Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 24, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-07947 Modeling and Comparing Data Mining Algorithms for Prediction of Recurrence of Breast Cancer PLOS ONE Dear Dr Mojaradi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. One reviewer argues that more work would be necessary to make the claim that the results are clinically relevant. This could be addressed by a major reworking of the analysis or by removing or sufficiently qualifying any claims of applicability to clinical or policy decisions. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Jun 21 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear authors, First, I'd like to aknowledge the effort made to improve the manuscript by moving your analysis to a meaninful clinical question. Again, my main concern is that the interpretation of the clinical scenario is not correct, hence the conclusion "Therefore, machine learning algorithms, in particular, the C5.0, can be of great help to physicians and health care Policy Makers, especially in predicting recurrence of breast cancer." raised from your analysis is not supported. There are many things regarding the experimental setup that should be amended. First of all: recurrence in breast cancer is a time dependent event. This has been prevously established without doubt. I think it's mandatory to include time to recurrence in order to predict this recurrence. Second: Its also been stablished that, for brast cancer recurrence studies a minimun follow up of 5 years its necessary to have a complete picture of the recurrences. This is due to the huge heterogeneity of breast cancer. For example, most TNBCs will relapse in the first three years, while ER/PR+ breast cancer recurrence is spread among the first 10 years. This can bias the analises because most of the recurrences will be from TNBCs. Third: I strongly recommned including a clinical advisor in this work. There are some variable interpretations that should be corrected to faithfully reflect the clinical scenario (sfor examples: ER/PR are analized independently but no together, as in the clinical practice). No data about the number of recurrences in this population is presented. Obviously, treatment is related with relapse. But it should not be included as a variable to predict relapse, because the objective is to be able to predict this relapse prior to treatment in ER/PR+ breast cancer, allowing to decide fi chemotherapy is needed or not. On the other hand, prediction of relapse in TNBC will follow other clinical objectives (find out chemotherapy resistant tumors to provide these patients with additional tratment options via clinical trials for example. All these differences in the clinical interpretation should be well defined prior to the analysis, and must conditionate the analysis itself to demonstrate the capability of this powerful mathematical tools in the clinical setting. And finally, I want to raise a question. It is not possible, with the large number of patients included, to split them onto training and test? this could help to estimate the overfitting of the methods. Reviewer #2: Early detection of recurrence of Breast cancer can provide potential advantage in the treatment of this disease. There have been many researches in the recent past about finding the most critical attributes that plays a major role in prediction of recurrence of breast cancer. However, in this research, the author has also interviewed with specialists in the field of breast cancer along with data mining techniques. Thus the authenticity of this work increases. Since it is a revised paper thus below are my reviews about the paper based on the previous review comments are as follows. Reviewer 1 Comments Comment 1 and Comment 2: The author has resolved this issue. As per the comment of reviewer 1, the author has used 7 data mining methods and predictions has been now on finding the recurrence of breast cancer. The attributes have been now described. Reviewer 2 Comments Comment 1 and Comment 2: The author has resolved this issue. As per the comment of reviewer 2, the author has used new prediction algorithms and to evaluate performance F1 and area under ROC curve is also used. As per the revised paper, the author has modified the paper according to the reviewer comments. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Angelo Gámez-Pozo Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Modeling and Comparing Data Mining Algorithms for Prediction of Recurrence of Breast Cancer PONE-D-20-07947R1 Dear Dr. Mojaradi, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Note that there are also grammatical and copyediting issues that will need to be addressed before publication. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Bryan C Daniels Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-07947R1 Modeling and Comparing Data Mining Algorithms for Prediction of Recurrence of Breast Cancer Dear Dr. Mojaradi: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Bryan C Daniels Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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