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PONE-D-19-22434 Selective dorsal rhizotomy; evidence on cost-effectiveness from England PLOS ONE Dear author, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The topic of the manuscript is relevant; however, reviewers have expressed important methodological bias which make the manuscript unacceptable in its current form. I sugest the authors a deep reformulation of the manuscript according to the reviewers' suggestions in methods and consequently, in the discussion and conclusions. A new control cohort for comparison would be advisable and efforts to address analyses bias are encouraged. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by May 9th. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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We will update your Data Availability statement on your behalf to reflect the information you provide. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: I Don't Know Reviewer #3: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This report by Pennington et al. is a cost-effectiveness analysis of children undergoing selective dorsal rhizotomy. This current report is a subanalysis of economic and effectiveness outcomes as part of a larger clinical trial through the Commissioning through Evaluation program. The comparator group was a separate cohort of children from a previous (decades earlier) trial of Canadian children. Overall the manuscript is quite well prepared, with clear descriptors of the methods, statistics, and analysis. Although not a strict criteria for publication, the topic of this report is quite important and impactful, as cost-effectiveness studies continue to gain importance in health system analyses. However, I do have some concerns that may benefit from consideration by the authors for clarification. Specifically: 1) I would defer to review by a health economics expert, but I question some of the terminology and methods used for this analysis. As I understand this report, the test group of children is compared to a cohort of children using previously published data (data not collected in the context of the CtE trial). In this scenario, calculation of ICERs is not appropriate, rather one should calculate the marginal cost-utility ratio. It is unclear to me whether the authors so such, including measuring the effect of treatment in each cohort in terms of a standardized metric (such as QALYs, DALYs, etc. rather than just the GMFM-66 scale or GMFCS levels) to allow for appropriate comparison across treatments. 2) The large difference in sample sizes between the cohorts really is a challenge, particularly for comparison of costs. I realize the authors addressed this in part by bootstrapping and assessment of confidence intervals, and not surprisingly the confidence intervals were quite wide. I am not sure how to best address this, and the authors do acknowledge this challenge in the description of limitations in the paper. However, I would certainly soften the conclusions of the report to recognize this limitation, as the implication is that the cost-effectiveness of SDR is clear and convincing. I am not sure this is fair to policymakers, who will interpret these statements without clear understanding of these limitations. 3) And finally, the use of such a remote historical control population (from decades earlier) is also a major limitations, both in terms of clinical effectiveness and cost analyses. The authors again acknowledge this limitation, although they should soften the conclusions accordingly. I would encourage that this data be considered pilot in nature, raising the question of whether a clinical trial (even non-randomized) would more conclusively address the question of cost-effectiveness of SDR. Reviewer #2: This paper attempts to estimate the cost benefits of SDR. This was done by examining post-SDR outcomes (GMFM-66 and CPQOL pain score) compared to published data in the absence of surgery. The cost differential was then examined by looking at costs in an SDR group from RJAH and a group who did not have SDR in RJAH over a 10 year period from baseline assessment. It's an interesting idea but I think that while some limitations are acknowledged, there are too many limitations and missing details to support the conclusions made. The major flaw in this study appears to be in estimating the cost differential in those treated with SDR compared to those who were not. There area number of issues with this mainly the very small number in the non-SDR group (n=2) for whom data was available at 10 years. Looking at Figure 1 a spike in costs in the SDR group in clear at year one corresponding to the surgery. A similar spike is in the non-SDR group but no attempt is made to explain this? Was this orthopaedic surgery? Overall, there is no analysis or reporting of the standard treatment received by the control group (surgical or otherwise). Figure 1 also shows that costs are lower in the SDR group from year 3 onwards but as seen in Table 1 this 'No SDR' group were older and more involved (higher % GMFCS III and more likely to use wheelchair/buggy) so is the slightly higher costs in this very small number of children just related to that? The benefits of SDR are established compared to published GMFM-66 prediction curves. However, this possibly over-estimates the benefits of SDR as really the benefits (or otherwise) of SDR should be when compared to standard/orthopaedic surgery which over a ten year period from baseline (at age 6-7 years) most CP children would probably have had if they did not have SDR? There is no control data for the CPQOL pain score so it might be that the pain score improved less that it would have in the absence of surgery? The Discussion suggests that the available literature suggests that improvements in pain and function are maintained over time. However, Munger's 2017 paper suggest no real long-term benefit in any outcome measure when comparing SDR to standard intervention and this is not mention at all. In terms out outcome measures used here, only the pain score from the CPQOL assessment was used. Why is this and why not use other domains? This is not explained or justified. Table 2 lists changes in GMFM 66 and CPQOL-pain over 24 months in the CtE SDR group. However, CPQOL function is also listed but not referenced at all in the paper. If listing here why not use in results? Likewise, a gait score is listed at Baseline and at 24 months but never mentioned in the paper. Reviewer #3: The authors report on the cost-effectiveness of SDR in England. Abstracts: The abstract lacks the description of the underlying data set: Age of children, number of children Introduction: clear Methods: the “”control”group is somewhat small, and the description of the group in table 1 is in my opinion inappropriate. Therefore, comparison of costs seems troublesome Results Table 2, can the authors add the number of evaluated subjects, or were data complete?? Dicussion: The authors use a model to predict the costs of SDR as shown in figure 1. However, the follow-up was short and this assumption should get more attention in the discussion than is currently provided by the authors “Confidence intervals are wide, and all include zero.” (page 13) ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Henry Rice Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: R. 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Selective dorsal rhizotomy; evidence on cost-effectiveness from England PONE-D-19-22434R1 Dear Dr. Pennington, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Inmaculada Riquelme Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: the authors did a nice job to investigate the cost-effectiveness of selective dorsal rhizotomy for England! I think adding England does add value because health systems differ much. I agre with the previous reviewers that the control group is extremely small which is apotential bias in their calculations. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Henry Rice Reviewer #3: Yes: R. Jeroen Vermeulen |
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