Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-08075 Extracellular vesicles from human plasma and serum are carriers of extravesicular cargo ─ implications for biomarker discovery PLOS ONE Dear Dr Siljander, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The reviewers were both very favorable in their reviews, but noted some changes that need to be made to the manuscript. Because this journal focuses on transparency of methods and clarity of presentation, please carefully address the comments requesting explanation of the statistical approaches. Also, please check on the figure quality to make sure that they will have sufficient resolution for publication. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Jun 13 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Extracellular vesicles (EVs) have been extensively usedfor biomarker studies. It is expected that preanalytical processing methods of freshly draw blood may affect components of EV cargo. So far, however, few studies have evaluated such effect. To address this question, in this paper, Palviainen et al examined effect of anti-coagulation on isolated EV population and found significant increase on EV counts in serum when compared to plasma samples. Proteomics analysis showed significant differences between serum and plasma as well as among plasma samples with different anticoagulants. Results from the study enriches our knowledge on the effect of blood sample preparation methods on isolated EV characteristics. The manuscript is well-written, and the data are solid. It can be further improved by addressing the following questions: 1. The study mainly focused on difference. It will be beneficial to include scatter plots showing similarity (with r values) in commonly detected proteins. 2. Please provide a supplementary table showing proteomics data categorized by sample types (serum, different anticoagulants). 3. Keratin proteins are likely from contamination during sample preparation. A discussion on its origination should be added. 4. Discussion on limitation of the study should be added. 5. Figures are in bad quality in pdf file. High resolution in published manuscript is needed. Reviewer #2: Palviainen and colleagues have conducted an interesting and useful work assessing how several anticoagulation reagents for plasma preparation and serum affect the concentration, cellular origin, and protein content of circulating extracellular vesicles (EV). The authors additionally and originally assessed, at least through bioinformatic methods, whether the detected protein cargo could include an EV protein signature resembling a reported protein corona from synthetic nanoparticles. The study is rigorous in its design, using state-of-the-art methods and it is clearly presented. However, there are several issues that need to be addressed to reach publication quality. Major Issues: 1. The Statistical Analysis section (and statistical references throughout other items of the Materials and Methods section) needs major improvement. The authors need to clarify how they assessed the normality of the data before implementing ANOVA followed by Tukey tests, which assume normally distributed data. The statement “For multiple parameter analysis of non-normal distributed data Tukey multiple comparison test was used”, on line 194, is not accurate. What the authors need to do to handle comparisons of multiple groups of non-normal data is a transformation of the data to approximate normality before conducting an ANOVA test followed by the post-hoc Tukey test for multiple comparisons, or, alternatively, the implementation of a non-parametric test such as the Kruskal-Wallis test followed by appropriate post-hoc analysis such as the Dunn test. Additionally, information on the PCA approach is necessary. 2. Starting on page 18 of the result section “Protein cargo of the EV corona is modified by anticoagulation or its absence”, the authors described several comparisons with lists of proteins from published studies and claim (e.g., on line 322) that the overlap denote “marked similarities regarding the EV proteome”. For this claim to be justified, the statistical significance of the overlap between the different studies needs to be assessed. This can be done by calculating an empirical P value for the overlap among the protein lists based on simulation analyses. The simulation analysis would assess the probability of producing an equivalent random overlap between the published MP corona protein signatures (from the published studies) and a number of simulated protein lists (e.g., 1,000 or 10,000 simulated lists) that are generated by randomly selecting lists of proteins from Exocarta or EVpedia (with the simulated protein lists having the same length as the lists of experimentally detected EV proteins in this study). Only then could the overlap be claimed to be significant. The simulation analysis will reveal whether the detected overlap among the lists could have just happened by chance, therefore potentially not meaningful.\\ Minor Issues: 1. On line 90, the word “each” is misplaced. 2. Methods for EV isolation need to be better described. It is not clear what was the initial volume of pooled plasma or serum used for set I and II (the pellets of which were resuspended in 250 uL of PBS). It is not clear whether the elution from the SEC column was performed as a single elution step with 1 mL of PBS or whether there were multiple fractions collected. 3. Supplementary Figure 1 should be moved to the main text and significant digits used on Sup. Fig. 1A should be consistent. 4. Provide data table or representative NTA plots of size distributions for visual assessment of the size distribution differences instead of referring “data not shown” on line 215. This data could be included in the Supplementary Information document. 5. The statement “The generally upheld view of the EV field is that there are more platelet-derived “microparticles” or EVs, in serum than plasma,” on line 240 seems too subjective and needs a published reference. The sentence should be rephrased to more scientifically covey its meaning. The authors could instead write something similar as in the discussion section lines 348-349, e.g., “The fact that large EVs from serum have been shown to contain more platelet-derived microparticles than large EV from ACD plasma (7), prompted us to…” 6. Quality of all figures is unacceptably low. Replace figures with higher resolution versions. 7. Table 1 should go to Supplementary Information and columns ACD, Citrate, and EDTA clearly marked as P values. 8. The word “blotted” on line 275 should read “plotted”. 9. The statement: “At the moment, very few studies have addressed the factors (age, sex) which may affect EV concentrations in healthy populations”, on lines 362-363, requires citation(s) of some of the referenced studies. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Extracellular vesicles from human plasma and serum are carriers of extravesicular cargo ─ implications for biomarker discovery PONE-D-20-08075R1 Dear Dr. Siljander, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, John Matthew Koomen, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have satisfactorily addressed my comments. The data presented will fill some knowledge gap in EV research. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Liang Wang Reviewer #2: Yes: Richard Pratley, MD |
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PONE-D-20-08075R1 Extracellular vesicles from human plasma and serum are carriers of extravesicular cargo ─ implications for biomarker discovery Dear Dr. Siljander: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. John Matthew Koomen Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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