Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 9, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-21329 Causes and trends in liver disease and hepatocellular carcinoma among men and women who received liver transplants in the U.S., 2010-2019. PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Samuel K So, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript within 60 days. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Wang S and co-authors in the current paper evaluated the different causes for liver transplant (LT), in US, during the last 10 years on the base of OPTN data. Their results reflect with accuracy the changes occurring in the etiologies of liver diseases, including HCC, in the last decade in their country. This analysis is of interest and reports several information that deserve attention. These indications seem also useful to design public health system future strategies. I just have minor comments: 1) How many HBV transplanted patients were actually HBV-HDV coinfected? Is it possible to retrieve this information from the database? This should be interesting since delta infection is considered aggressive and it is still in search of an adequate therapy. Please comment. 2) When a patient had a concurrent or previous infection with HCV (recently cured with DAA) and alcohol or NASH as cofactor, how was the final diagnosis ruled out?? Please comment. 3) Morbid obesity (>40 BMI) has been considered in the last decades as a possible absolute contraindication to LT by several centers. Do the authors believe that the increase of LT in NASH may be dependent, almost in part, by change of this attitude in recent years? Are there any data on this issue on OPTN database? Please comment. Reviewer #2: In this paper the authors used the data from the national Organ Procurement and Transplant Network (OPTN) concerning the indication for liver transplants to examine all causes and trends in liver disease and hepatocellular carcinoma (HCC) among adults who received liver transplants in the past 10 years. The study found NAFLD in 2017 in women and ALD in 2019 in men have surpassed HCV as the leading causes of liver disease and HCC among adults receiving liver transplants. This is a timely and interesting paper. However different major points need to be clarified and discussed. Major comments: 1) In this paper the authors merged two distinct categories of patients for each etiology, the ones with cirrhosis and the one with HCC. Moreover, the authors analyzed the changing trends of the etiologies of liver diseases in USA. Natural history of the liver diseases analyzed are very different, in particular with respect the risk of HCC development and the oncogenic potential of each etiologic factors. In my opinion having merged cirrhotic with HCC patients in the analysis of the time trends of the etiology may not reflect the ongoing scenario. Indeed, HCC development characterize the patients with the longer course of the diseases. Perhaps analyzing separately, the liver cirrhosis with respect the HCC can give different results and can be very informative with respect the real and future scenario of the epidemiology of liver diseases and liver transplantation. In case this is not feasible, please discuss this point and compare if possible these results with papers where the HCC and liver cirrhosis have been maintained separated. 2) The recent but largely accepted proposal to establish positive criteria to diagnose the Metabolic Associated Fatty Liver Disease (MAFLD), with new and easy diagnostic criteria need to be discussed. In particular, it will be nice to underline how the NAFLD diagnosis have been established with respect the use of alcohol, and if possible to evaluate how many of the NAFLD diagnosed patients also respect the MAFLD diagnosis. 3) Since this topic is very debated, I would like to see and compare the results of the papers facing the same topic of the changing etiology of transplanted HCC. 4) The diagnosis of NAFLD, ALD, cryptogenic, and metabolic liver cirrhosis should be carefully and precisely defined. 5) It should be mentioned whether other risk factors of NAFDL/MAFLD are known, e.g., DM II, metabolic syndrome, etc... 6) Many patients with cryptogenic liver cirrhosis had in their clinical history previous diagnosis of metabolic risk factors, which may also disappear as the liver disease evolves. When in the anamnesis we retrieve these factors, even if not present more, we prefer to attribute the etiology to NAFLD rather than to unknown causes. 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Causes and trends in liver disease and hepatocellular carcinoma among men and women who received liver transplants in the U.S., 2010-2019. PONE-D-20-21329R1 Dear Dr. Samuel K So, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Gianfranco D. Alpini Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been nicely addressed in this version. The manuscript seems ameliorated significantly ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-20-21329R1 Causes and trends in liver disease and hepatocellular carcinoma among men and women who received liver transplants in the U.S., 2010-2019. Dear Dr. So: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Gianfranco D. Alpini Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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