Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-18472 Analysis of land cover evolution within the built-up areas of provincial capital cities in northeastern China based on nighttime light data and Landsat data PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sun, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 14 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please ensure that you refer to Figures 8-10 in your text as, if accepted, production will need this reference to link the reader to the figure. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): (1)A professional language editing is required. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. 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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The research of this paper is valuable. However, the manuscript does not sufficiently explain the scientific significance of the research presented in the manuscript. Some of my observations are given below: Line 46: If this paper focuses on land cover evolution, should I expect the introduction to start with previous theories on land cover evolution, rather than those build-up area extraction? The Landsat data built-up area extraction method using maximum likelihood method is a supervised classification method, which requires manual selection of training samples. Why not use the unsupervised classification method, which can improve the automaticity of the method? All formulas are edited using the Formula Editor (Mathtype software) Figure 2 and Figure 3 need to be added the results of the remaining two cities. The background color of Figure 3 (b) needs to be set to white. The headings of sections 3.2.1 and 3.2.1 shall be consistent with sections 2.2.1 and 2.2.1. Table 4: What is the meaning of Me. In the chapter of discussion and conclusion, I suggest to discuss the significance of studying provincial capital cities in northeastern China and the shortcomings of the method in this paper. Reviewer #2: The article focuses on an important issue, concerning the assessment of land cover evolution, by using remote sensing data. To describe the approach proposed and the model developed, the Authors have presented a case-study related to three major cities in China, analyzing the time interval from 2000 to 2012. I only have one major issue in this paper which is about the introduction. The introduction started with general background regarding the impact of urbanization and land use and land cover change. Then, in the same paragraph the authors jumped to the data used to extract built-up areas using satellite data and they deeply discussed advanced information such as selection of threshold and segmentation of the nighttime light data. This information is not linked with the topic sentence in the beginning of the paragraph. I suggest to break down this paragraph to be two paragraphs. The first paragraph provides a general information regarding urbanization and land use and land cover change, and the second paragraph deals with the used method to extract built-up information from satellite data. I suggest that the second paragraph discuss the current research status of land cover evolution analysis. Line 234: What is the basis of the 5 landscape indexes selected and why other indexes were not selected? Line 262: It is an important process to extract built-up areas using DMSP/OLS or Landsat data alone, and listing corresponding results is helpful to the integrity of the experiment. Figure 4 needs to have a geographic grid, compass and scale; the lines of indication in Figure 4 (a) and (b) should not cross; the main figure should have a mark. Lines 117 and 123: Why the selected data are from 2000 to 2012? Reasons should be mentioned. Figure 6 and Figure 7. The placement of group figures needs to be adjusted. Figure 11. Text and curve proportion are not in harmony and need to be adjusted. Take into account the current state of remote sensing data. 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Analysis of land cover evolution within the built-up areas of provincial capital cities in northeastern China based on nighttime light data and Landsat data PONE-D-20-18472R1 Dear Dr. Sun, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Bing Xue, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-18472R1 Analysis of land cover evolution within the built-up areas of provincial capital cities in northeastern China based on nighttime light data and Landsat data Dear Dr. Sun: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Professor Bing Xue Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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