Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 14, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-04372 Mantle Cell Lymphoma with Gastrointestinal Involvement and the Role of Endoscopic Examinations PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Cho, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. In particular, as noted in the comments by reviewer 2, authors need to clarify whether the patients had standard or other treatment regimens for MCL and if so, these data should be included in the analyses. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 27 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: PONE-D-20-04372 Research Article Mantle Cell Lymphoma with Gastrointestinal Involvement and the Role of Endoscopic Examinations This is a well-written paper I have no hesitation in recommending it for publication following some minor tidy-up. The focus of the paper is well phrased. The authors state, "We also found that initial endoscopic examinations at the time of diagnosis revealed a considerable number of lesions that did not cause symptoms and could not be detected by CT or PET-CT." Therefore, gastrointestinal involvement with mantle cell lymphoma might have been missed during the initial workup in patients who did not undergo endoscopy examinations. This results in underestimation of GI involvement rate and may distort the analyses comparing between the GI-MCL and non GI-MCL groups. 1-1) It is recommended that the numbers of patients who underwent esophagogastroduodenoscopy, colonoscopy, and small intestinal endoscopy in both GI-MCL and non GI-MCL groups be specified in the Table 1. 1-2) This issue should be mentioned as one of the limitations of this study. Reviewer #2: This paper by Han Hee Lee et al describes a series of patients with mantle cell lymphoma (MCL) and the value of studying the involvement of the gastrointestinal (GI) tract. This is a retrospective study in a single center that includes 74 patients with MCL of whom 64 are analyzed. The description of the macroscopic involvement of the GI is clearly described, being the most interesting point of the study. Of value, they described the characteristics of the GI lesions (N=51) and how they are recognized by 3 different techniques (endoscopy, TC and PET). Finally, outcome impact of the GI involvement is analyzed in a univariate and multivariate analysis and here I see some weaknesses. However, some points need to be addressed: Major issues: Staging studies are very carefully described at recurrence, but not at diagnosis. Please, add and describe these procedures at diagnosis, in particular imaging techniques. Type of induction immunochemotherapy should be briefly described, for both young and elderly patients. In addition, the number of patients who are transplanted is very low (only 16 out of 64), and this is surprising due to the median age of the study population. Reason for endoscopic examinations were: abnormal findings at other imaging study, presence of GI symptoms, screening. Do all patients without GI symptoms or normal CTs go for GI endoscopies? How often was GI examination during follow-up? Does it include upper and lower endoscopy in all cases?. I am surprised by the high number of recurrences in the GI group, and even with a short follow-up. This is unexpected in my experience, especially in the rituximab era. According to the results of the paper, I will recommend upper endoscopy and colonoscopy to detect relapse for MCL patients but preferentially in those patients who had GI at diagnosis (22 cases: 81.5%). The low GI relapse rate in no-GI patients (2 cases: 11.1%) reduces the utility of GI follow-up in this grup. The authors recommend GI for all patients in follow-up. This should be revised in the paper. I understand that the GI recurrences were all macroscopic (and not microscopic). Is this right? Please, clarify. I miss type of treatment and maintenance with rituximab in the univariate (and multivariate) analysis for recurrence. I understand that this is a very important point because type treatment is totally relevant for outcome in MCL. In other words, outcome clearly depends on regimen type: R-CVP is worse than R-CHOP/R-DHAP. 19 patients were treated with “other regimens”. It would be interesting to know the regimen. Moreover, I would like to know if R-CHOP also includes patients who were treated with high doses of cytarabine. I believe very relevant the evaluation of the type of treatment in outcome (recurrence and survival) and this is more relevant than the variable transplantation, and this variable is included. Please, review. Conclusions are a bit strong considering the retrospective and relatively small number of cases. Please, review them. Minor issues: Table 2: O might be misleading for the reader: please, clarify. Pg. 13: medians and interquartile for age, but in table 1 you use median and range. Survival time is expressed in days, but in lymphoma is usually calculated in months or years. The value of these findings could be different in the era of BTK-inhibitors. 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Mantle Cell Lymphoma with Gastrointestinal Involvement and the Role of Endoscopic Examinations PONE-D-20-04372R1 Dear Dr. Cho, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Arun Rishi, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: "Mantle Cell Lymphoma with Gastrointestinal Involvement and the Role of Endoscopic Examinations" (PONE-D-20-04372R1). The authors have revised the manuscript according to the comments of the reviewers. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No |
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