Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 9, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-00751 Relationship between weather conditions and the physicochemical characteristics of cactus pear (Opuntia spp.) cladodes and mucilage PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Toit, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 24 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript studied the effect of weather conditions on the physicochemical characteristics of cactus pear cladodes and mucilage extracted over two seasons to understand the observed variations in mucilage characteristics. Daily weather data were obtained, weight and moisture contents determined on cladodes and yield, viscosity, pH, conductivity and malic acid content determined on extracted mucilage. They found that correlations showed a relationship between environmental temperatures, cladode pH and conductivity, and mucilage viscosity and yields. Below are the comments for you to consider. Major points: 1. In MM, “Algerian, Morado and Gymno-Carpo, as well as O. robusta (Robusta), were used in the current study”. Did the author find any differences between the cultivars? I did not see individual data of the cultivars in the tables. 2. What is the aim of study? What kind of viscosity of mucilage is preferred in food industry? 3. Was the data repeated for at least two years? 4. What factor caused the changed pH value during different months? Reviewer #2: REVIEW Manuscript PONE-D-20-00751: "Relationship between weather conditions and the physicochemical characteristics of cactus pear (Opuntia spp.) cladodes and mucilage" by Alba Du Toit et al. 1. a) This study presents the results of original research. Analyzes the changes in cladodes of three cultivars of Opuntia ficus-indica and one of Opuntia robusta. This article states in the title: “characteristics of cactus pear (Opuntia spp.)” but the genus Opuntia has 150+ species. The abbreviation "spp." (plural) indicates "several species". Although correct for two species, it could be misleading to readers assuming several species. I suggest rephrasing it to “Relationship between weather conditions and the physicochemical characteristics of cladodes and mucilage of two prickly cactus species” or mention three cultivars of Opuntia ficus-indica and one of O. robusta. b) The article is well-written and informative. However, although the sample size per cultivar and month seems adequate, the period of study does not cover one phenological year. It is restricted to months from the peak of summertime to winter. It is unfortunate not having data for springtime, particularly to get more variance in the studied attributes and weather factors. Also, there is no chance of comparison among years to assist in data interpretation. c) The study is correlational and offers little insight into the causal factors related to mucilage content of cladodes. I would expect some degree of simple experimentation like subjecting plants to different irrigation or to high temperature schedules to help clarify the role of weather variables on cladode attributes and mucilage yield. Regarding the correlations, are not size and ontogenetic stage confounded variables? i. e. There is a correlation between cladode age and yield? If so, mucilage percentage is related to ontogeny with cladodes harvested in summer still accumulating biomass related to support and mucilage remaining constant. Hence, yield (%) could be related to the increase in structural biomass. d) The other cladode variables, pH, conductivity and malic acid content, are not related to phenological events—i. e. varying photosynthetic activity through the seasons? Interestingly, rainfall seems well correlated (although marginally not significant given the small sample size). These issues could have been easily solved by measuring chlorophyll fluorescence to assess photosynthetic energy conversion and doing a greenhouse rainfall exclusion experiment. e) The poor correlation of cladode attributes with rainfall probably derives from the lagged plant response to environmental variables. For temperature, the lag is usually more rapid than for water uptake. Also, there is almost no variance in cladode moisture content, suggesting full turgor most of the time. This measurement again highlights the relevance of a longer period of study. Bloemfontein, South Africa has a relatively mild, mesic climate, much gentler than the one where O. ficus-indica and especially O. robusta grow. Local climate could explain, in part, the lack of correlation with rainfall, even considering lags. f) The presentation of results is unusual by mixing discussion and results. It is not a major issue, but is uncommon. I prefer the more standard separation between the Results section without references, and the Discussion section where the authors contrast the results with the literature. g) Figures 1-3 can be grouped into one. They all use the same X-axis and refer to weather variables. As far as I know, the results reported have not been published elsewhere, but similar results can be gleaned from a search in academic databases. 2. The experiments, statistics, and other analyses are performed satisfactorily. The number of samples is not stated in the tables, but the reader assumes is n=10. I recommend adding the number of observations. They are described in sufficient detail. 3. The conclusions are properly presented but as I remarked above, there is no Discussion section. 4. The article is well-written and is presented in an intelligible fashion and is written in standard English. 5. I see that the research meets all applicable standards for the ethics of experimentation and research integrity. 6. The article adheres to appropriate reporting guidelines and community standards for data availability. However, it is limited in its scope and fails in fulfilling the expectations. Reviewer #3: The manuscript "Relationship between weather conditions and the physicochemical characteristics of cactus pear (Opuntia spp.) cladodes and mucilage" in interesting, but the experimental design is not adequate because it was not rigorously conducted. The experiment has only two replications per each species or cultivar, which is not enough for statistical analyses. In addition, a one-way ANOVA procedure was used to determine the effect of harvesting month on cladode and mucilage properties. What about the species or cultivar in the statistical analysis? Species or cultivars can differ in physicochemical characteristics, but it appears that authors mixed data from all species. In addition, Pearson correlation coefficients were calculated between environmental temperatures, rainfall and the cladode and mucilage properties. Again, what about the corrrelations among environmental temperatures, rainfall and the cladode and mucilage properties for each species or cultivar? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Relationship between weather conditions and the physicochemical characteristics of cladodes and mucilage from two cactus pear species PONE-D-20-00751R1 Dear Dr. Toit, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Zhenhai Han, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The MS studied relationship between weather conditions and the physicochemical characteristics of cladodes and mucilage from two cactus pear species. The comments are properly revised. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No |
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PONE-D-20-00751R1 Relationship between weather conditions and the physicochemical characteristics of cladodes and mucilage from two cactus pear species Dear Dr. du Toit: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Zhenhai Han Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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