Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-22627 An investigation into the fate of antibiotic resistant E. coli and antibiotic resistance genes during full scale conventional and advanced anaerobic digestion of sewage sludge PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Emma Hayhurst, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. As shown below, there are different attitudes on the manuscript. However, the core of both reviews is similar. Please focus the revision on the implications and on the additions.strength this paper delivers compared to the other literature. Please submit your revised manuscript by 18-11-20. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Review The authors present information on the fate of antibiotic resistant E. coli and antibiotic resistance genes in municipal anaerobic digesters with and without thermal hydrolysis pretreatment. The fact that a very large number of ARGs and MGEs were targeted using SmartChip system was interesting to see and a strength of the work. The authors should consider adding more information on the implications of their results and/or future work that may be beneficial based on their results. The following comments are made in a sincere effort to help the authors improve the manuscript. General comments: 1. I think there are some very practical things that could come out of the results presented. But the manuscript lacks a good, cohesive description of what the results tell us and how they might be used to improve public health and the environment. The authors should add information regarding the implications and usefulness of their results. To describe the usefulness of the results, for example, the authors could also provide a description of future research that would be important to do based on their results. The asuthors should describe in discussion and conclusions sections how the results now help fill the gap described in the introduction. 2. The results lack a description of data precision. Throughout the manuscript, a description of measurement precision is needed along with the range or mean values. What were the detection limits for the genes and E. Coli enumeration? Were values before and after treatment statistically different? Specific comments: 3.The titles is long and cumbersome. Could “An investigation into the…” be deleted? 4. Line 31, by how much were the 13 ARG abundance values reduced by TH? 5. Line 38, line 198 and throughout the manuscript, was it PCA or PCoA employed? 6. Line 40, I disagree that the results are comprehensive. Two full-scale WWTPs are not a comprehensive sampling of WWTPs. 7. line 78, sewage sludge reuse also poses a risk from other emerging contaminants such as EDCs. 8. line 87, is it an urgent research gap? Describe and justify the urgency. You should describe in discussion and conclusions sections how your results now help fill the gap you describe in the introduction. For example, can your results be used in quantitative risk assessment? 9. Section 2.1, what was the exact temperature and holding time of the digesters? Since pathogen inactivation is a function of these, it is important to know the exact values. 10. line 123, “Sludge is thickened…” which sludge? The mix of primary and secondary? Just the secondary? 11. Line 123, “…SBR)(70%)…” is it percent by volume or mass of solids? 12. Line 126, What is “filter treated effluent?”? Describe. 13. Line 142, why “decanted”? Why take only the supernatant? Does taking the supernatant and not the entire mix influence the results? How? 14. Line 153, briefly describe the CLSI method. 15. line 164, briefly describe the Clermont method. 16. Page 18, there is no section 2.6. 17. Sections 2.5 and 2.7, It is confusing to the reader why two different methods for ARG enumeration were used – SYBR green (QIAGEN) and SmartChip. Please let the reader know up front that two methods were used, why two methods were used, and not just one, why a gene was chosen to be measured by one method and not by another, etc. Why not just use SmartChip? 18. Line 202, “378,000”; and other CFU/g dry weight values in the manuscript. It would be more appropriate to report the log of the results. Also, with three significant figures, you imply your measurements are accurate to +/- 1%. Is this true? What is the standard deviation of the values or log of the values? 19. Line 228, What does “resistance levels” mean? Be more specific. 20, Line 256, change “sample 1 and 3” to “samples 1 and 3.” 21. Line 321, “a high abundance” compared to what? 22. Line 326, “entirely removes”. What was the detection limit of E coli? Is it zero? Can you be sure that it is entirely removed to zero? 23. line 340, in other studies of what? Anaerobic digesters? Activated sludge? Receiving streams? 24. Line 357, “their study”. Who are they? Reviewer #2: The manuscript, “An investigation into the fate of antibiotic resistant E. coli and antibiotic resistance genes during full scale conventional and advanced anerobic digestion of sewage sludge,” describe work in which the authors examined the fate of resistant bacteria and multiple resistance genes over the length of two treatment trains. This work is highly relevant to global-scale questions regarding antibiotic resistance and WWTPs. However, I do not feel as if this paper is a good fit for this target journal. As you will see below, I feel that this work doesn’t do enough to separate itself from a wide body of existing literature. PLOS One reports novel and cutting-edge work and, although this is an interesting and well-designed study, it is similar to work that has already been reported. Specific comments: Line 23 – a very effective way to start off the abstract is a “big picture” statement. Why is this study relevant in the big picture? The authors do this well in lines 52-56 – I would suggest adding some of the information in lines 52-56 to the beginning of the abstract. This compels the reader to continue reading. Line 38 – I believe that the authors mean “principal” (rather than principle). I think. Throughout – the authors use ARBs as an acronym for antibiotic resistant bacteria. This acronym should not be plural. Line 54 should read, “…as significant emerging environmental pollutants.” Lines 80-81 – actually, there have been more than 1,500 publications since 2019 in the peer-reviewed literature that focus on sewage sludge (specifically, anaerobic digestion of sewage sludge) and antibiotic resistance. In addition, more than 100 publications have focused on thermal hydrolysis and antibiotic resistance in the same time period. What does your publication lend to this body of literature? You are targeting a high-impact, widely-read journal – it is extremely important here to set your paper apart from this large body of existing literature. Line 144 – there are literature reports that find low, but measurable false positive rates on MLGA used to identify E. coli. Was any additional testing performed on these isolates to confirm their identity as E. coli? This may have been realized through the phylotyping – but there is no description of what “the Clermont method” is. Perhaps it would be helpful to insert a sentence or two describing this method. Lines 169-170 – here, you are describing DNA quantity, NOT quality. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Daniel H. Zitomer Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Fate of antibiotic resistant E. coli and antibiotic resistance genes during full scale conventional and advanced anaerobic digestion of sewage sludge PONE-D-20-22627R1 Dear Dr. Hayhurst, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Tim Hülsen Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-22627R1 Fate of antibiotic resistant E. coli and antibiotic resistance genes during full scale conventional and advanced anaerobic digestion of sewage sludge Dear Dr. Hayhurst: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Tim Hülsen Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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