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PONE-D-20-14602 The Influence of Culture on Open Defecation in Selected Basic Schools in Ghana PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Yirenya-Tawiah, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 26 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please include captions for your Supporting Information files at the end of your manuscript, and update any in-text citations to match accordingly. Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): General comment: Extensive English language correction is deemed necessary throughout the manuscript. LINE 67 and 77: to correct the duplicate of mentioning 'aspects of the larger study' and also needed to cite a reference for that larger study. Has it been published elsewhere? LINE 77: to clarify 'sought to understand other behavioural factors that influenced OD behaviour' Does it mean 'cultural factors'?? To add the sample size determination and the sampling procedure of the quantitative component To add details of how qualitative data was collected by FGD by following COREQ guidelines; this component was too sketchy and incomplete. To clarify how meaningful interpretations on cultural drivers of OD have been done by quantitative and qualitative findings [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? 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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: PONE-D-20-14602 The Influence of Culture on Open Defecation in Selected Basic Schools in Ghana This manuscript is a mixed-methods study describing factors associated with open defaecation among basic school students in Ghana. While the manuscript is of some interest, I do not think the manuscript in its current form is of sufficient interest and quality to warrant publication in PLOS ONE. I suggest the authors to look for STROBE check list for cross-sectional studies to ensure reporting is complete and transparent. My sense is that the manuscript could be strengthened by several modest changes as outlined below. General comments -The authors should use the uniform font style and font size. -The manuscript is not well-written and needs to be edited by a native English speaker. Necessary to check grammar and spellings. -Abbreviate first before using short form. -Note that writing a manuscript is not the same as writing thesis and it should be built not only with concise and clear statements but also all the required information are included. INTRODUCTION -Introduction section is not well organized. -Some sentences are duplicating [E.g. Line 66 and 77] -Introduction section needs to include What is the problem and its supporting details? What is the added value from the study and why are you conducting it? - Both globally and locally -The adverse consequences of open defaecation and its supporting data is missing in the introduction. METHODS -The whole section of Methods needs to be rewritten. I would suggest the authors to prepare by the STROBE check list. Many items necessary to be described are missing. -Sampling procedure: The sampling procedure needs to provide more detail. How schools were chosen in the selected districts? How many students were eligible? Any eligibility criteria? How were they selected? Equal proportion for 4 schools? Gender based selection? Residence based selection? -Data analysis: It is not clear and should be described in detail. The analysis section should reflect fully to the results that you presented in the study. So also, the way you calculated moderating effect size needs to be described. -Need to explain qualitative part in more detail: FGDs or Interviews? KII? Any criteria for selection? -What are the operation definition of “Open defaecation intention” and “Open defaecation behavior”? RESULTS -The authors tend to cover all information in the text and again in the table. You should only include the most important details in the text when you also have a table. -Mean age always come with SD. -Any reasons for stratification of age groups? Age stratification is different by tables – it should be same -Percentages are not included in all the data. -I could not find all your cultural variables S1-4, T1-3, TV1-2 and TB in the results section. I only see one question “Defaecating outside toilet signifies continuation of ancestral ways of life” as traditional norms and same applied to T and TV. Does it a composite measure? And the way you calculated should be described in the Methods section. -Any reasons behind for cross-tabulating cultural variables with background characteristics? -There is lacking linkage between qualitative and quantitative results. -Too many tables some of which can be combined. Figure 1 and 3 may not be necessary. DISCUSSION -The discussion is weak in light of the findings. The discussion section should be rewritten. The ideas are incoherently mixed together. The discussion needs to focus on the key implications of the data with a separate paragraph for each concept. -Check the sentence in discussion “Our study showed most of the rural schools to have less quality toilet facilities than the urban schools.” I do not find it in your results. REFERENCES -Number in the references were overlapped and as a result, citations and provided references are not matched. -Why data from 2013 require when updated 2019 data is available? [Check Ref. 2 and 3 by WHO and UNICEF] Reviewer #2: First of all, I am thankful to editor for inviting me to write the review for this manuscript. The authors have done a good job and described all section of manuscript in sufficient detail. My suggestions for further improving the manuscript are as follows: Introduction section is well written. Authors explained the rationale behind their study. However I suggest making this section concise and crispy. Particularly, few details in first three Para may be omitted or concisely written. Methodology section: Line 89-91 need not be mentioned in methods as already been mentioned in introduction. There is no mention of sample size estimation and selection of study sample. Justification for using Cronbach’s Alpha reliability test can be given. Details of qualitative data collection is not provided such as subjects and numbers of FGD, Who were interviewed etc. I couldn’t understand Line 161 (The AMOS was development to satisfy the data process demand from research effort) Result: Table 3-6 is redundant and should be deleted or reduced in number as information given in running text is more than adequate. Discussion The discussion section is well written compared to other sections. Any strength or limitation could have also been mentioned. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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The Influence of culture on open defaecation in some basic schools in selected districts in Ghana: A preliminary study PONE-D-20-14602R1 Dear Dr. Yirenya-Tawiah, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Khin Thet Wai, MBBS, MPH, MA (Population & Family Planning Resear Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-14602R1 The Influence of culture on open defaecation in some basic schools in selected districts in Ghana: A preliminary study Dear Dr. Yirenya-Tawiah: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Khin Thet Wai Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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