Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-06296 Assessment of STAT5 as a Potential Therapy Target in Enzalutamide-Resistant Prostate Cancer PLOS ONE Dear Professor Erb:, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please address the concerns raised by the reviewers. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by May 24, 2020. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The submitted manuscript assessed the potential of STAT5 as a therapeutic target for enzalutamide resistant, metastatic, castration resistant prostate cancer (mCRPC). This study addresses an important and current problem for patients with mCRPC. The work is original and experiments are well designed, include appropriate controls, and supporting data. The manuscript is written in a clear, intelligent, and fair manner. The authors appropriately cite previous literature and consider their results in light of the current knowledge in the field. The conclusions are clearly stated and supported by the data. While most of the paper is very well written, there are numerous errors and inaccuracies. These are addressed below, and additional comments are provided. 1. The manuscript contains several typos, misplaced punctuation, and incorrect punctuation. The authors need to carefully review the entire manuscript, figures, and figure legends. 2. The STAT5 inhibition studies are critical for this paper and its conclusions. While pimozide has biologic and dose-dependent effects on both cell models in Figure 4 and table 1, the direct effects on STAT5 activity are less convincing and inconsistent in supplementary figures 4 and 5. A more direct and quantitative assay of STAT5 activity, such as phospho-STAT5 quantification or a STAT5 transcriptional reporter assay, is needed. 3. The effect of STAT5B knockdown in MR49F cells is important to the conclusions of this paper. The supplementary data includes validation of siRNA knockdown for C4-2, but not for MR49F or LAPC4. It is important to verify siRNA knockdown in all cells. 4. The authors need to carefully review the datasets used in the analysis and their presentation in the text and data. For example, the manuscript describes GSE58815, which does not appear to be a prostate dataset. The datasets are sometimes incorrectly labeled under the wrong samples, for example in Figure 3B which lists GSE5816 under C4-2, but this dataset appears to study LNCaP and not C4-2. Also, sometimes "GSE" is written as "GES" 5. The manuscript requires more detail about the ChIP-seq data analyses. How was the data normalized across samples. Was a negative control (IgG) considered in analyses? 6. The methods section includes description of cell cycle analysis, but the manuscript does not appear to include this data. Reviewer #2: the authors do a good job of investigating the possibility of stat 5 as a target for treatment in enzalutamide resistance. THis is important work since there had been some evidence that this could be a target and even a potential mechanisms for resistance. With the caveat that they are restricted to cell line models, this effort seems to decrease any enthusiasm for stat 5 as a target. esp of interest is the possibility that the inhibitor used is likely to have off target effects . of note they should probly shorten the conclusion for 4 double p spaced pages and add a brief caveat that the results are from cell lines that may or may not represent enza resistance disease Reviewer #3: The manuscript addresses the need to better understand the role of STAT5 in enzalutamide-resistant prostate cancer and concluded that resistance mechanisms are complex and that STAT5 may not be integral to this process. A concern with the manuscript is the lack of clarity in the introduction as to the specific question being addressed by the authors. Just asking whether STAT5 has role in drug resistance is too general a question. A more focused approach could improve the manuscript. For example, the first figures showed that STAT5b expression was heterogenous in resistant cells but not in sensitive cells. Examining the molecular events behind this observation could make a better manuscript. Additional comments follow. 1) The statement that “STAT5b is highly heterogenous in enzalutamide-resistant xenografts while expression in enzalutamide-sensitive CRPC xenografts is rather consistent “ should be supported by statistical information. The descriptive terms used are rather vague. 2) While it is understood that approach combining bioinformatics (Fig. 1, 3) and wet bench experiments (Fig. 2,4,5) necessitates the use of different cell lines, the results from each of the different cell lines used is unclear. It is suggested that the authors more clearly summarize trends per cell line either in each section or at the end. There is a concern that cell-line specific effects may be overlooked. This is especially important for the isobologram analysis as well. ********** 6. 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Assessment of STAT5 as a Potential Therapy Target in Enzalutamide-Resistant Prostate Cancer PONE-D-20-06296R1 Dear Dr. Erb, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Daotai Nie, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: my concerns have been addressed , the conclusion has been shortened and the manuscript addresses the problem with cell line data Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Glenn Bubley Reviewer #3: No |
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