Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 23, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-29623 The Impact of HIV-1 Subtypes on Virologic and Immunologic Treatment Outcomes at the Lagos University Teaching Hospital: A longitudinal evaluation PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ogbenna, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by May 29 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Jason Blackard, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (if provided): This is a longitudinal study of HIV disease progression based on the HIV subtype in Nigeria. Well-designed studies evaluating the impact of HIV subtypes on disease progression are needed, particularly in resource-limited settings. It is unclear if the 169 participants included represent all patients at this hospital that met the enrollment criteria or a subset of those individuals. How representative are these 169 individuals of the HIV-positive population at this hospital? In Nigeria? A more robust discussion of the potential limitations is warranted. The authors should who the sequence data as a phylogenetic tree. How do the authors know that a sufficient sample size was included to robustly evaluate if subtypes differ in disease progression? Journal requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements: 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at http://www.plosone.org/attachments/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and http://www.plosone.org/attachments/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_title_authors_affiliations.pdf 2. Please provide additional details regarding participant consent. In the ethics statement in the Methods and online submission information, please ensure that you have specified whether consent was written or verbal/oral. If consent was verbal/oral, please specify: 1) whether the ethics committee approved the verbal/oral consent procedure, 2) why written consent could not be obtained, and 3) how verbal/oral consent was recorded. If your study included minors, please state whether you obtained consent from parents or guardians in these cases. 3. Please amend either the title on the online submission form (via Edit Submission) or the title in the manuscript so that they are identical. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study is of great significance in the field of HIV treatment and monitoring of circulating subtypes, the results can be used for clinical purposes and for the treatment and care of those infected with HIV. It is also important to note the differences in subtypes circulating in developing countries such as USA and Europe with those obtained in Africa where the HIV pandemic hit the hardest. The study was well written and the author showed understanding of the subject and the methodology used was suited to this study. However, there were some issues with the reporting of the results. It was not easy to follow. This is understandable as they needed to summarize 5 years of work in a short manuscript. • Minor issues: 1. Methods: The time points need to be mentioned here and this will help with the reporting of the time line in the results section. There is also no mention of how many samples were shipped to Johannesburg for testing by each time point. Page 5 2. Results: o The results were very confusing to follow and understand, but this should be sorted once the time points are clearly stated in the methods section. I suggest that flow diagram showing sample availability at each of the tested time points be included and reasons for samples missing and those with missing data (Page 7). For example, in Table 3 the researchers list possible reasons why samples are missing but even in those that were still under care, the numbers reported don’t add up to the totals in the table (Page 9). o Separate reporting of results for viral load and CD4 counts it will be clearer when reporting in the results section. Also report them by time points so that it is clear to see the rise in CD4 or viral load by time point tested. (Page 9 and 10) o There also needs to be consistency in the number of visits, in Figure 1 there are 9 time points for CD4 count while Table 2 and 3 show that you had 2 visits (Page 8 and 9). For viral load there are 4 visits as shown in Table 2 and Table 3 (Page 8 and Page 9). 3. Discussion: there is inconsistencies in the CD4 counts of those infected with CRF 06-cpx and CRF 18-cpx subtypes (Figure 1). The authors did not show why this was happening and this happened for just these two subtype. The low numbers that they mentioned in the results section does not explain such (Page 9). Minor issues: 1. Reference #14 is not in the text but is stated in the reference list. Reviewer #2: In this manuscript, Ogbenna and colleagues longitudinally followed up 169 study participants infected with different subtypes who were started on antiretroviral therapy in Nigeria. The authors report that the individuals did not differ in baseline CD4+ T cell counts or viral loads according to HIV-1 subtype, and there were no differences in immunological and virological outcomes following initiation of antiretroviral therapy. Overall, this is a sound study although I found the report generally poorly written and sometimes confusing. 1) Do the authors have CD4% and CD4:CD8 ratios for participants in the cohort? Others have reported that CD4% and CD4:CD8 ratios do not normalize even after long-term antiretroviral therapy in other cohorts so it would be interesting to see whether that holds true for this cohort and if there are differences in these measures by HIV-1 subtype. 2) In table 1, only two antiretroviral drugs are shown for participants in different categories. Were participants in this cohort on two-drug regimens instead of three? Why is that the case? 3) In all the tables, there is repetition in data presentation- why for example show the numbers of both males and females? Why not just show one category (with percentage) since for these binary variables it is obvious what the numbers and percentages will be for the other category? The same applies for measures such as CD4+ T cell count increases above 100 cells/µl, viral load suppression below 1,000 copies/ml, etc. 4) The authors should show the confidence intervals for the data presented in figures 1-3. Also is this the same data in tables 1-4 and only presented differently? It would be preferable that there is no data repetition unless there is a specific separate point that the authors want to highlight by presenting the same data in different formats. 5) The figure legends for figures 1 to 3 are mixed up with the manuscript results narrative. The figure legends should be separated from the results narrative to make it easier to follow. 6) Although the REGA tool was used for subtyping, a more robust phylogenetic analysis with reference sequences would have been useful, particularly considering the extreme diversity of viral strains in Nigeria. 7) The conclusion that a higher proportion of CRF-06-cpx and CRF-18-cpx remained in care at 60 months seems tenuous and implies that there are differences between subtypes in terms of response to treatment. Unless the authors can show that this is a solid finding backed by systematic data rather than a chance finding, it should be removed from the abstract. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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PONE-D-19-29623R1 The impact of HIV-1 subtypes on virologic and immunologic treatment outcomes at the Lagos university teaching hospital: A longitudinal evaluation PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ogbenna, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please make the minor updates requested by Reviewer #2 prior to acceptance of your manuscript. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 23 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Jason Blackard, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (if provided): Please make the minor updates requested by Reviewer #2 prior to acceptance of your manuscript. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: In this version of the manuscript, Ogbenna and colleagues have addressed most of the concerns from reviewers. I have a few minor issues that the authors should address. 1) The authors state that antiretroviral drug categories shown are classified based on the NRTI backbone. I think it is still important to indicate what the third drug used was even if it was not uniform across all participant groups. 2) I understand that the confidence intervals for the data shown in figures 1-3 are described in the narrative. Why are they not shown in the figures? 3) The supplementary figure shown indicated that there were 169 study participants, 86 with viral load and 88 without viral load. These numbers should be checked as they do not add up to 169. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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The impact of HIV-1 subtypes on virologic and immunologic treatment outcomes at the Lagos university teaching hospital: A longitudinal evaluation PONE-D-19-29623R2 Dear Dr. Ogbenna, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Jason Blackard, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): None Reviewers' comments: None |
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PONE-D-19-29623R2 The Impact of HIV-1 Subtypes on Virologic and Immunologic Treatment Outcomes at the Lagos University Teaching Hospital: A longitudinal evaluation Dear Dr. Ogbenna: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Jason Blackard Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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