Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-09701 Amplified glucagon signaling mitigates congenital hyperinsulinism associated hypoglycemia in the Sur1-/- mouse model PLOS ONE Dear Dr. De Léon, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Jun 27 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors describe the effects of or prkar1a knockdown in the liver in WT C57Bl/6 mice and in SUR-/- mice - a model for neonatal hyperinsulinemic hypoglycemia. Overall the manuscript has a logical structure and flow, the methods are sound and the data and adequately performed statistical analysis support in large parts the interpretation and conclusions by the authors. Caveats to the manuscript: The title indicates that glucagon signaling is amplified in the liver. This is inaccurate because glucagon activates multiple signaling pathways in the liver. The studies have up-regulated the PKA arm of glucagon signaling and not glucagon recptro signaling in the entirety of all possible signaling pathways. This should be corrected in the title. The method of generating liver targeted siRNA directed to the liver is not provided. It would be difficult to assess whether these methods are adequate and rigorous. The connection between kisspeptin and insulin secretion is mentioned but the authors do not provide sufficient data to support any connection in their experimental system. This should be clarified in the discussion section. A time course in the development of increased in kisspeptin production and reduced insulin secretion in SUR -/- would be helpful. Such data was not generated and it may be useful for the authors to discuss this relationship Figure legends should specify whether the data relates to studies in WT mice or to studies in SUR -/- mice. Figure S1 legend is insufficient in describing the presented data. Reviewer #2: Soundarapandian et al have addressed the clinical problem of hyperinsulinism-induced hypoglycemia (HI). This disorder is poorly managed and is currently treated with therapies that include replacement of glucagon and drugs which suppress insulin release. In this study, the authors propose a new approach which involves enhancing hepatic endogenous glucose production (EGP) by targeting the suppression of the regulatory subunit of PKA, Prkar1a. This molecule is a negative regulator of PKA and by disinhibition through siRNA therapeutics they propose to enhance EGP independently of glucagon administration. This is novel and intriguing. The paper appears to have been put together in haste; some panels are jumbled in Figs 3 and 4, several supplementary figs have been added which could be consolidated, aspects of the supporting literature have been omitted and the methods are incomplete. More worrying is that many of the datasets have potentially valuable trends but fail to reach statistical validity. Thus, despite some promising actions of siPrkar1a on control rodents, the effects in HI mice are unconvincing under most conditions and fail to reach statistical significance despite adequate replicates. 1. Methods/ siPrkar1Controls. (a) There appear to be no publications relating to the (proprietary?) siRNA probesets and the authors have included no information on the sequences of their probes or cited supporting data. This needs to be included. Three probe sets are included AD-76409, AD-76410 and AD-76411 but only AD-76410 (L130) is described as liver-targeted. Please clarify. In some experiments you state which probe was used in the legend, but in others you do not – please clarify throughout. Also, the concentration of probe(s) has not been reported for a number of studies. (b) As Prkar1a is not solely associated with PKA, include additional controls to show that PKA is the only modified protein and not for example AKAPs, ARDGEFs, etc. (c) There is no controls data illustrating that scrambled probesets are ineffective. In the absence of any publications on AD-76409, AD-76410 and AD-76411, please include. (d) Are the actions of the siPrkar1a manipulations reversible. Please include. (e) I am concerned that some of the most dramatic actions – and the statistically significant effects, of siPrkar1a are only seen at the end of the study periods. How confident can we be that hepatic function has not been compromised at this point in time? (f) L135-L136. I disagree, siPrkar1treatment has a positive impact on PKA protein expression – this is not significant, but it cannot be described as ‘no discernible effect’. (g) L156-157 The actions of siPrkar1treatment on glucose levels in the PPT (Fig 1E) are not significant, this needs to me made clear in this sentence. (h) L176-L177 the statement that “AD76409 and AD-76410 led to a significant upregulation of G6Pase, PEPCK, and PGC-1α” is simply not true; AD-76410 had no action on G6Pase. 2. Figures 1D, 2E and 3D shown inconsistent actions of the siRNAs on the expression of the gluconeogenesis targets. This is best exemplified by the data involving AD-76410 and G6Pase expression. This is worrying, please clarify. The profile of targets studied is also different when the investigators used Sur1-/- mice (Fig 4F) for which there is no explanation. Please clarify and make the profiles consistent. 