Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 17, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-14729 Lung ultrasound score to monitor COVID-19 pneumonia progression in patients with ARDS PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Auguste Dargent, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. I have received the comments of the reviewers on your manuscript. The specific comments of the reviewers are included below. Please provide point by point response in your revised manuscript. Please submit your revised manuscript by due date. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. One of the noted authors is a group, COVID-LUS study group. In addition to naming the author group, please list the individual authors and affiliations within this group in the acknowledgments section of your manuscript. Please also indicate clearly a lead author for this group along with a contact email address. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A Reviewer #3: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The article describes monitoring of pneumonia progression in patients with COVID-19 infection using lung ultrasound. It is well written and interesting. Lung ultrasound is an established approach for monitoring pulmonary diseases in the ICU. It makes a lot of sense to use this method in this population of COVID-19 infected patients from an infection control perspective. It is a bedside test and can be performed rather quickly. If done by experienced providers, it can save trips to the CT which always comes at a risk of infecting other patients or staff if the patient traveling for the test has a contagious disease. The provided figure gives a good overview of score development during the hospitalization and puts it in clinical perspective. My only critique is that it would be very helpful for the reader to have a panel of pictures from a patient prior and post development of VAP to illustrate the described changes as the authors promote this method for earlier diagnosis of VAP in COVID-19 patients. This is particularly important as there is currently debate about the difference of ARDS in patient with COVID-19 amongst themself and compared to the traditional population diagnosed with ARDS. Reviewer #2: I do want to congratulate the authors on their work. This is an interesting paper looking at the LUSS score in the management of the COVID 19 patients. Using of Lung US in well documented in the critical care practice. Use of LUSS score has been used in management of ARDS. Although study is interesting there are many limitations to study. First the patient number is small to draw any definite conclusions Second there no clear mythological pattern describe by author , as daily or twice a day LUSS score assessment. Third: In patient outcomes, it would be ideal to know what was the LUSS score prior to extubation if that is available, as there are studies that have showed correlation between the two. Ref : Caltabeloti F, Monsel A, Arbelot C, Brisson H, Lu Q, Gu WJ, et al. Early fluid loading in acute respiratory distress syndrome with septic shock deteriorates lung aeration without impairing arterial oxygenation: a lung ultrasound observational study. Crit Care 2014;18:R91. Fourth : The author have showed LUSS score >1 region with score of 3 and then marked that point as VAP in 5 of their patients , it would be beneficial to know if these ultrasound finding also correlated with clinically diagnosis of VAP. Fifth: It has been established that score of 3 can have limitations as that if the area consolation is not in taken into account, it can overestimate the lack of aeration and give a high score, I would like if authors could justify if they took this into consideration. Ref: Chiumello D, Mongodi S, Algieri I, Vergani GL, Orlando A, Via G, et al. Assessment of lung aeration and recruitment by CT scan and ultrasound in acute respiratory distress syndrome patients. Crit Care Med 2018;46:1761–1768. Overall interesting concept and may be clinically useful tool to guide therapy in treatment of this new disease. Reviewer #3: General In this manuscript, Dargent et al describe serial assessments of the Lung Ultrasound Score (LUSS) on 10 consecutive patients admitted to their intensive care unite with moderate to severe ARDS. Multiple scores were available for each patient (average of 10.9 scans per patient on average) and their course of LUSSs were tracked throughout the study. They found that in successfully extubated patients, the LUSS decreased and was lower than at the time of intubation. In a patient who died from refractory hypoxemia the LUSS increased. They suggest that the LUSS accurately reflects disease progression and may help in early VAP diagnosis, mechanical ventilation weaning management, and potentially reduce the need for other imaging. Overall I was intrigued by the apparent association in lower scores in those who were successfully weaned from mechanical ventilation, but I don’t have strong confidence in the validity of this claim given the unknown result of patient #6 (see below). Whether patient #6 needed non-invasive ventilation or was re-intubated it was associated with a high LUSS indicating that extubation may have been premature. Major A PubMed entry of "COVID Lung US" yielded 243 results – as such, this study has missed the opportunity to be presented as “pioneering” work, and as such a description of 10 patients without the ability to clearly demonstrate added value beyond already available clinical data, and without any statistical testing at all fundamentally limits my enthusiasm. The short term and variable length of followup is problematic. Figure 1 shows this problem graphically and makes it hard to draw any meaningful conclusions about the observations described. It’s not clear how the results of the LUSS affected care, particularly with the lack of a control group. It’s impossible to draw conclusions of benefit from this manuscript. Patient #6 was extubated on April 7th with a LUSS of 27, but placed on non-invasive ventilation. It is not mentioned if this patient was re-intubated or not, but if the patient was not I wonder if the group is wrong to which the patient is assigned. If not re-intubated then the patient was breathing spontaneously on non-invasive ventilation and by some would be considered to have been successfully extubated. Was the patient not included in this group because of re-intubation or because the LUSS would not allow a claim of lower LUSS in those successfully extubated because of the LUSS at that time being 27 or because the authors felt that the need for non-invasive ventilation does not meet the criteria of a successful wean from mechanical ventilation? A claim is made that the LUSS decreased for those patients who were successfully extubated, but I see no statistical analysis of the LUSS to see if there was actually a statistical difference. Minor I cannot find the number of sonographers reported who performed the exams. Given the operator dependent nature of ultrasonography there is a potential for issues with inter-observer reliability. This may have led differences in LUSS not due to a change in disease severity, but purely because another sonographer scanned the patient that day. The method by which the diagnosis of VAP was reached was not outlined in the study or whether the sonographer was blinded to this or if they were the ones making the diagnosis. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Lung ultrasound score to monitor COVID-19 pneumonia progression in patients with ARDS PONE-D-20-14729R1 Dear Dr. Dargent, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Muhammad Adrish Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is an interesting report about a valuable bedside examination during a time where transport of patients in the hospital has to be limited. Comments of reviewers have been addressed as feasible with reasonable efforts. Reviewer #2: All my concerns about the manuscript have been addressed in the revision. The manuscript can be considered for publication. I have no further concerns ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-20-14729R1 Lung ultrasound score to monitor COVID-19 pneumonia progression in patients with ARDS Dear Dr. Dargent: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Muhammad Adrish Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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