Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-06106 Exploring collective emotion transmission in face-to-face interactions PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Zheng, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Jun 06 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study explored the collective emotion transmission in face-to-face interactions. The results show that the collective emotion transmission model consisted of emotion diffusion, contagion, and accumulation. Collective emotion was transmitted from high arousal members to low arousal members. There were a few elements of the manuscript the derail from its overall clarity and impact. These concerns and others are detailed below. A revision of these sections would improve the quality of this study. 1. In Conclusions line 357-358, the authors claimed that the collective emotion was transmitted from high arousal members to low arousal members. What kind of collective emotions? Should be very specific, negative? However, I don’t see any data to show how the arousal level was measured and which subject, how many subjects have a high or low arousal? 2. In the Introduction, the authors have 3 hypotheses, but in the Discussion section the authors didn’t talk about how their results support or reject each of hypothesis. It would be beneficial to the reader if the authors can discuss each of their hypothesis based on their findings. 3. This study adopted the coefficient of variation as the indicator of collective emotion convergence. In line 193-194, The author claimed, the coefficient of variation can better reflect collective emotion convergence. Why the coefficient of variation can better reflect collective emotion convergence? Any refs to support this? 4. Regarding the experiment procedure, how many people do transmitter talk to? Are the transmitters award of or were told they were transmitters? 5. In Results section line 206-207, t (56), t (55). Why the df of the two paired sample t-test is different? 6. In line 133-134, the author claimed, “The pilot study showed that this material can induce negative collective emotion of the participants.” However, there is no data support this. It would be great if the authors can include their data from the pilot study to back their claim. 7. In line 179 after deleting the missing data, what do you mean deleting missing data? I suppose it should be excluding subject who has missing data. What kind of data were missing? How many? 8. Regarding the subject, are the subject middle school student or high school student? In the Abstract it says middle school, however in other places it says high school student. Need to be accurate and consistent. 9. The figure legend should put under nether each figure and it is better to put figure within the main text so that it is easier to read. 10. There are some text formatting issues in line 142-143 (Cronbach’sα). Please correct. Reviewer #2: COMMENTS This study aimed to explore how emotions are transmitted from some members to the whole group in a face-to-face environment. Through a social event, 158 middle school students were induced to feel anger and disgust. The present study randomly assigned 1/3 of them as senders and others as receivers. Transmitters shared their feelings with the receivers, and the receivers then communicate with other group members. The results show that negative collective emotions are transmitted through the flow from high arousal members to low arousal members. It is converged through the role of emotional contagion. It is accumulated through the role of an emotional cycle, and in the process, feedback strengthens the intensity of emotion. This study shows that the mode of collective emotional transmission consists of three parts: emotional diffusion, contagion and accumulation. This model helps to understand the inherent characteristics of collective emotion transmission, enriches the study of collective emotion, and provides a theoretical reference for the monitoring and management of group events in the future. Although this study is interesting, the following issues need to be addressed before it is accepted and published. 1. There are some typos and Chinglish expression in the whole manuscript. Please ask native speaker to help modify the language. For example, in line 54, “Collective emotqqions” is a very obvious spelling mistake. In line 142, “with Cronbach’sαof .804” is also a typo. There are still a lot of problems like this, please revise them carefully. In line 211 to 212,“Negative and positive emotion mean, standard deviation, and coefficient of variance before and after collective emotion transmission” is a very typical Chinglish expression. There are many similar expressions in the text, please modify them one by one. 2. “Much research has been performed on cyber collective emotions.” There is a lack of references here. Please add the related references. 3. The structure of the introduction is a little loose. In this part, the present study puts forward relevant hypotheses based on previous studies. But the two hypotheses are separated by several paragraphs, and at the end of reading, you will forget the previous hypothesis. It is suggested that a paragraph should be added at the end of the introduction to explain the purpose of this study and the scientific problems to be solved, which will be clearer. 4. With regard to the collective emotion induction, I am wondering whether it is beyond their cognition to ask middle school students between the ages of 12 and 14 to rate events with complex political and historical backgrounds? 5. In the part of data analysis, what are the criteria and basis for deleting data? This paper does not elaborate on this in detail. 6. Negative emotions include only anger and disgust, while positive emotions include happiness, excitement and satisfaction. Do you consider the problem of quantity mismatch? In addition, are there corresponding criteria and references for dividing positive and negative emotions? 7. The discussion section is not enough to discuss in detail whether the results are consistent or inconsistent with previous studies, and the relevant explanations. After a brief summary of the research results, the study gives the collective emotion transmission model, and then detailed the current results, but did not explain the relationship between this model and the results of this study. What I am very curious about is whether the results of this study support this model, or do not support this model, or can it be modified? I hope to see the corresponding discussion in the revised draft. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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