3. siPrkar1treatment appears to induce a consistent increase in Kiss1 gene expression and this is used by the authors to support their hypothesis that siPrkar1has the dual action of enhancing EGP and inhibiting insulin release. However, the is no discussion or citation to the fact that there is a considerable body of literature indicating that kisspeptin has a stimulatory and not inhibitory action on insulin secretion. Can the authors please clarify why this literature is missing from their paper? 4. To support your hypothesis and the data presented in the paper, please assay for kisspeptin in the pre-clinical models. 5. The data modelling HI by exogenous hyperinsulinism has weaknesses and does not fully support the authors. Figure 3A clearly illustrates that whilst siPrkar1treatment enhances plasma glucose, it cannot reverse insulin-induced hypoglycaemia. I agree that there is a trend to abrogate the actions of exogenous insulin, but this is only a trend and not significant. Why does exogenous insulin fail to elevate �-hydroxy butyrate in the control animals (Fig 3B not 3C)? It seems to work OK in the siPrkar1-treated group, but not the controls. Insulin measurements (Fig 3C not 3B) reveal a considerable range of basal (fed?) insulin levels in the mice for which there is no explanation and it is not clear whether the glucose dataset was obtained from fed or fasting mice (Fig 3A)? I also found the insulin measurement dataset confusing; the authors used different ELISA kits to detect human and mouse insulin, but it is not clear which kit has been used for the date in Fig 3C. It appears to me the assay is not able to distinguish the insulins. This needs to be made clear as both the controls and the insulin-pump animals have the same plasma insulin levels and this negates the model which should after all be hyperinsulinemic. 6. The HI Sur1-/- mice datasets detract from the findings. First, the plasma insulin levels are generally lower and not higher than the controls, which is surprising considering these mice are a model of hyperinsulinism. Second, insulin secretion was not suppressed by siPrkar1treatment which goes against their own work (Fig 3) and their explanation for how kisspeptin is relevant to the study. I agree that there is an increase in glucose levels in the mice and that this would be of benefit in a translational capacity. However, this is underpowered as the variance is high and it cannot to linked to an action on the beta-cells in this model of HI. Third, on L244-246 the authors make no comment upon the fact that siPrkar1treatment has either has no action or decreases in the expression of G6Pase which is markedly different to the what happens in non HI mice. Fourth, despite sufficient replications of data, hardly any of the in vivo profiling studies reach statistical significance or validity and this weakens rather than strengthens their arguments. Finally, without including the WT controls, it is hard to conclude the siRNA treatment reversed the hyperinsulinism in these animals. Sur1KO are not hyperinsulinemic but have lost first phase glucose-stimulated insulin secretion. Unlike humans in the fasting state, they are not hyperinsulinemic. Thus, the question whether a Prkar1a knockdown could reverse some effects of hyperinsulinism cannot be addressed in this mouse model. Thus, the authors show impact on glucose production, but not that it has an impact in face of high insulin. ********** 6. 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Activation of Protein Kinase A (PKA) signaling mitigates congenital hyperinsulinism associated hypoglycemia in the Sur1-/- mouse model PONE-D-20-09701R1 Dear Dr. De Léon, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Michael Bader Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have addressed the comments by this reviewer The short title is misleading. It would be more appropriate to indicate that Prkar1a KD mitigates HI The lack of availability of Kisspeptin ELISA is problematic, but the authors can not be held to a standard that is impossible to meet. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No |
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