. It will be interesting if you restrict the signaling pathways related to early embryonic development. 5. Then, Fig 5E can be moved to Fig 6. This information is also inadequate. Please extend this figure by showing a table containing critical/exact role of these markers during embryonic polarity before and during gastrulation. Discussion section: This section should be modified according to the revision of results section (lines 370-409, and Fig 5) after considering my review comments, primarily focusing on GO and signaling terms affected in stage X – XIII/XIV hybrid embryos. Reviewer #2: The manuscript is about identifying the mis-regulated gene expression in blastoderms of interspecific chicken-Japanese quail F1 hybrids. Using transcriptome analysis, they have found that numerical abnormalities due to a segregation failure does not lead to the lethality of chicken–quail hybrid embryos, and that the developmental arrest at the pre-primitive streak stage in the hybrids is mainly caused by the downregulated expression of the genes involved in various biological processes such as translation and gastrulation. The manuscript lacks the idiographic information in several parts and needs extensive restructuring. Below are my specific comments mainly on the arrangement of materials and methods. 1. The manuscript is studying chicken (Male) and Japanese quail (Female) F1 hybrids. As well known, the fertilization and lethal rate of hybrids from the different combination is discrepancy. Have you looked at the gene expression of chicken (Female) and Japanese quail (Male) hybrids? If so, how about the result? If not, why? 2. Figures included in this manuscript are too blurry to look at the details. Please reupload figures with high resolution, especially Figure 1 and Figure 5. 3.The Figure legends in this manuscript should be corrected. 4. The statistics analysis needs to be corrected. Why were two different statistic methods used in the same analysis? For example, in Figure 2: the Tukey-Kramer test was used in panel A and B, while the Dunnet’s test was used in panel C and D. Besides, please explain why not use the Pearson’s test but Spearman’s rank in correlation coefficient analysis in Figure 4. 5. In Figure 2A, how do you explain the outliers in the Hybird group in panel A? In addition, the “A” is smaller than other alphabets, please correct the format of figure. 6. Discussion needs to be restructured explaining more about the impact of current findings in order to make the paper compelling for readers. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Transcriptome analysis revealed misregulated gene expression in blastoderms of interspecific chicken and Japanese quail F1 hybrids PONE-D-20-09946R1 Dear Dr. Matsuda, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Jae Yong Han, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Although the author's answer to the first question is vague, it does not affect the quality of the whole manuscript . In addition, I focused on the quality of the Figures in the manuscript, which were too blurry. Hope the author can provide clear original figures. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Deivendran Rengaraj Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-20-09946R1 Transcriptome analysis revealed misregulated gene expression in blastoderms of interspecific chicken and Japanese quail F1 hybrids Dear Dr. Matsuda: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof. Jae Yong Han Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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