Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 8, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-13641 Evaluation and discussion of handmade face-masks and commercial diving-equipment as personal protection in pandemic scenarios PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Gierthmuehlen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 09 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The discussion on the non technical matters, legal implication etc is good. Nevertheless, this work is relevant to the covid-19 pandemic. Please amend your paper according to the reviewers' comments. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? 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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript reports a study on the filtration efficiency of 3 home-made or modified masks for use in the current Covid-19 pandemic. A large part of the manuscript involves a discussion on the complexities of the legal aspects in the manufacture and use of such home-made masks. Overall the manuscript is well written. However, there are some concerns that should be addressed: 1. With the large range of proposed designs and materials, the selection of the masks to be evaluated seems quite arbitrary. Perhaps the motivation or justification behind the selection of these 3 mask designs/models should be included in the text. 2. With respect to the vacuum cleaner bag mask – a ‘home-made design-template’ is mentioned with no reference from where its design was based on or how it was designed. Perhaps providing more details about it could assist readers in better understanding the manuscripts results and conclusions. 3. Please include images of the easybreath diving mask and its fit on the mannequin head. Similarly, please provide an image illustrating the fit of the 3D printed mask. This would assist in explaining the differences in filtration efficiency across the masks. 4. In the discussion, the poor filtration efficiency of the 3D printed mask was suggested to be due to the poor fitting of the mask. Would this be then an unfair comparison with respect to the vacuum cleaner bag and the diving mask? If they were poorly fitted as well, wouldn’t they result in similarly poor efficiency? 5. What does ‘can be efficient’ (in the abstract) and could the authors elaborate on how they came to this conclusion? Given that the filtration efficiency standards for EN149:2001 is >95% for FFP2-masks, this conclusion seems relatively weak, as all the tested masks seem to be relatively far from this threshold. 6. In the context of Covid-19, where transmission routes potentially involve droplets transporting the virus during coughing or sneezing, perhaps a more relevant standard would be that for surgical masks (EN14683). This standard involves more than just evaluating particle filtration efficacy and requirements such as bacterial filtration efficiency, breathability, splash resistance, biocompatibility and microbial cleanliness need to be met. While it is understandable that such strict requirements may be difficult for homemade mask makers to achieve, a discussion of this should be included for completeness. 7. The column ‘Setting’ in Table 1 should be translated to English or relabelled to reduce confusion, eg. ‘Staubsauger’ could be relabelled to ‘Mask sewn from vacuum cleaner bag’ as in Figure 5. In summary the scientific contribution of this manuscript is limited. The discussion of the legal aspects of home-made masks is interesting but is again limited to European laws and appears to be incomplete. Nevertheless, any research helps in this global fight against the Covid-19 pandemic and the manuscript may provide an experimental foundation from which further studies can be performed. Reviewer #2: The authors intended to study three different types of home-made masks effectiveness in response to the shortage of the masks amid the covid19 pandemic. The experimental design is reasonable. The filtration effectiveness was measured using scintigraphic camera. The cost and effectiveness of three types of home-made masks were compared. Legal aspects of these masks were thoroughly discussed. Though the paper does not directly propose a working solution to the shortage of masks amid pandemic, it gives the readers an idea about the role of 3D printers and their effectiveness and cost in printing masks. multiple numerical typos, should be dot, instead of comma, e.g. 0.63 not 0,63. line 78: It is unclear what the sentence 'with drying, we calculated a diameter of 0.63micro-meter for the NaCl-aerosol' means. How does the 0.63 relate with the 2.4-3.3 diameter mentioned in previous sentence? Line 98: 10 breaths with 1L were performed over 50s. It is good to mention that a healthy adult's respiratory frequency and lung capacity so that the readers can compare it with the experimental setup. line 103: Does the ratio of measured counts for filters depend on radioactivity? The radioactivity was counted for one minute. Since 99m-Tc has a half life of 6 hours, which is not much longer than the experimental time assumed to be the magnitude of hours. It is good to discuss the timeline as of when the radioactivity was counted to account for the decay. line 120: the link is not working, after clicking, i was redirected to homepage showing that i am not authorized to view the page. line123: link not working either. line 272: due to the lack of tight-fitting of the printed plastic masks, the experimental results about effecacy maybe not trustworthy. The fitness of the mask to face might be the most important factor that matters. It is very interesting to see whether the smartphone based face scanning can greatly improve the effectiveness given same experimental design. 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Evaluation and discussion of handmade face-masks and commercial diving-equipment as personal protection in pandemic scenarios PONE-D-20-13641R1 Dear Dr. Gierthmuehlen, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Chee Kong Chui, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): The authors have adequately addressed the comments and issues raised by the reviewers. I recommend that this paper be accepted for publication. It is an interesting paper amidst the coronavirus outbreak. Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-13641R1 Evaluation and discussion of handmade face-masks and commercial diving-equipment as personal protection in pandemic scenarios Dear Dr. Gierthmuehlen: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Chee Kong Chui Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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