Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 26, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-15817 Evaluation of a Virtual Reality implementation of a binocular imbalance test in a large clinic population PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Martin Gonzalez, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The authors should provide more details with illustrated figures to better demonstrate how they used virtual reality interface. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 10 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The topic is interesting and a new revolution in the management of amblyopia. It is, however, tough and understood with a great effort, which the reader might not always with to spend. I suggest adding more figures of the materials used and steps done to further clarify the topic to the reader. I also suggest more detailed explanation of the principle of the test and virtual reality in a simplified way. In general, it is well written and high ranking but difficult for an average reader to understand readily. Try to simplify it and go step by step wit the reader, while using the aid of more figures. Reviewer #2: Authors did a good work with the VR device. This trend may be the future of amblyopia therapy. Here are few comments. Line 26: “The triplet”: I assume the authors mean by the triplet the three factors together as the word in mentioned again in line 31. It is not readily clear to readers what the triplet in line 26 means. Please clarify. Lines 55-57: “The absence of stereoacuity…. Treatment”: This might be a bit of an overstatement and not fully supported by the cited papers. There is uncertainty in measuring stereoacuity in amblyopes, and there is uncertainty in following improvement in stereoacuity. However, this does not create major uncertainty in tracking the improvement in amblyopia in general. Lines 74 – 75: “Black et al.. headset”: The references cited here are confusing. Reference 21 describes aligning both image by moving a line on the screen before stating the test. This particular study did not test or verify the technique used to compensate for misalignment. Authors may consider referring to another study that focus on this. Reference 30 at cited at the end of the sentence is a study about binocular influence on global motion processing and does not describe any use of VR headset. Line 78: “VR combined”: Please explain what you mean by VR combined. The term does not appear to be common in literature or it may be a truncated sentence. Lines 86: Please mention the reference (Kwon et al) in the regular fashion not in line with the text. Lines 86: The first aim of the study is to “implement a test .. in a VR headset”. It is understandable to readers that this test was designed and published by Kwon et al in 2014 and the authors are using this test in their VR devise. I would have expected the authors to dedicate few lines of their introduction describing this test and why did they select this particular test to use in their device. I assumed that they meant reference number 26. This should be made easier for readers to find. This is the highlight of the introduction and I believe authors could have spent less time going over all the progress made by VR devices and focus more on describing the tests that that will use and aim to implement in a mainstream VR device. Line 88 and 90: “Large population of clinical patients”: I would not consider 100 volunteers (of which 21 are controls) recruited in one optometry clinic a large population of clinical patients. Line 98: Inclusion criteria should come before the exclusion. Line 103: Authors do not state who were they recruiting as cases (not control). Were they recruiting any patient with amblyopia? Or any patient with amblyogenic factor even if there was no amblyopia present? Or any patient with a history of amblyopia as taken from previous files? Where is the cases selection criteria? Line 110: “All 55 participants with strabismus had esotorpia”: This needs thorough explanation. In the age group described it is expected to have a good number of exotropia cases. Some may argue that you may even expect to see more exotropia than esotropia. The only was the authors ended up with 55 amblyopes with strabismus and the 55 had esotropia is that they were selecting esotropia and excluding exotropia and we don’t see that in their exclusion criteria. And if that was the case, why only choose esotropes? Moreover, the authors did not exclude patients with previous strabismus surgery. In the raw data table the only surgery mentioned is cataract surgery. Again, it is very unlikely in such group with strabismus in this age group to have no surgical history unless you are excluding surgical cases. Lines 115 – 116: “Anisometropia was defined ... >=1 D”. Where did the authors get this definition? Reference 39 cited at the end of this sentence is an article describing the effect of amblyopia treatment on stereoacuity and although they used 1D of interocular difference to define anisometropia, yet, they did not investigate if this number was significant. A one diopter difference in a bilateral myope of 8 and 9 D is not like a 1 D difference in a unilateral hypertmetropa of 1D. Lumping up all the anisometropes together under 1 D may not be clinically relevant. Lines 125 -126: The UCT test for strabismus is repeated here. It was described few lines above. Line 217: Did the authors use prisms while doing the W4D test on strabismic patients? Authors corrected for misalignment in the VR test. In order for the W4D and the VR test to be comparable, both have to correct (or not correct) for misalignment. Line 233: This categorization of the W4D result is interesting. If it is has been described before please add the reference. If it is devised by the authors please explain what made you come up with this grading. For example: why would someone with diplopia at both angles be classified as better than someone who can fuse at 5 degs but suppress at 1.5 degs. If this diplopia is manifest then definitely his binocularity and stereo should be graded less than a patient who can fuse for near. Line 308: “but not only” Consider revising the sentence structure Line 311: “To the extend” Consider revising the sentence structure. Lines 488 -489: Year of publication of the article missing. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Rehab R Kassem Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Evaluation of a Virtual Reality implementation of a binocular imbalance test PONE-D-20-15817R1 Dear Dr. Martin Gonzalez, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Ahmed Awadein, MD, Ph.D, FRCS Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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