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Original SubmissionJuly 4, 2020
Decision Letter - Hans-Uwe Dahms, Editor

PONE-D-20-20716

Defining the sediment microbiome of the Indian River Lagoon, FL, USA, an Estuary of National Significance

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The reporting is straight-forward and clear. The approach of grouping of results from the individual samples based on the study locations (IRL and SLE), however, needs reconsideration. These mask the variations between the samples. Also, the sampling strategy needs to be elaborated regarding the number of samples collected at each of the sites and their frequencies during the sampling periods. The quality of the figures is too low. Other comments are given in the marked manuscript

sampling strategies need more detail regarding the number, sites, and frequencies of the collected samples throughout the sampling periods. Contrast of figures need to be enhanced. Existing REFERENCES need to be updated. The ecological significance of the obtained results need to be discussed particular with respect to functional differences.

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Reviewer #1: This manuscript describes the diversity of bacteria and archaea at the Indian River Lagoon and the St. Lucie Estuary using a metabarcoding approach over a two-year period and also compares polluted and non-polluted sites. The reporting is straight-forward and clear. However, I do not agree with the approach of grouping of results from the individual samples based on the study locations (IRL and SLE). This would have masked the variations between the samples. Also, the sampling strategy needs to be elaborated regarding the number of samples collected at each of the sites and their frequencies during the sampling periods. The quality of the figures is too low. Other comments are given in the marked manuscript.

Reviewer #2: This contribution discusses original findings from the first study of the sediment microbiome of the Indian River Lagoon (IRL) which has high biodiversity and economic value, but little is known about its microbial communities. The research claimed to fill this knowledge gap and to assess the spatiotemporal changes of microbial populations due to stressors. These stressors, that many other estuaries also face worldwide, include freshwater discharges, and development of fine-grained, organic-rich, anoxic sediment This study was conducted over two years during four sampling periods along a 100-mile stretch of the IRL. 16S rRNA amplicon sequencing and analysis was performed on 204 sediment samples. The most common IRL microbes were consistent with other studies into subtropical, estuarine microbiomes including the dominance of Proteobacteria. Many of the highly abundant orders in this phylum had members capable of contributing to biogeochemical cycles. The main environmental influences on microbial variation were claimed to be porewater salinity, total organic matter (TOM) and copper (Cu). Anaerobic prokaryotes were more associated with high TOM and Cu samples whereas aerobic prokaryotes were more associated with lower TOM and Cu samples. This study provides a novel baseline to assess the potential impact of changes due to anthropogenic factors, natural disasters, and management decisions on the distribution sediment microbial populations of the ecologically important IRL. The most important variable causing shifts between the microbiomes was PWS, this was mainly 500 due to the influence of seasonal freshwater discharges into SLE causing microbiome differences of the sediment microbiome of the Indian River Lagoon in comparison to the IRL.

The sampling strategies need more detail regarding the number, sites, and frequencies of the collected samples throughout the sampling periods. Contrast of figures need to be enhanced. Existing REFERENCES need to be updated. The ecological significance of the obtained results need to be discussed particular with respect to functional differences. END

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Revision 1

We would like to thank Dr. Hans-Uwe Dahms and the reviewers for their time and comments. Please find below our response to each of your comments. Thank you again for the opportunity to revise our manuscript with your helpful edits.

Reviewer comments made on pdf version of manuscript

Title/Authors/Affiliations Page

1. Comment while highlighting “microbiome” in Line 1: “Is it better to use prokaryotes or archaea/bacteria throughout the ms? You did not look into fungal, viral, protozoan diversities.”

The reviewer correctly indicated that this is not a full microbiome study, thus all instances of “microbiome” or “microbial communities” that are in reference to just this study were changed to prokaryotes or bacterial/archaeal communities starting with the title (Starting with Line 4 of Revised Manuscript With Track Changes).

Abstract

2. Edit of removing “a” from Line 19; corrected Line 22

3. Comment while highlighting “higher” in Lines 27-28: “higher in terms of abundance? or species richness?”

Higher Betaproteobacteriales and Flavobacteriales were clarified to indicate that this referred to their relative abundances (Lines 31-32).

4. Comment while highlighting “freshwater” in Line 27: “exclusively?”

Thank you for indicating this needed clarification. Betaproteobacteriales is not exclusively a freshwater-associated bacterial group but has been shown in other studies to have a higher relative abundance in freshwater-associated regions of estuaries [1,2]. The words “a freshwater associated organism” were removed from the Abstract (Lines 31-32). This statement is more appropriate in just the Discussion section of the document where it can be further explained (Lines 483-484).

5. Reviewer crossed out “organism” in Line 28 replacing with “bacterial group”, “organisms” in Line 30 replacing with “prokaryotes” and highlighted “organism” in Line 32.

Thank you for providing alternative verbiage for the use of organism(s). References to organism(s) were changed to bacterial group(s) or prokaryote(s) throughout the document to reflect a more appropriate word choice starting with the Abstract (Starting with Line 26).

Introduction

6. Comment while highlighting sentence “This study…TOM samples.” in Lines 78-82: “Can be more specific as you only looked into bacterial/archaeal diversities.”

Please see response to Reviewer Comment #1 above.

7. Comment while highlighting “Aug-Sep 2016 (W16), Mar-Apr 2017 (D17), Oct-Nov 2017(W17), and Apr 2018 (D18).” in Lines 115-116: “Can these be more specific? Were equal numbers of samples taken during each of the periods? Are the samples representative of the sites/seasons?”

Thank you for indicating to us that our sampling strategy was unclear. The “Site selection” (Lines 96-108) and “Sample collection” (Lines 129-135) sections have been updated to make it more clear that 15 sites were sampled during the first two sampling periods and 19 sites during the second two sampling periods in triplicate to get representative samples of those sites and sampling periods.

