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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The paper addresses an interesting and important approach to dealing with lockdown exit in a covid19 epidemic and the idea deserves to have a wider audience in academic and policy circles. However, the paper is NOT novel in this, either in the specific ideas proposed for covid19 or the simulations. Multiple papers have been published prior to this paper (also prior to the pre-print released mid April), and others on the broader ideas of switching quarantines in disease outbreaks. e.g. the first one directly on this topic: On Fast Multi-Shot COVID-19 Interventions for Post Lock-Down Mitigation M. Bin, P. Cheung, E. Crisostomi, P. Ferraro, H. Lhachemi, R. Murray-Smith, C. Myant, T. Parisini, R. Shorten, S. Stein, L. Stone, https://arxiv.org/abs/2003.09930 appeard 22nd March 2020. a follow on paper published on April 7th Containing COVID-19 with a two-day workweek, Uri Alon, and expanded to : https://www.medrxiv.org/content/10.1101/2020.04.04.20053579v4 also, related from April 3rd, Alternating quarantine for sustainable mitigation of COVID-19 Dror Meidan, Nava Schulamann, Reuven Cohen, Simcha Haber, Eyal Yaniv, Ronit Sarid, Baruch Barzel https://arxiv.org/abs/2004.01453 and the broader literature on switching quarantine: X., Liu and P., Stechlinski, The Switched SIR Model. Infectious Disease Modeling, Nonlinear Systems and Complexity, vol 19. Springer, Cham, 2017. L., Zhu, and Y., Zhou, The Dynamics of an SIQS Epidemic Model with Pulse Quarantine. IEEE Chinese Control and Decision Conference, pp. 3546-3551, 2008. J., Lai, S., Gao, Y., Liu, and X., Meng, Impulsive Switching Epidemic Model with Benign Worm Defense and Quarantine Strategy. Complexity, 2020. Liu, X., and Stechlinkski, P., Infectious Disease Modeling - A Hybrid System Approach, Nonlinear Systems and Complexity, Series Editor: Albert C.J. Luo, Springer Nature, 2017. The authors propose a 'novel' addition in Section 2 where people can move from Exposed directly to Recovered if they have no symptoms, but there is no evidence provided of examples in the published literature that these people do not move through an infectious stage before being Recovered, which would invalidate some of the model findings. The idea of asymptomatic infectious is better modelled in Giordano, G., Blanchini, F., Bruno, R., Colaneri, P., Di Filippo, A., Di Matteo, A., Colaneri, M., and the COVID19 IRCCS San Matteo Pavia Task Force, A SIDARTHE Model of COVID-19 Epidemic in Italy, 2020, https://arxiv.org/abs/2003.09861. (since published in nature medicine) which was the basis for the simulations of the Bin et al switching lockdown above. The paper has very frequent errors in the English, in the text and figures. Too many examples to enumerate in the review. There is an apparent error in equation (3), should it not be I(t) = M(t)+C(t) rather than dI(t)/dt as I is just a container for M and C? or dI(t)/dt = dM(t)/dt + dC(t)/dt? There is an apparent error in equation (12) should it not be I_t = M_t+C_t rather than I_t+1 = M_t+C_t So I think before being publishable the authors need to fix some of the model description errors, better justify the assumptions around asymptomatics and relate their approach to prior publications (long term and recent) in the field. Also they really need to clarify what extra benefit we get from their simulations compared to the previously published ones which often used more advanced models to test their simulations, and had more rigorous sensitivity analysis. Reviewer #2: The paper title “Feasibility Study of Mitigation and Suppression Intervention Strategies for Controlling COVID-19 Outbreaks in London and Wuhan” modifies SERI model. Their SEMCR that access the effectiveness of mitigation, suppression and hybrid interventions for controlling COVID-19 outbreaks in London and Wuhan. The work is very straight forward and its hard to see any significance. Comparing London with Wuhan seems not a good fit. Both cities have different culture and life style. Similarly, Wuhan was the first city hit by corona and many things were not known by then. London had ample time with more information (spread rate, incubation period) to deal with cOVID-19 disease. More comments: In the model, it is assumed that go R directly. It seems in covid-19 this assumption is not invalid. Even if someone gets recovered, he/she gets infected. May be the justification could be that no symptoms are shown and one recovered. However, still the person can infect others without showing symptoms. This point need discussion or any references from literature. "We find that in the early outbreaks of COVID-19, some portion of exposed people may have no obvious symptoms or only develop as mild cases, but they cannot get a test due to lack of testing kits. This group of populations might be self-recovered in some days, but will not realize they were infected". The same is true even today, You cam consider undiagnosed cases too. In many figures, 10 ^ is used. Proper units such as million for x-axis should be used in figures i.e, Thousand, million etc. 10 powers are hard to understand. The statement “like immediate lock-down cities at epicenter or mitigation that slows down but not stopping epidemic for reducing peak healthcare demand’ needs explanation. This reviewer understands when you delay the spread, peak can be automatically lowered. Abstract is too long, around 450 words. Take R0 of U, and then London. For clear understanding, you can compare figures for London “ with intervention” and "without intervention “ side by side. Reviewer #3: In this work impact of strategies such as strict isolation, mitigation, and interventions are considered for COVID-19 spread in Wuhan and London. The paper is simple and discusses mainly a comparison of two cities based on limited data for COVID-19. In current form, the work seems just an extension of existing disease spread model. It is suggested to add more cities and compare the spread in addition to disease dynamics in particular regions/cities. R = 3 seems very high. I know this submission was made early bit as per latest UK data, R=0.7-1. It will be interesting to consider this point in experimentation. There is a lot of unnecessary text in figures which make them heavy. For instance see Figure 1, mitigation intervention from 32 nd day. There is also another text filed “the 32nd day” with arrow pointing to 32nd day. Again, there is a dashed line for the same thing. These things should be avoided. It is understood and not need to add such text/arrows/lines for the same thing. More details of statistical or mathematical model are needed. Authors may add more parameters. It will be interesting to run experiment for major cities. The work is interesting but the scope is very limited. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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