Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 27, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-23287 A prospective pilot study assessing levels of preoperative physical activity and postoperative neurocognitive disorder among patients undergoing elective coronary artery bypass graft surgery PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Tasbihgou, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. In order to expedite the review of this paper, an academic editor along with 1 reviewer has read and reviewed your paper. As academic editor, I found the study to be an interesting one. I believe that pre and post cardiac rehab along with improved overall physical conditioning are very important in determining postoperative outcome. As a reviewer, I have also provided some points of thought for the authors. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 08 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Comments: 1.Inclusion criteria - Patients were required to be able to stand and walk independently --- does this mean that those using a walker or cane were excluded from the study ? These patients are frail, yet with the changing demographics of patient population, a larger % of such patients are being referred for surgery. Same goes for impaired hearing/eyesight --- we need to understand what degree of impairment was used as a cut-off. From sample size calculations, authors want to include 100 patients. However due to starting the prehab program, they were limited to 62 patients. Can authors please explain how they are expected to fulfil power for hypothesis testing after losing 31 patients ? 2.The paragraph on surgery and anesthesia can be removed. It does not contribute to the understanding of results. A simple statement “ Surgery was performed in the conventional manner with routine pre and postoperative care “ can suffice here. 3.I would recommend authors to combine tables 1/2/3 into a more concise format to present only that information that is being used to compare and report results in these patients. More details regarding the scale and components of the scale can be presented in the supplement, which interested readers can then see. Reducing these tables would help to improve the flow of the paper and prevent reader from being distracted by many different parameters. It appears that the authors are finally using the total activity score. 4.Table 5 --- Please present some values for hypothesis test results either conventional p-values or standardized differences, so that readers can get an understanding of how different these groups are. 5.Please allow the paragraphs to flow and include figure explanations inside the paragraph, rather than a separate sentence as done right now. 6.It would be important to know if any of these patients had recent NSTEMI prior to surgery. That may increase CRP levels. 7.Were any of the patients tested at 4 weeks part of a post-operative cardiac rehab program ? 8.Do authors have data on preoperative medications that may influence inflammation ? Statins and other medications on the basis of pleiotropic effect may change CRP levels. Authors have conducted an interesting study; it is likely that the study suffers from low sample size and hence cannot identify a difference in end-points between physically active and inactive. If authors have data regarding frail patients or those that on the basis of their criteria are too physically deconditioned to be a part of the study, I am thinking that such a group may serve as a good control to contrast the results that the authors found in this study. This is just a suggestion; not a recommendation. Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. 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The study demonstrated that physical activity did not show major impact on post operative outcomes, and to my knowledge is the first to handle this subject using SQUASH questionnaire for such assessment. Study conduct, data analysis and literature review were optimum English language was competent I was glad reading this manuscript and have no concerns about it Thank you ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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A prospective pilot study assessing levels of preoperative physical activity and postoperative neurocognitive disorder among patients undergoing elective coronary artery bypass graft surgery PONE-D-20-23287R1 Dear Dr. Tasbihgou, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Salil Deo Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): All comments have been answered and required modifications have been addressed. Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-23287R1 A prospective pilot study assessing levels of preoperative physical activity and postoperative neurocognitive disorder among patients undergoing elective coronary artery bypass graft surgery Dear Dr. Tasbihgou: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Salil Deo Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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