8. Reviewer highlighted M� in Line 131.

This statement was updated to indicate that ultrapure water was used instead of defining the water used by its resistance (M�) (Line 150 and 159). The authors were unsure why this was highlighted and hope that this addresses the reviewer’s concern.

Results

9. Comment while highlighting paragraph starting with Measured air temperatures…South Fork 2 site (S4 Table)” in Lines 199-204: “How can the data be treated as baseline data for future studies when the air temperatures and rainfall were abnormal during the sample years?

As the reviewer correctly pointed out, this study will act as comparison data for future studies instead of as a baseline due to the abnormal environmental conditions during the sampling periods. The manuscript was updated to reflect this in the Abstract (Lines 39-40) and Conclusions (Lines 556).

10. Edit add “.” to end of sentence in Line 278; corrected Line 308

11. Comment while highlighting subtitle “Microbial community makeup of estuaries” in Line 302: “Individual samples should be compared to examine variations of the prokaryotic diversities at the sample level. How variable were the diversities between samples collected at the different sampling sites during the different sampling months?”

The authors appreciate this comment and agree that that the IRL versus SLE comparison will mask changes at the sample level. But, the comparison between the IRL and SLE samples is still important to explore due to the differences in freshwater discharge rates between the regions during the study and the distinct separation of samples in these regions in the PCoA (Fig 6). To further stress this point we added a paragraph outlining the differences in freshwater discharges between regions and sampling periods (Lines 227-234) and added another table (S4C Table) to the S4 Table group stressing the differences between the IRL and SLE.

To complement this regional comparison, we also grouped similar sample types together despite their regional and sampling period differences to focus on ecologically important anthropogenic impacts of muck and copper accumulation. This also allowed us to increase statistical power. This was clarified in Lines 101-104.

The reviewer is correct in that comparing samples at the site level over time or between sites during one sampling season is important. But due to our study design and alternative goals this is a low statistical power comparison since there were only three samples at each site during each sampling period. But to address this concern we conducted PERMANOVA analysis at each site between sampling seasons and during each sampling period between sites and added the results to S7 Table. The major trends are briefly discussed in Lines 387-402.

12. Edit “make” to “made” in Line 332; corrected Line 362

Reviewer comments summarized in email

13. Reviewer #1: The reporting is straight-forward and clear. However, I do not agree with the approach of grouping of results from the individual samples based on the study locations (IRL and SLE). This would have masked the variations between the samples.

Please see response to Comment #11 above.

14. Reviewer #1: Also, the sampling strategy needs to be elaborated regarding the number of samples collected at each of the sites and their frequencies during the sampling periods.

15. Reviewer #2: The sampling strategies need more detail regarding the number, sites, and frequencies of the collected samples throughout the sampling periods.

Please see response to Comment #7 above.

16. Reviewer #1: The quality of the figures is too low.

17. Reviewer #2: Contrast of figures need to be enhanced.

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19. Reviewer #2: Existing REFERENCES need to be updated.

The authors thank the reviewer for indicating that we needed to update our references. To accomplish this, all websites provided were checked to make sure they still worked, and were updated if they did not, and all “cited …” statements were updated to 6 Sep 2020 to reflect this. We used the citation manager Mendeley with the PLOS ONE style they had on file. One citation was removed since it was the preprint for QIIME2 not the published Nature Biotechnology article.

20. Reviewer #2: The ecological significance of the obtained results need to be discussed particular with respect to functional differences.

The authors agree that understanding the functional differences between prokaryotic communities is important but, since this is a 16S study, that is outside the scope of our data. We did not feel comfortable making conclusions regarding functional differences between samples and sample types unless the trait in question can be attributed to all or most of the members of a bacterial group. We covered this in Lines 497-504 where we discussed the major orders and their possible contributions to the nutrient cycling in the sediment. To address this limitation, we expanded our conclusions section to stress the importance of future shotgun sequencing studies Lines 563-566.

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Thank you for reminding us to double-check our formatting, the authors are sorry that they missed some style requirements and the Title, Authors, and Affiliations page was edited to reflect these requirements. Commas were switched to after the author labels (Line 7) and the current address for Nicholas J. Dickens was removed (Line 13) to reflect that his contributions to this work only occurred during his time at Harbor Branch Oceanographic Institute. Based upon careful review of the main body style requirements, no edits were made since the document already reflected those requirements. All file names were changed to directly match what was stated in email, guidance from website, and using PACE.

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The authors appreciate you pointing out this missing statement. No permits were necessary and a statement reflecting this is included in lines 129-130.

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Thank you for pointing this out, as stated above, the current address for Nicholas J. Dickens was removed to reflect that his involvement in this study only occurred while he was exclusively a member of the Harbor Branch Oceanographic Institute faculty before his present employment by Amazon.com Inc. He is still affiliate faculty at HBOI and his email address in this role is dickensn@fau.edu.

The authors believe that the above adjustment to the Funding and Competing Interest Statement is now no longer needed due to this change and clarification. In relation to Dr. Dickens Author Contributions Role as a funder, his startup funds provided by the Harbor Branch Oceanographic Institute Foundation was used to fund the Research Assistantship of David J. Bradshaw during Fall 2018, Spring 2019, Fall 2019, and Spring 2020. The Funding Statement (below) has been updated to reflect this.

This research was supported by the following organizations and agencies: the Harbor Branch Oceanographic Institute Foundation (https://hboifoundation.org/) (DJB, NJD), the Everglades Foundation (https://evergladesfoundation.org/) (DJB), and the Save Our Seas License Plate (https://myfloridaspecialtyplate.com/save-our-seas.html) (PJM).The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.

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