Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-12873 Comparative study of neighboring Holm-oak and olive trees- belowground microbial communities subjected to different soil management PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Fernández-López, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Authors are invited to carefully follow suggestions from the Reviewer in order to improve the ms and render it acceptable for publicatin. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 31 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This report describes bacterial and fungal communities associated with bulk soil and with tree roots at a single location. Replicates represent separately sampled trees. The work appears to be well done, and useful information is reported. One weakness of the site & experimental design is a confounding of plant identity with management history/soil properties when Holm oak rhizosphere samples are contrasted with olive rhizosphere samples. I think this confounding should be highlighted more frequently and explicitly in the discussion. Are there also topographical or other aspects of microsite that are confounded in this contrast? (For instance, was there some soil or topographical feature that influenced where the planting of olive trees ceased?) Sites within metres of each other may be ‘worlds apart’ microbiologically speaking, if the soil properties are different. I appreciate the effort that was made to ensure that the collected soil samples were representative. Given how the study is set up and motivated, some mention should be given to the detection of Verticillium in the sequence data (including if there was no detection of Verticillium!). Please clarify how the data were treated to create the ‘OL’ aggregation. Was this treated as n = 10 (5 Fra samples + 5 Pic samples)? How does this relate to the description in the S4 Fig. legend: “OL: average of Frantoio and Picual rhizospheres”? Figure 6 is missing from the submission! - I would encourage the authors to adjust the wording of the title so that the use of dashes is not required. Throughout, I don’t think there needs to be a dash in ‘Holm-oak’. - There is a spelling error in the short title - Ln 27 (and elsewhere): the term ‘next generation sequencing’ does not age well. The ‘next generation sequencing’ of 10 years ago is already obsolete… - Ln 27: I think the acronyms would be easier for the reader if you used HOR for ‘Holm oak rhizosphere’ and OLR ‘olive tree rhizosphere’ - Ln 169: there is no utility in defining an acronym that never gets used again in the paper - Ln 188: S2 Fig should not be referenced before S1 Fig. - Ln 189: ‘massive sequencing’ should be ‘massively parallel sequencing’ - Ln 217: Please indicate concisely in the results how the observed community profile for the reference community matched the expected profile. Were negative control samples also included? (i.e., blank DNA extractions, carried all the way through sequencing) - Ln 267, 470 & elsewhere: the term ‘bacteriome’ here is an unusual usage; generally, this term refers to a specialized organ within insects that houses microbial symbionts. - Ln 267 (and throughout): ‘core taxa’ might be preferable to ‘cores’ - Ln 282 and throughout: the Bray-Curtis index is correctly referred to as a dissimilarity (i.e., bounded at 1 as a maximum), but the UniFrac scores are distances (also at Ln 347 and elsewhere). Methods should be described for building the tree from which UniFrac scores were calculated. - Ln 543: are these tree roots woody? There may only be active exudation at the root tips or specific regions within the root system. Fig. 1: The y-axis labels should appear next to the y-axis, rather than as a title above each panel. The legend should indicate which summary statistics are indicated by the boxplots (e.g., is the centre line the mean or the median?). Either each individual data point should be made visible, or the legend should indicate the sample size. Statistically significant differences, if any, should be indicated on the figure. What are the error bars around the individual outlying points in the A; Chao1 panel? The order of the treatments could be improved; for instance, currently rhizosphere samples are before bulk soil samples for Holm oak, but the order is opposite for the olive tree samples. Fig. 2: The legend incorrectly refers to these as ‘principal components’ ordinations (they are principal coordinates ordinations). Colours appear to differ slightly between panels for “OLB” and “Pic” treatments. Fig. 3: The order of the treatments could be improved; for instance, currently rhizosphere samples are before bulk soil samples for Holm oak, but the order is opposite for the olive tree samples. I thought the sequences originating from chloroplasts were culled, yet chloroplast still shows up here? Fig. 4, Fig. 5: ‘Statistically significant genera’ is not a meaningful phrase; it is actually ‘genera whose relative abundance differed significantly’. The figure legends should indicate the statistical test. Genus names should be italicized. Supplementary Material: In the table of soil properties, the precision with which values are reported should be consistent across samples. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Comparative study of neighboring Holm oak and olive trees-belowground microbial communities subjected to different soil management PONE-D-20-12873R1 Dear Dr. Fernández-López, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Sabrina Sarrocco Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Authors modified the text according to Reviwer's suggestions. the paper is now accepted for publication in PlosOne. Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-12873R1 Comparative study of neighboring Holm oak and olive trees- belowground microbial communities subjected to different soil management Dear Dr. Fernández-López: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr Sabrina Sarrocco Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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