Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 23, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-11816 Database of virtual objects to be used in psychological research PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Martarelli, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 30 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Database of virtual objects to be used in psychological research This study features a downloadable dataset of 3D object sets for virtual realty research, an important fast-growing research trend. As authors stated, the coming of this dataset is timely, and its availability for free download also speeds up the dissemination of knowledge and contributing to its widespread usage. In addition, several indices (N=80), including object familiarities, complexity, and name agreement, were provided for cross-database checks. Overall, I highly agree with authors’ point on making these AR/VR-compatible stimuli freely accessible, with raters’ norms data, provided a good start point toward wider usage and further improvement, stimulation, and growing progress. That being said, I do have several suggested edits and 1~2 wishes that would require authors’ responses. Line 47 (pp. 3): control, external validity, and (misplace comma) experimental replicability [1] Line 64-65 (pp. 4): Such databases are extremely relevant, as VR technology is becoming more popular in psychological research. Relevant to what? “to the growing popularity/trend of VR research in psychological sciences”. Line 69: recruited from Amazon’s website Mechanical Turk. Line 78: The local ethics 78 committee approved the study, which … Could the name of the IRB and document number being stated here, if possible? Line 84: were not "rotationally symmetric”….not sure what it meant here for the name of the VR stimulus set. After viewing the stimulus mp4, I guess it meant to represent the rotation of stimuli on the table, so could be better comprehended to add reference to the mp4. Line 89: when I first saw the “FBX” format, I wondered if FBX is a standard version for VR stimuli, and googled online (and found this one: https://experience.briovr.com/blog/obj-and-fbx-files-for-virtual-reality-augmented-reality/). I guess the authors would also like to add some references of “FBX” for naive readers. Line 197: "The average ratings of familiarity and visual complexity were 4.37 and 2.42”. I would suggest the addition of (both out of 5) immediately after the numbers, and make sure that the scale were consistent across mentioned studies in this paragraph (e.g., Brodeur [7] and Snodgrass and Vanderwart [8].The reason I raised this concern is that as the authors mentioned, in line 213-214, that "texture can appear artificial in drawings, leading to ambiguity and creating the impression of higher visual complexity.” seem counterintuitive at first glance. Because the Snodgrass et al. stimuli were mostly black-line drawings, and not clear whether the so-called “textures” was present in affecting the raters around 80'. Suggestion 1: after downloading the video, I found the choice of colorless object and the smoothness of the object (e.g., Bananas, wither 1 or many, were not that smooth in rendered video). I guess as the 1st release, there are definitely rooms for improvement for the future release. I only hope that it will not be 24 or 32 years apart, such as the Snowgrass et al., and the subsequent color version (Rossion et al. 2004) https://journals.sagepub.com/doi/abs/10.1068/p5117 and (Moreno et al. 2012) https://journals.plos.org/plosone/article?id=10.1371/journal.pone.0037527# Suggestion 2: To concur with the authors on the benefits of open science, I like to suggest one further step: a road map on how to best use this uploaded VR stimuli. E.g., to create a psychological VR experiment. First, I guess a VR headset would be required, and then code with certain, possibly open-source software, and then adopting material, and investigate the effect? How could the research make the best use of such stimuli? Some road map suggestion would be highly desired, or is there already some publication that could be of reference? Reviewer #2: The purpose of this research is clear, the design and procedure are straight forward, and the methodology is consistent with some other researches in this area. These are the strength of this paper. In terms of significance, virtual reality does play a more and more important role in psychological experiments nowadays. Therefore, building good databases, especially the first one with 3-D objects, is truly important work. Here are the questions need some clarification. First. the “database” is small with only 121 objects. Especially many of them have more than one version. About the participants. 12 non-US participants were removed because they were not “the target population”. Are the participants removed by their citizenship or English proficiency? Finally, this paper aimed to “create, standardize, and share the first set of objects” for psychological experiments. The standardization might need some more elaboration. In sum, the issue is important and the methodology is fine. However, the database is small, as well as there are some conceptual concerns to be clarified. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Chun-Chia Kung Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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