Peer Review History
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PONE-D-19-35888 Implementation of Global Health Competencies: A Scoping Review on Target Audiences, Levels, and Pedagogy and Assessment Strategies PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Schleiff, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Jul 03 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is a timely piece of work and will make a strong contribution to the literature. The Discussion and Conclusion sections are well written and informative. The manuscript contains grammatical errors that must be corrected. Reviewer #2: I was excited to read this article and to learn from its review of the literatures on global health education competencies. The work the authors do in surveying this literature is undoubtedly useful, and, inter alia, it also helps further consolidate claims that a global health education field exists in the first place. I also found the paper to be clearly written and accessible. These qualities noted, I came away quite disappointed by the lack of actionable content in the article, as well as a sense of frustration with many areas of global health education (and competency) left unaddressed. In particular, it seems to me that the article fails to address the growing area of undergraduate global health education, including the many books and articles designed to teach college students about priorities and challenges in global health delivery. For example, all the work of the Harvard scholars involved in creating the influential textbook Reimagining Global Health, including their salutary emphasis on a ‘biosocial’ approach, was ignored. I also felt that wider work on cultural competency was sidelined, along with the sorts of work that is widely cited in global health on the challenges of global governance and humanitarianism amidst the inequalities of global development. At the same time, the sort of biomedical leadership taken by The Lancet’s Richard Horton in advancing new medical voices in global health was also ignored. Put together these sorts suggest a bigger weakness in the paper: namely, its failure to articulate and discuss clearly a widespread concern in global health education with ‘structural competency’ – a term often used to describe the learning objectives involved in being able to describe the social and economic determinants of unequal or bad health outcomes globally, as well as with the social forces that delimit how global health policy is developed in response. Relatedly, a whole vocabulary of terms developed by social scientists - medical anthropologists, sociologists and geographers all included – seemed to be missing from this article’s study and discussion. Such terms include those useful for describing global and structural forms of pathogenesis associated with globalization including ‘syndemics’, ‘biological citizenship’, and ‘biological sub-citizenship’, but they also extend to debates over global health delivery in the context of structural violence and neoliberal austerity, including debates over health systems strengthening, diagonalization and the problems of exclusion associated with vertical biomedical interventions in global health. Any competent account of global health competencies ought to be engaging with the literatures that future medical students and MPH students are reading about these terms. It should in turn discuss what sorts of milestones and metrics might be developed to measure how well students develop literacy in these critical global health areas. I hope that some major revisions to this paper can address some of these missed opportunities, and, for the same reason, I hope these comments are useful. Reviewer #3: GENERAL COMMENTS _________________ The manuscript by Schleif and colleagues attempted a comprehensive review of expectations for competency in global health, and how the competencies have been implemented in various context. There have been many developments in global health education over that past 3 decades, and such a review would be helpful, provided that it does not contribute to the growing confusion about terminologies and expectations for faculty and trainees, and those who practice what we are preaching. For example, there is deep confusion in this article about what global health is, and what it is not, with an attempt to split the difference by advocating the conflated phrase "global public health". The differences between and among public health, international health, global health, population health, one health, etc. have been debated extensively, from the perspective of scope and competencies overlap and distinctiveness. The review of 21 articles published over the past 18 years does not capture the nuances of the debates and in its present form, falls short of revealing themes that might advance the discussion. SPECIFIC COMMENTS _________________ Line 19: The abstract should include information about the pool of articles from which less than a third were selected, and the selection criteria, which was not described convincingly anywhere in the manuscript. Line 25: The abstract notes "360 evaluations" which is a confusing term, and should be explained to readers. The abstract also notes only two assessment methods, whereas three were described in the main text. Line 37: This is an extremely broad scope that conflates core public health and medicine. Describing global health with such broad scope renders it without distinction. The debate dates back to the differentiation of international health and global health, and now population health. For this exercise to be useful, the narrative must be more precise than presented here. Line 93: This is a very confusing terminology that conflates global health and public health. The first statement in the materials and methods section adds to the confusion. Line 101: The introduction section should have alerted readers that the paper has two foci. Until this point, the assumption is that this is all about global health, which is differentiated from public health. Line 104: This is not an ideal situation. The core foundational degree is typically public health, and additional training is essential to transfer skills to global health context, otherwise there is incompetence, and potential to make situations worse. Line 108: Extremely confusing logic (Global Public Health). Line 113: PUBLISHING LIMITED-, 14(3), pp.427-432. Haq, C., Rothenberg, D., Gjerde, C., Bobula, J., Wilson, C., Bickley, L., Cardelle, A. and Joseph, A., 2000. New world views: preparing physicians in training for global health work. FAMILY MEDICINE-KANSAS CITY-, 32(8), pp.566-572. Bunyavanich, Supinda, and Ruth B. Walkup. "US public health leaders shift toward a new paradigm of global health." American Journal of Public Health (2001): 1556-1558. Fineberg, H.V., Green, G.M., Ware, J.H. and Anderson, B.L., 1994. Changing public health training needs: professional education and the paradigm of public health. Annual review of public health, 15(1), pp.237-257. Schultz, S.H. and Rousseau, S., 1998. International health training in family practice residency programs. Family medicine, 30(1), pp.29-33. Neufeld, V., 1992. Training in international health: a canadian perspective. A North-South Debate, p.193. Davis, D., 1998. Global health, global learning. British Medical Journal, 316(7128), pp.385-390. Gebbie, K., Merrill, J. and Tilson, H.H., 2002. The public health workforce. Health Line 140: Why were the other articles rejected? Table 2 rightly includes some non-U.S. authors and context as global health is a global practice. What were the criteria for including these and perhaps rejecting others? Line 147: How were these identified? is this a systematic methodology or eyeballing? Page 17 (no line numbers): The abstracted noted only 2 types of assessments. Page 17: Define "360 evaluation" for readers or provide reference. Page 19, second paragraph: This statement about public health is likely to be met with deep resistance. I do not think that most public health professionals will accept the view that public health thinking was build on a foundation of clinical settings. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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PONE-D-19-35888R1 Implementation of Global Health Competencies: A Scoping Review on Target Audiences, Levels, and Pedagogy and Assessment Strategies PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Schleiff, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 10 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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