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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript entitled “Studies of rice Hd1 haplotypes worldwide reveal adaptation of flowering time to different environments” by Wu et al. investigates how the variations in rice Hd1 halotypes contribute to rice domestication and adaptation. This study analyzed the Hd1 gene sequence alterations in various local rice accessions as well as weedy rice and wild rice to find out different hd1 halotypes. This manuscript is generally well-written and organized in a logical manner. The data presented by these authors support their conclusions. Here are some minor to make it easier for the readers to understand. Minor points: 1. Page 3, line 67: Early heading date (Ehd1) => Early heading date 1 (Ehd1) 2. Page 3, lines 66-71: Overall, it is confused whether they are gene name or protein name. I understood that the authors meant them gene names(Hd1, Ehd1, Hd3a, and Ghd7). If so the words “which encodes” after each gene names. 3. Pages 6-7, lines 164~176: Simply listing synonyms for the Hd1 gene does not seem to provide that much information. It does not seem bad to make a table and insert references. 4. Page 13, lines 286-287: 31 accessions type 19 hd1 =>31 accessions are type 19 hd1. 5. Page 14, line 315: rufupogon => rufipogon 6. Page 17, line 374 and 375: Hd1 => Hd1 7. Page 22, line 466: japonica => japonica 8. Page 22, line 467: indica => indica 9. Page 23, line 498: includingπ => including π 10. Page 27, line 580: CONSTAINS => CONSTANS, Early heading date => Early heading date 1 11. The table 2 and 3 are a little hard to see and understand. I hope it can be fixed more easily and in a better way. 12. At the beginning of the discussion session, the authors mentioned that photoperiod insensitivity has been beneficial to rice production. However, Endo-Higashi and Izawa (2011) showed that flowering time gene Hd1 could control tiller and panicle development in rice. Therefore, it might be necessary to mention that the Hd1 gene could be involved in the rice developments, along with controlling of the flowering timing, which affect rice productivity. Reviewer #2: The manuscript entitled “Studies of rice Hd1 haplotypes worldwide reveal adaptation of flowering time to different environments” describes the relationship between sequence information and flowering time using published 3K rice genome data, accession of weedy rice sequences, and newly determined genome sequences of likely Champa lines in Taiwan. They found three new loss-of-function alleles of Hd1 from the data. Then they found that two of them, type 7 and type 13 alleles, are major ones among loss-of-function Hd1 alleles and have a long history after their selection. More than one-third of the world’s rice accessions contain these two mutations. Interestingly, they distributed among sub-tropical and tropical accsssion. In addition, they also found that “Champa” lines may not belong to aus, but to the indica cluster. The allele distribution of rice weedy were also examined. Since Hd1 gene is a major QTL gene to control rice flowering time, it make sense to analyze Hd1 alleles in details. However, there are several related papers already published. Thus, the novelty of this manuscript is not so high. Unfortunaltely, the authors may not recognize a few key papers related to Hd1 haplotypes such as Fujino et al. (2010) and Itoh et al. (2017), thus their discussion should be reorganized with them. I am afraid that the authors just focused on the SNPEffect data of Hd1 among 3K genome too much and missed some important aspect of Hd1 diversity. Especially, haplotype network classification of 3K data are necessary in this manuscript. The analysis of Hd1 introgression as shown in the not-cited papers, instead of selective sweep analysis, such as Tajima’s D would be appropriate in these data. In addition, it is very funny that 1.9kb insertion in type 19 was detected among 3K data since 3K data use short-reads less than 100 bp and mapped the read into IRGSP1.0. Thus, the authors should describe how they got information on type19 mutations. Furthermore, they should describe the allele of previously known 36bp deletion in japonica rice in this manuscript. This allele contain the in-frame deletion which caused 12 amino acid from very conserved region of CO like genes though there is no evidence which affect the function of Hd1 before. I am afraid that all this allele information is missing in the public 3K vcf file. The Champa story and weedy rice story looks extra. They should be independent manuscript if possible. Finally, when I read this manuscript, I am often confused that which data is new and novel from this work or ones from previous works. The authors should try to clarify this point better. Minor points, 1) In the introduction section, description of previous analysis on Hd1 haplotypes are largely missing. I am afraid that it may become a biased presentation to pretend the novelty of this work. 2) The previous paper should cited with the first authors. “Shimamoto and coworkers” and “Yoshimura and coworkers” are inappropriate. Only in some reviews, I saw this style before. 3) How they got the flowering time graph in Fig.1 are not well explained yet. If they compared distinct lines containing the same mutation, they should plot all the data including outlier data. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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PONE-D-20-11893R1 Studies of rice Hd1 haplotypes worldwide reveal adaptation of flowering time to different environments PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hsing, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. Both reviewers and I feel that this revised manuscript deserves PLOS ONE’s publication. Before its publciation we invite you to revise only few minor points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 28 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for revising the manuscript. Most of my comments have been well revised. However, I still have some minor issues. Arabidopsis CO => CO(many times in the manuscript) Page 4, line 92; page 5, line 101 : orthologue => ortholog Page 14, line 295 : 446 bp and 452 bp => 446 and 452 bp Page 16, line 327 : Guangdona => Guangdong(?) Page 19, Line 422 : Hd1 gene => Hd1 Reviewer #2: This version of manuscript has been much improved since the authors have addressed my previous comments politely. Minor comments; In Table3, each circle may contain all subgroups in 3K. Thus, similar data for only a single subgroup such as aus or temperate japonica should be presented as a supplemental figure to imply that local requirement of the Hd1 function may not be affected by the subgroup difference. Explanation of Tajima'D results may not be restricted to selective sweeps. Thus, the authors should also describe other possibility such as population size changes (or bottle neck effect). ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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