Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 27, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-26975 Increasing salinity of fibrinogen solvent generates stable fibrin hydrogels for cell delivery or tissue engineering PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Jacot, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 12 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: General Comments: The paper entitled ‘Increasing salinity of fibrinogen solvent generates stable fibrin hydrogels for cell delivery or tissue engineering’ describes a new method to generate fibrin hydrogels with desirable degradation properties through simple changes in the salinity of the precursor solution. The authors used a high salinity solution during the formation of the hydrogel to create an optically clear gel that has the ability to resist degradation and improved potential as a scaffold for the delivery of stem cells. The paper is well written and easy to read. The methods used to create the hydrogel are simple and have the potential to be used to generate tailored scaffolds. The paper suitable for publication if the following minor comments are addressed. The paper needs to address the following minor concerns: 1. When referencing temperatures there needs to be consistency (sometimes the authors include the degree symbol and at other times not). 2. Figure 2C - Is there a statistical difference between your average fiber diameters for the PS and HS gels? While the SEM images look different, the data in the table doesn’t communicate if there is a significant difference. 3. Figure 3 – You should indicate where the live/dead stain and the stain for cell type change. You use the same color scheme and don’t indicate on the figure that they are different. This can lead to some confusion for the reader as the entire figure seems to be about the live/dead stain. 4. You don’t mention in your introduction or in the text why you chose to use papain as a degradation facilitator instead of plasmin. You need to explain your choice to use papain over plasmin when evaluating your degradation profiles? 5. You don’t provide gelation time data with increasing salinity. Gelation time data is fundamental and also particularly relevant when trying to understand fiber diameter and gel porosity data. If this data is available it should be included. 6. There is a spelling error in line 25 of the conclusions: “Howeer…” 7. Figure 5G – what does the tiny arrow indicate? There is nothing in the text or in the figure caption describing what the arrow is pointing to or why it is significant. This needs to be addressed. Reviewer #2: Study goals were aimed at developing a slowly-degrading (“stable”) fibrin gel capable of supporting 1) the proliferation and differentiation of various stem cell types, 2) the development of a rudimentary capillary-like network in vitro, and 3) delivery and maintenance of cells in vivo without the need for degradation inhibitors. Studies generated fine, transparent high-salt (HS) fibrin gels and compared these with current opaque physiologic-salt (PS) fibrin gels. The HS fibrin gels degraded 2-3 36 times slower and did not interfere with cell viability. Overall, this is a very nice and well-organized study. Concerns are minor. Major Comments: It is unclear why these are called fibrin hydrogels (in the title and throughout) instead of PEG hydrogels since the PEG is the dominant concentration at 10:1. Minor Comments: 1. For soft or viscous materials, typically a spherical AFM tip is recommended over a pyramidal tip. 2. Figure 1 – It is incorrect to present data from high concentrations to low concentrations. The low concentration should be closest to zero on the x-y axis. 3. You need to comment on why your results that fibrin opacity does not depend on CaCl2 concentration or pH were different compared with literature. 4. Fig 3 presents capillary-like network formations (Figs 3A-H) before viability. However, the viability is discussed first in the text. Please reverse the order in the figures so the viability data is first and aligns with the order discussed in the text. 5. If you want to increase impact, I suggest quantifying the vessel diameters in your gels. It appears that your HS gel is making finer sized vessels. The field has a hard time generating truly capillary-sized vessels, so this achievement could also be emphasized here. 6. It is surprising that you aren’t getting any vascular cell integration in vitro with either material. Please comment on why. Reviewer #3: Title: Increasing salinity of fibrinogen solvent generates stable fibrin hydrogels for cell delivery or tissue engineering. Authors: Dillon K Jarrell, Ethan J Vanderslice, Mallory L Lennon, Anne C Lyons, Mitchell C VeDepo and Jeffrey Jacot Summary: This research was done to improve the stability and lengthen the degradation period of fibrin gels.The contribution of this research lies in finding a way to enhance the stability of fibrin gels using a simple method of increasing the NaCl concentration and avoiding the use of fibrin degradation inhibitors, such as ε-aminocaproic acid, which have been shown to affect cellular processes. General comments: The article does not read well and there were some inconsistencies that are further described below. There was an instance of overinterpretation and the flow of ideas in relation to figure presentation was not sequential which may confuse the reader. It is recommended that the authors carefully reevaluate the manuscript and consider the comments below. Major comments: • Swelling ratio section in methodology needs a little more explanation. Where the gels dehydrated first and then rehydrated? What was the formula used to calculate this ratio? • Line 41 states that the reason of this homogeneity might be chlorine concentration that is able to alter the polymerization of 10mg/mL fibrinogen. This might be an overinterpretation since no other chlorine salt was used to measure the elastic moduli of these fibers. Furthermore, if chlorine is involved in the polymerization of fibrinogen, and if transparency and elastic modulus correlate, then increasing the calcium chloride concentration should have also increased transparency (figure 1B). However, that does not occur. What was the elastic moduli of the gels with variable calcium chloride concentrations? • Line 42 page 16 the authors said, “to investigate this hypothesis, 200 mM gels were chosen for SEM analysis”. They should refer the reader to figures 2A and 2B. How does these images investigate the hypothesis that chloride ions are altering fibrinogen concentration? And why was 200 mM NaCl used instead of 250 mM? • Figure 3 A to H are low quality images. Furthermore, it seems there is inconsistent magnification between the figures. Figure 3A seems to be lower magnification than figure 3B as the cells look smaller in A than in B. In the caption, the sentence “scale bars 50 um” is cut off (figure 3 caption page 29). • Why were nude mice chosen for injection? Would it not be more suitable to use a healthy animal model to assess the immune response to such gels? The authors also mentioned that "the host innate immune system" (even though we are talking about nude mice) was able to degrade the PS gels. Are the authors suggesting that the HS gels evaded the host innate immune system? Would a healthy immune system degrade the HS gels as fast as the nude mice immune system degrades the PS gels? • fig 6A-D. these figures do not clearly show spheroid formation. I suggest using a dotted line to outline the spheroids... Minor comments: • Minor spelling and grammatical mistakes found. • Line 31 page 15 says 250 mM was chosen for the rest of the experiments yet in figure 2B and 2C 200 mM NaCl was chosen, even though in other figures 250mM was chosen again in other figures. • Line 41 page 16 mentions that elastic moduli were more homogenous at NaCl concentrations greater than 200 mM. 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