Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 16, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-22054 Pain burden, sensory profile and inflammatory cytokines of dogs with naturally-occurring neuropathic pain treated with gabapentin alone or with meloxicam PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Steagall, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 02 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: PONE-D-20-22054 This randomized, cross-over, placebo-controlled study attempts to characterize the sensory profile and pain burden, as well as response to gabapentin and meloxicam therapy, in client-owned dogs diagnosed with presumptive neuropathic pain (NeuP) associated with a lesion of the nervous system. Sensory profile and pain burden were determined at presentation and after a 7-day therapy with placebo, gabapentin alone, or gabapentin+meloxicam. Gabapentin treatments were administered in random order but placebo was always the second treatment. Sensory profiles were determined by measuring the response thresholds to electrical and mechanical stimuli in all four limbs. Descending noxious inhibitor control (DNIC) was assessed as the difference between mechanical withdrawal thresholds before and after a conditioning stimulus consisting of applying pressure using an inflatable cuff (200 mmHg) for 60 seconds. The authors have previously validated the methodology. Pain burden was assessed with the use of 3 distinct clinical metrology instruments, none of which have been validated for assessing NeuP in dogs. Serum concentrations of a panel of cytokines and of gabapentin were determined. Sensory profiles and pain burden outcomes were compared to results obtained from a separate group of healthy dogs. Results showed that sensory thresholds in NeuP dogs were similar to those of heathy dogs, and they were not affected by any of the treatments. However, DNIC was significantly impaired in NeuP dogs compared to healthy controls, and this was normalized by gabapentin, but not gabapentin+meloxicam or placebo, therapy. Results of pain burden varied depending on the clinical instrument used. Plasma cytokine levels were not significantly different between NeuP and healthy controls and there were no overall effects of treatment. The authors concluded that “Dogs with NeuP have deficient inhibitory pain mechanisms. Pain burden was reduced after gabapentin and gabapentin-meloxicam depending on the pain scoring instrument used”. This is an overall well-designed study with the use of placebo and blinding. It is an extremely important research topic with relevant findings. My concerns with the study are listed below. - Major concerns: The main concern with the study is the assessment of pain burden using pain scoring instruments that were not validated for assessing NeuP in dogs. The results are thus inconsistent across instruments, which preclude assertive conclusions to be made. Too much time is spent discussing the results obtained with these instruments and the resulting conclusion is highly questionable. However, the authors used validated methodology to assess DNIC, which is highly relevant in this study, and should be the guiding metric for discussing the results and final conclusions. - Minor concerns: A minor concern is the many variables/outcomes compared, which could lead to statistical inflation, and no mention of correction for multiple comparisons. Other/specific concerns are listed below: Line 134: Were the capsules/tablets rounded to the nearest whole capsule or ½ tablet? You state they were “available” but were they actually administered as such? Please clarify. Line 260: Why did you log-transformed the data prior to comparison? Line 261: Which software was used for statistical analyzes? Line 262: How did you determine symmetry? Line 269: The explanation for pooling the data is not clear. If you pooled NeuP and control data, then you have a single data set and nothing to compare against… please clarify. Line 273: So, the log transformation was carried out to normalize the non-normally distributed data, but TNF-a concentrations continued to be non-normally distributed after log transformation? Please clarify. Figure 2: Poor figure quality. Impossible to read. Line 290: You may wish to present the dog breeds in descending order according to n. Were the control dogs matched for breed? What were their breed? Line 304: Was this dog with history of food allergies excluded? Line 338-342: Were these differences in delta-MNT statistically significant? Line 437-438: Unfortunately pain burden results are not convincing due to the dependency on instruments that have not been validated for NeuP. Line 457: It is very interesting that meloxicam appeared to have negatively affected the improvement in delta-MNT obtained with gabapentin alone. You should try to discuss this further as there is anecdotal (at least) evidence that COX inhibitors may worsen neuropathic pain and certainly there is scientific evidence of their inefficacy against neuropathic pain. Line 492-493: Some critical discussion is warranted on the significant decrease in CSOM scores during placebo treatment compared to baseline (Table 3), and regarding the lack of significance between placebo and treatments with all instruments (except the CMPS-SF for gabapentin/meloxicam). Line 504-513: Although there are statistically significant differences, the data presented in Table 3 are not really convincing that meloxicam/gabapentin was superior to gabapentin alone. Their averages (and SEM and ranges) are almost identical, and the differences were primarily related to presentation values, not to placebo. Even for CMPS-SF, where gabapentin/meloxicam was significantly different than placebo (but the veterinarian was aware of placebo therapy) but gabapentin alone was not, the means (2.9 and 2.5) are essentially the same. Is a difference of 0.4 clinically relevant? Is this small difference worthwhile, especially considering the adverse effect profile of meloxicam? The argument that meloxicam could potentially have relieved pain from other conditions such as osteoarthritis is not entirely convincing either, since differences were not detected with CBPI, which was validated for dogs with osteoarthritis. Line 514-515: In addition to the placebo effect, this is such an important aspect of this study that needs to be strongly considered in the discussion. Considering that there were no significant differences between placebo and both treatments, what your data really suggests is that resting+placebo would be an adequate therapy for NeuP in dogs. The significant difference between CMPS-SF and placebo can’t be entirely trusted as the veterinarian evaluating pain was aware of placebo treatment. Line 539-540: The gabapentin treatments were no better than resting+placebo. Unfortunately your study was not able to show that gabapentin with our without meloxicam is better than rest/placebo in treating NeuP in dogs. Line 577-578: The results of sensory profile (DNIC) are convincing but not the results obtained with the subjective instruments (CSOM, CBPI, CMPS-SF). The fact that results were dependent on the instrument used shows that they are not reliable for the purpose of this study and cannot be used to draw conclusions. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Pain burden, sensory profile and inflammatory cytokines of dogs with naturally-occurring neuropathic pain treated with gabapentin alone or with meloxicam PONE-D-20-22054R1 Dear Dr. Steagall, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Tamil Selvan Anthonymuthu, Ph. D Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for revising the manuscript. It is much improved and I have no further questions/comments. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No |
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PONE-D-20-22054R1 Pain burden, sensory profile and inflammatory cytokines of dogs with naturally-occurring neuropathic pain treated with gabapentin alone or with meloxicam Dear Dr. Steagall: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Tamil Selvan Anthonymuthu Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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