Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-26780 Ccr2 suppression by minocycline in Cx3cr1/Ccr2-visualized inherited retinal degeneration PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kohno, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Neither of the expert reviewers felt that your results fully support the conclusions you have drawn from them. In addition one of the reviewers indicated that your title and abstract were imprecise and confusing. Both reviewers provided detailed critiques that should help you in revising the paper. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 19 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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[Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This manuscript describes the effect of minocycline, an approved antibiotic that has also been investigated clinically in neurodegenerative diseases of the retina and CNS, on a mouse model of inherited retinal degeneration. The manuscript focuses on the population of innate immune cells in the outer retina during degeneration, correlating them to the amount of PR degeneration that occurs. The authors found that in this model, systemic minocycline resulted in a decreased prevalence of CCR2+ cells in the outer retina that correlated with a reduction in photoreceptor degeneration. This work is relevant and topical in that (1) modulating neuroinflammatory drivers of inherited retinal degenerations is a therapeutic strategy under current investigation, and (2) the functional roles of innate immune cell types (microglia and monocytes) are unknown and a subject of recent scrutiny. The manuscript can be improved by establishing more clarity in the number of points in the results and discussion. 1. Title: The current title is ambiguous and can benefit from rephrasing. Both “Ccr2 suppression” and “Cx3cr1/Ccr2-visualized” terms are imprecise and hard to understand. I suggest stating the main conclusions in the title: “Minocycline administration diminishes CCR2-positive monocyte number in the retina and ameliorates photoreceptor degeneration in a mouse model of retinitis pigmentosa”. 2. Abstract: The terms here and elsewhere relating to the suppression of Ccr2 expression are imprecise. What the authors document here is a decrease in the prevalence of CCR2-RFP+ cells in the outer retina and RPE layers with minocycline. Whether this finding resulted from the decreased recruitment of CCR2-expressing monocytes versus the actual suppression of CCR2 expression in monocytes resulting in a decrease in RFP-fluorescence is not investigated. The authors may want to reconsider the use of terms that indicate that CCR2 expression is decreased in individual monocytes from minocycline’s action (like “CCR2 suppression” ). The authors should pay attention to the CCR2 vs. Ccr2 case nomenclature throughout the manuscript to make sure the correct term is used for gene and protein names. The abstract can probably be shortened with the omission of methodological detail. 3. Results: It is important for the authors to establish what is being referred to as Cx3cr1-positive, Ccr2-positive and Cx3cr1/Ccr2 dual-positive cells are indeed GFP+/RFP-, GFP-/RFP+, and GFP+/RFP+ cells respectively. I had been looking throughout the manuscript for a confirmatory statement of this but I was not able to find it. The confusion is increased in Fig 2 and 3 in which the numbers in A-4, B-4, and C-4 do not match corresponding numbers in F, G, and H; in F, G, and H; dual-positive cells constitute the smallest constituency of all 3 cellular groups for all 3 conditions but in the pie charts, they consistently outnumber CCR2-postive cells. Without harmonizing this confusion, it is not possible to fully understand the data. 4. Results: The ameliorative effect of minocycline on ONL thickness is actually quite minor and localized, leading one to wonder if it can be validated if more experimental numbers are accumulated. As such, the reference to this difference as “rescue” may be wording it too strongly. For smaller effects like this, more evidence is often desired to strengthen the conclusion, these include: (a) a dose dependent effect (i.e. more amelioration with higher doses of minocycline, like 100mg), (b) independent method of ascertaining ONL thickness (e.g. with in vivo OCT measurements), and (c) other measurements of PR death (e.g. TUNEL labeling of apoptotic cells, length of outer segments, counting cone density etc). If these are available, they can help strengthen the conclusion that minocycline confers protection in this model. 5. Discussion: The authors can focus more on interpreting the main findings of the manuscript, asking the questions of (a) whether minocycline inhibits infiltration of CCR2-expressing monocytes into the outer retina, or whether CCR2+ monocytes are converted into dual positive cells, to CX3CR1+, CCR2- cells, or even to CX3CR1-, CCR2- cells (which may render them undetectable in this assay) and (b) whether this effect of minocycline on CCR2-expressing monocytes is causally connected with the amelioration of PR degeneration, and if so, by what putative mechanisms. These discussion points follow directly from the main results and should constitute the main content of the discussion. Reviewer #2: In this manuscript Terauchi et al investigate the effect of minocycline on CX3CR1+CCR2- microglial cells, and CX3CR1+CCR2+ and Cx3cr1-CCR2+ monocytes/macrophages. Using their previously published Mertk-/-CX3CR1GFP/+CCR2RFP/+ mice they demonstrate that minocycline inhibits the recruitment of CCR2+ cells and slightly reduces the observed degeneration. This is a potentially interesting study as it might clarify the question if and to what extent monocytes are recruited to the subretinal space in RP (at least in Mertk-/-) and help understand the anti-inflammatory effect of minocycline in neurogenerative diseases. There are several points that I think need strengthening: Autofluorescence of subretinal mononuclear phagocytes: O’Koren claimed that the subretinal “niche” can not be infiltrated by monocyte derived cells but only by microglial cells. One incertainty in both studies is that they only use fluorescent markers to identify the cell types. Yet subretinal macrophages (whatever type, microglial or monocyte derived) are known to become very autofluorescent as they phagocyte visual pigment rich outer segments of the photoreceptors. In any of these studies it would therefore be important that other techniques are used to corroborate the results using non-fluorescent techniques, such as substrate based immunohistochemistry (e.g. Fast red, if there is an antibody that differentiates GFP and RFP that should be easy), or in this case a difference in CCR2 expression by RT-PCR (or other Monocyte markers Ly6C etc…). What makes one think that there might be a problem with autofluorescence is that the RFP+ cells seem to be phagocytotic bloated cells (Fig. 1). There don’t seem to be many monocytes (much smaller cells). Also CCR2 is usually very quickly downregulated when the monocte infiltrates the tissue, but here we find a lot of CCR2+ cells. So corroboration by another technique of this CCR2+ cell infiltration would be important. Protective effect of Minocycline: The group has previously shown that CCL2 and CCL3 deletion very significantly preserves photoreceptors in 8 week old Mertk-/- mice. In their 2014 paper control mice were left with less than 15µm of ONL in Mertk-/- mice. Here at the same age we have more than 30µm in controls and the minocycline treated mice are not all that different. To be convincing I think a longer treatment and a later stage in the degeneration with a bigger difference would help… Mechanism: finally it would be nice to have a little more insight in the mechanism. Does minocycline change the expression levels of CCL2 and CCL12, the two main ligands of CCR2 in mice? Does it change the populations of circulating monocytes? Or does it affect immunosupressivity in the eye? Some of these questions should be very easy to get answers to and would strengthen the paper. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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