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PONE-D-20-02077 Physical Activity Suppresses Acute Inflammation in a Gout Model by Downregulation of TLR2 on Circulating Neutrophils as well as Inhibition of Serum CXCL1 and is Associated with Decreased Pain and Inflammation in Gout Patients PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Young, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by May 23 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The Authors showed the important role of some inflammatory pathways, in the beneficial effect of exercise in the gout pathology. The paper is potentially interesting, there are however, some issue that need to be better clarified. The Authors declare that they have used both male and female mice. However, the results seem not to be divided for the gender. Did the authors obtain the same results for both male and female mice? In the female mice, did the Authors perform the experiments during a specific phase correlated to the menstrual cycle? This issue should be better discussed since several inflammatory and also pain-associated pathologies, especially those mediated by immune system can be gender dependent. Interestingly, recent findings showed that voluntary exercise is associated with production of a ketone body beta hydroxybutyrate (BHB) that exerts beneficial effect on emotional behavior through BDNF enhancement (Sleiman et al., ELIFE, 2016), and recently it has been demonstrated that BHB can exert a potent anti-inflammatory and antineuropathic activity (Youm et al., Nat Med, 2015; Qian et al BJP, 2017; Boccella et al., FASEB-J 2019). Moreover, emotional behavior and inflammation have been recently linked (D'Acquisto F, Dialogues Clin Neurosci, 2017 for review). Do the Authors considered those aspect, at least by measuring the glucose and BHB levels in the trained mice? It is clear that this was not the topic of this specific paper, but there could be some cross-talk in these pathways and it would be intriguing to have a "common soil". The question is: did the Authors observed any behavioral changes also in the trained mice? The quality of the figures could be enhanced Reviewer #2: Comments to the manuscript ID: PONE-D-20-02077 In this manuscript (Ref. ID: PONE-D-20-02077) entitled “Physical Activity Suppresses Acute Inflammation in a Gout Model by Downregulation of TLR2 on Circulating Neutrophils as well as Inhibition of Serum CXCL1 and is Associated with Decreased Pain and Inflammation in Gout Patients”, Jablonski K. and colleagues show that physical activity at low-moderate extent is able to counteract the pathologic response induced by intra-articular injection of MSU crystals in a mouse model of Gout arthritis. In particular, low-moderate physical activity reduces the degree of ankle swelling and inflammation at site of injection by limiting NF-kB activity and prevents the infiltration of immune cells, mainly macrophages and neutrophils, in the joint. Specifically, the authors report that peripheral neutrophils expressing TLR2 are less abundant in mice subjected to low-moderate exercise compared to control group or high exercise rate group and this effect could be explained by the reduction in serum level of chemokine CXCL1 involved in neutrophils recruitment. Finally, the authors add some data collected from gout patients in which physical activity contributed to improve CRP levels and more in general the pathological score confirming the importance of performing physical activity in both pre-clinical and clinical settings. The manuscript is well organized and the results described are sounded and supported by the experimental data. However, there are some criticisms that need a deep revision. My comments are listed below: - In their title the authors claim that Physical Activity Suppresses Acute Inflammation. However, animals are subjected to physical activity daily for two weeks before proceeding to MSU injection and, indeed, before inducing an arthritic damage. Therefore, in my opinion the protective effect mediated by physical activity seems to be preventive rather than therapeutic. I would personally suggest to replace the term “suppresses” with “prevents”. In alternative, did the authors consider to test the effect of physical activity on pain and joint inflammation during and/or after arthritis induction? - For their model characterization, the authors report data showing the degree of ankle swelling, NF-kB activity, immune cells infiltration and pro-inflammatory cytokine production following MSU-injection. However, there are not data showing pain perception in these animals before and after exercise and MSU-injection. Did the author consider to evaluate allodynia and/or hyperalgesia thresholds in these animals in order to check whether physical exercise is able to prevent hyperalgesia typical of arthritis flares? -In the immunohistochemistry and immunofluorescence paragraphs of methods section, I was wondering why the authors did not perfuse-fixed their mice before collecting tissue for imaging experiments. This could explain the poor quality of the images presented in Figure 1. In this Figure the resolution seems very low and particularly for panels F, G and H the background is too strong making tough the message uptake. This issue should be considered by improving the quality of the image or repeating the staining with a better protocol for tissue fixation. - In Figure 1 and 3 the authors perform an immunostaining for MPO to evaluate the degree of neutrophil infiltration in the ankle joint, bone marrow and MSU-injected synovium. In my opinion, it should be more appropriate to measure MPO activity rather than its expression meanwhile neutrophil infiltration might be quantified by counting the immunocomplex formation following immunostaining with Ly6G antibody. -In Figure 4D, it’s not clear how the authors collected peripheral monocytes and neutrophils to stimulate them with LPS and/or MSU. In the text (line 314), they claim that pooled splenocytes were isolated and thereafter monocytes and neutrophils were stimulated meanwhile in the immunoblotting paragraph of method section it is reported that these cells were immunomagnetically separated from whole blood leukocytes. Which was the source of these cells? Spleen or peripheral blood? Moreover, which kind of immunomagnetic beads have been used? Had stimulating growth factors been used to culture these cells prior to stimulate them? Please add some details to clarify this point. - Are the immunoblots representative of how many samples for each condition? Figure legend reports that n=5 pooled cell lysates were used for condition. This means that only one sample was tested in the immunoblot? Furthermore, a graphical quantification could help readers in the results comprehension. - Quality of Figure 5A seems very poor and makes not possible to visualize the scale bar used for TLR2-PE-Vio770 quantification. It seems that gate position is cutting in the middle a population of neutrophils not expressing TLR2. Moreover, gating strategy originating neutrophils population should be showed at least as supplemental material. Finally, why did the authors consider to evaluate peripheral cells rather than cells collected from synovial washes? - For the clinical data, it’s not clear which ones were the inclusion criteria for patient recruitment a part from gout presence and the lack of flares at the moment of visit. Please include a clear statement in the method paragraph to summarize the criteria adopted to include patients in the study (age, BMI, presence of other autoimmune diseases, contemporary assumption of medication at the moment of the study in particular steroids or other anti-inflammatory drugs, etc.,). -Please add in the method section or in the legends describing imaging experiments how many slides or pictures were taken for each treatment and if quantification was performed in blind. -In the Discussion section, the authors should include some considerations on the potential mechanism/s of action by which physical activity is producing the effects reported in their results section. In particular, study conducted by F. D'Acquisto and colleagues show that mice housed in an enrich environment and, therefore stimulated to play and indeed perform physical activity, are endowed with an immune system that responds more effectively and faster to infective insults compared to the respective controls. In this manuscript, although the model is reproducing an acute inflammatory situation, physical activity seems to suppress the immune response. Please add some comments on the mechanisms of action supporting the importance of physical exercise in gout patients. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Physical Activity Prevents Acute Inflammation in a Gout Model by Downregulation of TLR2 on Circulating Neutrophils as well as Inhibition of Serum CXCL1 and is Associated with Decreased Pain and Inflammation in Gout Patients PONE-D-20-02077R1 Dear Dr. Young, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Fulvio D'Acquisto, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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