Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-03419 Running wheel exercise induces therapeutic and preventive effects on inflammatory stimulus-induced persistent hyperalgesia in mice. PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sartori, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by May 23 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors show the analgesic potential of running wheel exercise in the persistent hyperalgesia induced by repetitive inflammatory stimulus. The scientific logic flow to design and perform the experiments is clear. The manuscript is well written but a few points need to be addressed. 1. It is necessary a better description of the methodology. ¿what kind of wheels are you using (metallic or plastic, which size?), the animals shared the wheel or they have one wheel each, are the animals grouped in cages or isolated? 2. Electronic von Frey test is described as nociceptive test, but you are using it to measure mechanical hyperalgesia. Please do not mix both concepts. Page 5, lines 159 and 162. 3. As suggested by Cornier et al. 2017 and Pitcher et al. 2017, and even by the authors in the discussion section, the role of the endogenous opioid could be fundamental in the effect showed in the manuscript. Although was pointed by the authors that differently to pharmacological approaches the molecular mechanisms are less relevant in the exercise, I believe that in this publication is necessary to clarify the molecular mechanism to avoid confusions by methodological interferences as changes in the paw skin by the constant use of the wheels. For this reason, would be interesting to see if the analgesia produced by the wheels is avoided by the opioid antagonist naloxone and check the plasma corticosteroids. 4. The authors should homogenise the Y axes in the different figures to make them easily comparables. As example, figure 2B show flinches from 40 to 90 and Figure 7B show flinches from 0 to 120. Reviewer #2: ID: PONE-D-20-03419 These investigators injected the inflammatory mediator PGE2 or vehicle intraplantarly into the hindpaw of mice on a daily basis for 14 days and then at day 14 the injections were stopped and running wheels (or no wheel controls) were introduced to the mouse cages for 28 days. Mice were tested weekly for hindpaw von Frey hyperalgesia and at 7 and 14 days of PGE2 injection the mice had hyperalgesia. Having free access to the exercise wheel partially reduce hyperalgesia after 7, 14, 21, and 28 days of exercise. There were no differences in daily running distance between the vehicle and PGE2 injected mice. Capsaicin intraplantar injection caused increased flinching in no wheel/no PGE treatment group compared to vehicle treated or PGE2/wheel treated mice after 28 days of wheel access. These results indicate an analgesic effect of wheel exercise on PGE2 induced chronic von Frey hyperalgesia and capsaicin induced flinching, but not on daily distance running. Another experiment started with a 14 day course of daily PGE2 or vehicle intraplantar injections, then 14 days of running wheel access or no wheel access. There was no difference in the distance run/day between PGE2 and vehicle. Von Frey hindpaw threshold testing was performed weekly during the entire time period and for 14 days after the wheel access ended. The PGE2 mice developed von Frey hyperalgesia by day 7 of injections and wheel exercise starting at the end of the PGE2 treatment partially reversed this hyperalgesia and this effect persisted for 14 days after stopping wheel exercise. Capsaicin intraplantar injection caused no increased flinching in PGE2/wheel treated mice 14 days after wheel access. Another experiment started with a 14 day course of daily PGE2 or vehicle intraplantar injections, then 14 days of no treatment, then 14 days of running wheel access or no wheel access. There was no difference in the distance run/day between PGE2 and vehicle. The PGE2 mice developed von Frey hyperalgesia by day 7 of injections and wheel exercise starting at 14 days after the end of the PGE2 treatment partially reversed this hyperalgesia. Capsaicin intraplantar injection caused no increased flinching PGE2/wheel treated mice after 14 days of wheel access. Another experiment provided the mice with 28 days wheel access or no wheel access, starting at day 1, then after 8 days of wheel or no wheel access PGE2 or vehicle daily intraplantar injections were started for 14 days. The PGE2 mice did display a reduction in daily wheel running distance relative to the vehicle group. The PGE2/no wheel mice developed von Frey hyperalgesia by day 7 of PGE2 injections, but the PGE2/ wheel exercise group did not develop hyperalgesia. Capsaicin intraplantar injection caused no increased flinching PGE2/wheel treated mice after 14 days of wheel access. Theses results are novel and the experiments seem to be well performed but there are several issues. Major Concerns: 1. Repeated testing over time within the same groups of mice need to be analyzed with repeated measures 2 way ANOVA with Sidak post hoc testing. 2 The introduction and discussion need extensive revision with an English speaking editor. 3. There are many paragraphs in the introduction and discussion that are tangential or do not add to hypothesis or data, would recommend deleting lines 45-59, 76-78, 384-393, 418-422, 459-470. 4. There is no discussion regarding the mechanisms by which repeated PGE2 injections cause long lasting hyperalgesia. Dr Parada coauthored many papers on this topic with Dr Ferreira and it is surprising there is no discussion on how PGE2 injections cause long acting hyperalgesia by up-regulating the Nav1.8 sodium channels in the DRG, that PGE2 hyperalgesia is mediated by nonpeptidergic small sensory neurons that normally do not contribute to von Frey thresholds, and most importantly, that PGE2 induced mechanical hyperalgesia is mediated by DRG glutamate release acting on the NMDA receptor on DRG satellite cells. DRG satellite cells are immune cells capable of releasing proinflammatory cytokines and growth factors that may mediate chronic PGE2 sensitization. 5. The discussion of the prior literature on exercise analgesic mechanisms in rodent pain models is superficial and incomplete. More discussion of exercise suppression of pronociceptive immune responses is required and this should be tied into the crucial role of DRG satellite immune cells in PGE2 chronic hyperalgesia. The following papers should be included and reviewed; Lopez- Alvarez et al, Pain 2015: 156: 1812-25; Almeida et al, Pain 2015:156:504- 513; Cobianchi et al, Neuroscience 2010: 168: 273-287; Shi et al, Anesthesiology 2018: 129: 557-75. 6. This is a descriptive paper with no mechanism or hypothesis of a mechanism for the analgesic effects of exercise. Minor concerns: 1. Need to make clear in methods if mice were housed in individual cages and if they had the wheel in their cage 24 hours/day. 2. There is no information on the running wheels, vendor, or computerized data collection methods for measuring distance run/day? 3. Why did the authors inject the same amount and volume of PGE2 in mice as they previously used in rats, shouldn’t smaller doses and volumes be used in much smaller animals, please add to the discussion in a section on the limitations of the study. 4. All figure legends need to be on one page. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-20-03419R1 Running wheel exercise induces therapeutic and preventive effects on inflammatory stimulus-induced persistent hyperalgesia in mice. PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sartori, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Only one of the original reviewers were available to review your revision (see below for their comments). Both the reviewer and I agree that the manuscript reports a series of interesting studies. However, the Discussion lacks some critical view and insights into possible mechanisms. Currently the Discussion is mostly repetition of the results and how the results confirm some of the past literature. This does not meet the scientific standards required in PLOS ONE. Therefore, I would like to encourage authors to discuss possible mechanisms underlying their findings. Additionally, as the authors acknowledge that the molecular mechanisms is important, please include this in your discussion. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 26 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Running wheel exercise induces therapeutic and preventive effects on inflammatory stimulus-induced persistent hyperalgesia in mice. PONE-D-20-03419R2 Dear Dr. Sartori, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Amir-Homayoun Javadi, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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PONE-D-20-03419R2 Running wheel exercise induces therapeutic and preventive effects on inflammatory stimulus-induced persistent hyperalgesia in mice. Dear Dr. Sartori: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Amir-Homayoun Javadi Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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