Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 6, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-06618 First stage progression in women with spontaneous onset of labor: A large population-based cohort study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Lundborg, Please see my additional comments, below. - For minor revision. RCY Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 13 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): The reviews place this in the "minor revision" category, but actually some of the questions raised may require a bit of re-writing. Please respond to all reviewers' questions comments and questions, but both reviewers mention the censoring effects of C/S - please give this question extra attention. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review this excellent and significant manuscript. It adds another very large analysis to the obstetrical literature from another geographical region, describing the relationship between dilation and time using 3 different techniques. It confirms what all other recent studies have shown namely that, on average, dilation proceeds in a near exponential fashion not the sigmoid shape depicted in the traditional Freidman curves. In addition, the authors confirm the very wide variation in dilation rates and clearly state the problem that this large variation creates when one tries to use an “average” curve to manage labor. This conclusion is very important because generations of Obstetricians have been taught to evaluate labor based on a presumed average curve with relatively narrow variation in the rates of expected progress. Although there is now wide acceptance that the dilation curve is not sigmoid in shape, nor linear after 3 cm, there is less appreciation that there is no substantial clustering (central tendency) of patients around an “average”. That is, while it is always possible to contruct a mathematical average, few patients actually follow this mathematical average. Bravo for stating this so explicitly and repeatedly throughout this paper. In addition, results indicated that NTSV Swedish women progressed faster in early first stage compared to findings the in USA based publications (Zhang 2010) and faster compared to 2 subsaharan countries women (Oladapo 2018). In late first stage, Swedish women progressed more slowly than the rates reported for USA women and similar to those reported for the Ugandan and Nigerian women. There are a few points worth mentioning in the discussion. Developing a model with precision: The general problem of modeling a process (in this case, cervical dilation) with precision: The authors have demonstrated excessively wide variation when the model is based on only parity and time. It would be useful to discuss the known causes of poor modeling precision such as imprecise measurements and unmeasured influential factors. The observation that model precision improved when the models are restricted to higher and higher admission dilations suggest that some unmeasured factors may become more homogeneous with advancing labor. Cervical effacement, contraction strength and frequency, epidural use and censoring due to intrapartum cesarean are candidates. Entry point and the effect of incomplete effacement: Re comparisons of traverse time at low dilations. You noted a faster median time to advance from 3 to 4 cm in the Swedish women 0.83h (95th 4.97) compared to USA 1.8h( 95th 8.1) and compared to 2 subSaharn African countries 2.8h (95th 13.3) I presume these are Uganda and Nigerian women based on other more detailed publications by Oladapo et al. The inclusion criteria in this Swedish study were women with singleton, term, vertex presentations and spontaneous onset of labor and vaginal birth. Exclusion for < 3 examinations, missing exam at 10 cm, Apgar 5 min <7, or any of diagnosis related to HIE or meconium aspiration. The onset of active labor was defined as the presence of regular painful contractions and a well effaced cervix and a dilation of 3cm or rupture of membranes with a dilation of 3 cm. Zhang et al 2010 included NTSV patients with spontaneous onset of labor without a requirement for a specific dilation (10% had a dilation of 1 cm or less) or a requirement for a specific effacement ( 10% had an admission effacement of 60% or less. Please present the comparative statistics on the admission examination findings because the state of the cervix on admission has a large influence on rates of dilation in the beginning. Censoring effect of cesarean: The NTSV cesarean rates in Sweden are much lower than in the USA and perhaps more comparable to that in the Oladapo studies. In the LAPS study, Swedish CS rates in NTSV in 2014 were approximately 9.5% before the intervention. In the USA CS rates for NTSV were approximately 27.5% in 2007 (Zhang et al 2010, women mostly from 2005- 7) Please comment on how the removal of more patients for labor disorders could affect the dilation rates in the residual population used for modeling. I agree that maternal and fetal anthropomorphic differences can account for some differences but this censoring effect could be present as well and bears mentioning. Recommendations for clinical practice drawn from a study of “normal” labors. You have commented very carefully on how labor curves and your findings could help direct management. I think it would be very useful to remind the reader that any study that intentionally excludes all abnormal outcomes cannot determine the safety of a particular intervention threshold. Reviewer #2: This paper used a large electronic obstetric database to examine the labor pattern and duration of first stage of labor. The analysis was well done and the paper clearly written. The findings are reasonable and potentially useful clinically. To improve this paper, several issues need more attention by the authors: 1. What was the overall CS rate in this study population? What was the proportion of prelabor vs. intrapartum CS? Given that the overall CS rate in Sweden (18%?) is low and intrapartum CS rate is even lower, the observed longer duration of labor at the 95th percentile than that in the Zhang's data appears reasonable as the U.S. overall CS rate is over 30%. This could be one of the explanations for the difference between the studies. 2. Ideally, the following women should also be excluded from the study: women with a scarred uterus, postpartum hemorrhage or III or IV degree perineal laceration. This may also address the issue stated on Line 180-181 in Strength and limitation. 3. The authors defined "the first stage of labor" and "onset of active phase" but in the paper, they never really showed any results that were associated with these two definitions. If it is true, then I'd suggest not to mention them as these definitions are still controvercial. 4. The median cervical dilation at admission was 5 cm. Thus, the admission seems a little late, comparing to other databases. What was the median effacement? 5. The number of vaginal exams tended to be at low side. The authors may want to discuss the impact of fewer data points on the results. 6. Women who were admitted at different phases of labor may differ in terms of labor progression. How that may have affected the results? Some discussion is needed. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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PONE-D-20-06618R1 First stage progression in women with spontaneous onset of labor: A large population-based cohort study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Lundborg, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Please see my comments below. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 19 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Roger C. Young Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (if provided): This revision is significantly improved. I would like you to consider the following suggestions. To emphasize, these are suggestions only and I leave open the opportunity for you to not include them in the final version if you so choose. Abstract: Results: 1. ,[the rate of] cervical dilation accelerates ... 2. Among nulliparous women, the median time [found in our population] was faster [than] their counterparts... 3. Among nulliparous and multiparous women [our data] suggest that ... [, however, ] traverse time at and beyond.....is [slower] than 1 cm per hour. Conclusions: 1. ...widely and [labors experiencing a prolonged first stage] can still... 2. 1 cm [per hour cervical dilation rate for the first stage of labor] may not be [universally] meaninful. 3. ... differences in progression[for women] in different populations. 4. [For] prolonged labor progression [to be more clinically meaningful, the] association with adverse birth outcomes needs to be further investigated [in specific populations]. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. 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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-20-06618R2 First stage progression in women with spontaneous onset of labor: A large population-based cohort study Dear Dr. Lundborg: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Roger C. Young Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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