Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-06109 An automatic adaptive method to combine summary statistics in approximate Bayesian computation PLOS ONE Dear Mr Harrison, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. As mentioned by the two referees the topic of the paper is relevant and the contributions can be of interesting. However, the manuscript needs considerable revision, including comparison with other methods and a number of important clarifications. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Jun 12 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This paper need a revision on presentation as the true posterior when available should be presented. Limit of applicability should be clearly stated, for instance, does it work with improper priors ? Reviewer #2: The paper tackles a very interesting problem in the Bayesian context (within the intractable likelihood framework). The authors propose an adaptive procedure for selecting the summary statistic (and/or the distance, see my questions below) in an ABC method. The novel method is based on the nearest neighbour (NN) approach. As I said above, this work contains interesting material in my opinion. Moreover, the paper is well-written and well-structured. However, I have some suggestions for improving the quality of the manuscript and its possible impact. See below. My first two observations are even more general than the contents and goals of the paper (they are regarding ABC techniques in general). - It would be very interesting if the authors clarify (in the introduction of Section 1.2 with a clear remark) what is the difference in choosing a distance and a summary statistics in ABC, or directly assume an approximation of the likelihood function (and then use standard inference computational methods). To be more clear: if in your algorithm 1 (or just an ABC-rejection method) you use a soft condition considering for instance a weighting function \\exp(-d(s(x),s(y))) (instead of an hard condition as you have in line 10 of Algorithm 1), I believe that the ABC computational methods (ABC-SMC or ABC-rejection, etc.) can be interpreted as standard computational techniques assuming a particular approximation of the likelihood. Then, choosing the distance and summary statistic is equivalent to approximate your “costly” and/or intractable likelihood function. I believe that this discussion/clarification is relevant for your paper. - Another point to clarify: you have the distance d(.,.) and the summary statistic s(x), but actually we need to learn the combination of both d(s(x),s(y)). What you are “learning”? d(.,.), s(x) or both (in the sense of “both together ”)? I believe the last option. But it should be clarified in different part of the text (also in the abstract and introduction). For instance, I believe that the method in M U Gutmann, R Dutta, S Kaski, and J Corander. Likelihood-free inference via classification. Statistics and Computing,8(2):411-425, 2018, is learning both together of just the distance d(.,.)? please clarify also this point, discussing some connections to the other papers in the literature. - Related to the previous point: the first formula in Section 2 seems to show that you are only learning the distance (or more specifically, the weights in a weighted Euclidean distance). Please clarify. - It is not clear why you choose the Hellinger distance. Is there some specific reason? Moreover it seems that you use a more generic distance at page 6. Please clarify. - Regarding the state-of-the-art in the introduction: it is quite poor. In order to improve the quality of the paper and its impact, I suggest to extend the state-of-the-art discussion including also references to noisy Monte Carlo methods and other computational methods for intractable likelihood, for instance, Murray, I., Ghahramani, Z., MacKay, D.: MCMC for doubly-intractable distributions. Proceedings of the Twenty-Second Conference on Uncertainty in Artificial Intelligence (UAI2006), 1-8 (2006) Moller, J., Pettit, A., Reeves, R., Bertheksen, K.: An efficient Markov Chain Monte Carlo method for distributions with intractable normalising constants. Biometrika 93, 451-458 (2006) Alquier, P., Friel, N., Everitt, R., Boland, A.: Noisy Monte Carlo: Convergence of Markov chains with approximate transition kernels. Statistics and Computing 26(2), 29-47 (2016) Medina-Aguayo, F.J., Lee, A., Roberts, G.O.: Stability of noisy Metropolis-Hastings. Statistics and Computing 26(6), 1187-1211 (2016) The particle MCMC methods could be included within the the pseudo-marginal approaches (see your ref. [1]) and also with the multiple Try Metropolis (MTM) algorithms. Indeed, evening the MTM schemes we can consider that there is an implicit approximation of the marginal likelihood seem for instance, L. Martino, "A Review of Multiple Try MCMC algorithms for Signal Processing", Digital Signal Processing, Volume 75, Pages: 134-152, 2018 L. Martino, F. Leisen, J. Corander, "On Multiple Try Schemes and the Particle Metropolis-Hastings Algorithm", viXra:1409.0051, 2014. I believe that this point also deserves to be mentioned. - Can you say more regarding the adaptation of the tolerance in Algorithm 2? this is quite important since the distance and the tolerance plays an complementary role in your hard condition at line 19 of Algorithm 2. How robust is your algorithm with respect to a change of the adaptation of the tolerance? can you show some results keeping fixed the tolerance? - Your algorithm 2 has the additional computational cost of optimizing your weights. You should compare with a standard ABC algorithm without optimization but with extra- samples (i.e., with more samples than your method) in order to have a fair comparison with your method. ********** 6. 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