Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 18, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-04779 Potentially Inappropriate prescriptions according to explicit and implicit criteria in patients with multimorbidity and polypharmacy - MULTIPAP study: A cross-sectional PLOS ONE Dear MRs ROGERO, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Apr 30 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any potentially identifying patient information must be fully anonymized. Important: If there are ethical or legal restrictions to sharing your data publicly, please explain these restrictions in detail. Please see our guidelines for more information on what we consider unacceptable restrictions to publicly sharing data: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/data-availability#loc-unacceptable-data-access-restrictions. Note that it is not acceptable for the authors to be the sole named individuals responsible for ensuring data access. We will update your Data Availability statement to reflect the information you provide in your cover letter. 3. One of the noted authors is a group or consortium MULTIPAP group. In addition to naming the author group, please list the individual authors and affiliations within this group in the acknowledgments section of your manuscript. Please also indicate clearly a lead author for this group along with a contact email address. 4. Your ethics statement must appear in the Methods section of your manuscript. If your ethics statement is written in any section besides the Methods, please move it to the Methods section and delete it from any other section. Please also ensure that your ethics statement is included in your manuscript, as the ethics section of your online submission will not be published alongside your manuscript. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review this research work about the potentially inappropriate prescriptions in patients with multimorbidity and polypharmacy. I hope the following comments/ suggestions be useful in the development of this document. I want to suggest it is needed to review the entire document by a native translator. The document needs changes that increase clarity and facilitate its reading. Title: Second part of the title could be more precise. Please, consider: “Potentially Inappropriate prescriptions according to explicit and implicit criteria in patients with multimorbidity and polypharmacy. MULTIPAP: A cross-sectional study.” Abstract: According to the “Submission Guidelines” the Abstract should not include citations and abbreviations, if possible. Please, check it. - Line 44: Multi-PAP is written in capitals in the title. Please, you should unify it. - Line 51: if you decide to include these cites, please, check how doing it. Introduction: The contents of the introduction need to be related and exposed following a somewhat brighter argument line. - Line 66-67: please include the cite/s for this definition. - Lines 76, 97: the number must be before the "." - Line 96: Change “In our country…” by “In Spain…” - Line 97-98: Consider strengthening the rationale for this statement. - Line 99: Rewrite in a proper way mean and standard deviation. - Lines 99 to 106: Please, consider to examine this paragraph. It seems not clear enough. Something is missing in the last sentence. - Line 110, 112: Review the cite. - Lines 114-116: Please, consider to examine this paragraph. It seems not clear enough. - Line 124: Compare and concur the aim of the abstract and the introduction. - Lines 125-126: Review the cites. Material and methods: - Line 148: the data were collected December 2016 – January 2017? Have authors thought about include data from 2019 or 2020? - There were used the same method of data collection in patients and physicians? Please, clarify the method and variables for each group of participants. Results - What is the range age of the patients? - Line 236: It is explained that “digestive system/metabolism” is one of the most popular group prescriptions, but in table 2, this group is identified as “metabolism and alimentary tract”. Please, check and change this issue. Discussion -Line 349: The authors affirm the absence of studies with MAI quantitative data based on a 2013 article. Please check that the absence of evidence exists currently. The conclusion section is missing. Tables: check them and give the format according to the “Submission Guidelines”. Table 1: Complete with additional results (age range for patients & physicians, male gender, …) Table 3: Consider to remove column 1. References: Check and make changes following the “Submission Guidelines”. Reviewer #2: General comments - Pay attention to punctuation for instance in lines 76, 97. Introduction - Lines 67-68, can the authors point to a reference to back up it? Method - Why did you choose this inclusion criterion for the age of 74, for your study? - Delete line 141, “Participating physicians did not receive financial compensation”. - Line 143: “from three Spanish regions …”, how were these regions selected? Based on which method? - Line 155: First time an abbreviation is used, the term should be spelled out in full. Results - This section needs minor rectifications. Please consult with a statistician for how the section should be journalistic way written (lines 223-131). Discussion - Line 343: delete (5 studies). - Lines 351 (… differ from those found in the literature.), 355 (… than in the previous studies): can the authors point to some reference to back up them? Limitations - Line 427, delete (Among the main limitations) and then add all limitations of your study. Also, please add “Conclusion” section and mention main findings of your study, implications. ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email us at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step.
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PONE-D-20-04779R1 Potentially Inappropriate prescriptions according to explicit and implicit criteria in patients with multimorbidity and polypharmacy. MULTIPAP: A cross-sectional study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. ROGERO, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 31 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Prof, Mojtaba Vaismoradi, PhD, MScN, BScN Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer #1: Dear author thanks for increasing manuscript quality with your efforts. Nevertheless, some of the changes suggested are missing yet. Line 39-41: sample size has been removed from the abstract. Please, add it again. Line 51-52: Add the bibliographic reference of each criterion: STOPP 2014, STOPP 2008, Beers 2019 & Beers 2015. Introduction: I suggested in previous inform: "The contents of the introduction need to be related and exposed following a somewhat brighter argument line" and nothing has been done with this issue. In response to reviewers, it is answered to my question about the method of data collection in patients and physicians. Please, include in the manuscript, in the same manner, the explanation given to reviewers. Also, I would like to request again that be included the range age of patients in the results section, despite you explained it was an inclusion criteria. Reviewer 2 and 1 agree with a conclusion section is needed in the manuscript. Please, consider to include it. Reviewer #2: The only challenge to the paper is that it needs a bit of editing for use of English grammar. With that editing I recommend publication. Table 1: Substitute “Female, Male” instead of “Women, Men”. Lines 408-410: Grammar needs to be reviewed. [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-20-04779R2 Potentially Inappropriate prescriptions according to explicit and implicit criteria in patients with multimorbidity and polypharmacy. MULTIPAP: A cross-sectional study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. ROGERO, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 29 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Prof, Mojtaba Vaismoradi, PhD, MScN, BScN Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer #1: Dear author/s thanks for your efforts to increase manuscript quality. Now Introduction section's ideas are ordered following a line of argument that will enjoy the PLOS ONE readers. Thanks for taking into account all my last recommendations. Nevertheless, a very minor change is needed. Lines 40-42- In order to increase clarity, this is my suggestion: "[...] according to American Geriatrics Society Beers Criteria® (2015, 2019), the Screening Tool of Older Person’s Prescription -STOPP- criteria (2008, 2014), and the Medication Appropriateness Index -MAI- criteria." [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Potentially Inappropriate prescriptions according to explicit and implicit criteria in patients with multimorbidity and polypharmacy. MULTIPAP: A cross-sectional study PONE-D-20-04779R3 Dear Dr. ROGERO, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Prof, Mojtaba Vaismoradi, PhD, MScN, BScN Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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PONE-D-20-04779R3 Potentially Inappropriate prescriptions according to explicit and implicit criteria in patients with multimorbidity and polypharmacy. MULTIPAP: A cross-sectional study Dear Dr. Rogero-Blanco: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Professor Mojtaba Vaismoradi Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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