Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 24, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-02225 Local guidelines for admission to UK midwifery units compared with national guidance: a national survey using the UK Midwifery Study System (UKMidSS) PLOS ONE Dear Dr Rowe, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by May 31 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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[Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear authors I have read your manuscript with interest. The survey is important to enable equal services and evidence based care for labouring women, although it is important to allow for some local variations to reflect local settings and resources. The method used is adequate to investigate the matter. I find the text well written and easy to understand. The pragmatic approach and easy to understand descriptive statistics are adequate to present differences in admission guidelines and represent real life practice. The results showed guidelines both with more inclusive as well as more restrictive criteria and it is interesting to see that 55-67 percent allowed for higher parity, age and BMI. The results might be useful in revision of local and national guidelines. Figure 1 could include reasons for numbers of guidelines analysed Reviewer #2: This paper presents information that will be of interest to midwives; particularly those working in or interested in working in MUs. The paper tends to focus on England specific policy and MU provision. However, it is reporting on a national survey using the UKMidSS and should therefore provide information on the four countries of the UK. Specific examples of where this has not happened are included below but are apparent throughout the paper. This is particularly important as MUs are generally growing in number outside of England. For example: References to support the assertion in the first sentence should include those from all of the 4 countries in the UK, not just England, for example, Better Start (2017); NI Maternity Strategy (2012). Also at the end of paragraph one, references should include those from all of the 4 countries in the UK, not just England. NHS relates to NHS Scotland, NHS Wales and England - in Northern Ireland, the health service is referred to as Health and Social Care (HSC) which reflects the integrated service provision of health and social care. Consideration should be given to using using the term maternity care provider, rather than NHS organisations. P.3, the numbers of MUs in England is detailed but not the rest of the UK; the number of MUs in all countries of the UK should be provided. P.6 Data was extracted by CG; was the data extraction validated i.e. was it checked by anyone else and if not, why not? It is stated 'We compared each criterion listed in each guideline...'; it should indicate which authors did that. P.7 Under ‘More inclusive’ than NICE CG190: it states 'Criteria for which NICE CG190 recommends OU birth, but where the MU offered individual assessment for women planning admission'- but NICE advocates multidisciplinary discussion and individualised assessment for women if necessary. P. 8 Under Analysis, need to remind the reader what the 'other sources' were. P.10 You state that 'Almost a third of guidelines (30%) did not list the author(s) or a guideline development group'. However, of those that did include authorship, it would have been interesting to know how the MU guidelines had been developed, for example were they co-produced with women, were they multidisciplinary or developed by midwives only. P.11 Table 2, should make it clear that number of births in NHS organisation. You state 'had a small number of variant criteria (1-5) and a small number of these were otherwise similar in layout', I would suggest replacing the second 'a small number' with 'not many'. P.14- You state- 'Few guidelines (<8%) were fully aligned with national guidance'- however as stated in CG190 P.81-'Putting recommendations into practice can take time. How long may vary from guideline to guideline, and depends on how much change in practice or services is needed. Implementing change is most effective when aligned with local priorities'. It is important to remember that local guidelines may be developed for where individual services are or where they want to get to and may align more fully with regional guidelines as services develop and MU midwives develop their experience, knowledge and skills. Where more than one MU uses the same guideline, it may require a guideline to be less or more restrictive to meet the needs of the evolutionary stage of each of the MUs using the guideline. P.15- you state- 'This is the first UK-wide study to document AMU admission policy'-what about FMUs? P.16- You state- 'none of the guidelines reviewed mentioned gestation in relation to late booking or fragmented antenatal care'.; does social services input cover this? P.17 You state the need to be careful that guidelines 'do not disproportionately deny access to midwifery-led care for women from minority and socioeconomically deprived backgrounds- is social services input criteria and the inclusion of <16 years by some guidelines an attempt to address this to some degree? P.18. You state -Whilst half of guidelines listed a referral pathway' it should be- Whilst half of the guidelines reviewed listed a referral pathway- please amend. P.18 It is interesting that you state that women and midwives.. 'who are working to navigate risk in their discussions about birth place choices'.[54, 56]. It is important to consider that risk is often only raised when MU and Home are considered as place of birth. There are many iatrogenic risks of giving birth in an OU, but these are rarely discussed with women. It would have been interesting to ask MU's whose guidance did not align with NICE guidance, why this was the case? The supporting information files, provide useful additional data, although not all of te titles reflect the content of the tables, e.g. table 1 (S3). However, a table detailing the number of FMU's/AMUs in each of the four countries of the UK would be helpful. There are some minor typos, please proof read again following amendments. I hope this feedback is helpful. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Local guidelines for admission to UK midwifery units compared with national guidance: a national survey using the UK Midwifery Study System (UKMidSS) PONE-D-20-02225R1 Dear Dr. Rachel Rowe, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Sharon Mary Brownie Academic Editor PLOS ONE Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: Dear authors I find this paper well written and interesting and had very few comments to the text in the first round. I do see that you now have taken my comments into consideration as well as the comments from reviewer #2. Reviewer #2: My sincere apologies for ny delay in returning my review but this was unavoidable due to other workload and leave. I feel that the authors have responded positively and fully to my comments. Please add HSC Trusts to the statements that refer to NHS Trusts and Health Boards ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-20-02225R1 Local guidelines for admission to UK midwifery units compared with national guidance: a national survey using the UK Midwifery Study System (UKMidSS) Dear Dr. Rowe: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Professor Sharon Mary Brownie Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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