Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 30, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-19248 Urine metabolomics of rats with chronic atrophic gastritis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Tao Han, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by 25th September 2020. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please follow the link for more information: https://blogs.plos.org/plos/2019/06/looking-good-tips-for-creating-your-plos-figures-graphics/ [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In the work under review, interesting data have been obtained on the metabolic profile of urine in chronic atrophic gastritis, which can be used for diagnostic purposes. However, I have a number of questions for the authors. For routine diagnosis of gastritis, a gastropanel is used, instrumental diagnostic methods, firstly, they pay attention to the presence of Helicobacter pylori. We would like the authors to clarify in the introduction the need for urinalysis for diagnostic purposes. What is the place of this analysis in clinical practice? Is there a real need for it? Why was the rat model chosen? Since the authors use a non-invasive diagnostic method, they could conduct appropriate research on patients, especially given that this diagnosis is widespread. What is the likelihood that the resulting metabolic profiles will match those for humans? The revealed metabolic changes can be observed with a sufficiently large number of pathologies, since they are not specific. How can these compounds be subsequently used for diagnostic purposes? Reviewer #2: General comment: In this work the authors studied, with the aid of LC-MS technique, urinary metabolic alterations behind chronic atrophic gastritis, a common functional gastrointestinal disorder, using rats as animal model. Since CAG is considered as a pre-cancerous state, methylnitronitrosoguanidine, a carcinogen and mutagen biochemical substance, was used to induced CAG in the animals. Following LC-MS analysis, statistical tools were applied to identify the most discriminating metabolites and the related metabolic pathways. The experimental work was formally well conducted, and the results were sufficiently discussed. However, some issues should be solved before I could recommend publication. Also, English must be carefully revised and improved through the entire manuscript. Specific comments: 1. PCA: The confidence ellipse in PCA graph could be useful; how have the presence of outliers been investigated? PLS-DA and OPLS-DA: R2X, R2Y and Q2 relative to each model should be reported, as well as the number of wrong classifications in the training data set (i.e. internal validation). How many permutations have been chosen for models validation? Also, a more extensive cross-validation of the OPLS-DA model should be carried out if possible using CV-ANOVA (p < 0.01, at least) to exclude over fitting. Independent samples T-test should be used to determine if the different biomarker candidates obtained from the OPLS-DA models are statistically significant between the two groups at the univariate level. 2. The authors should report if body mass change registered for model group was significant or not by applying a statistical test. 3. Have the LC-MS data been normalized and/or scaled? Have all features been retained, or any of them excluded if not present in most part of the samples or if their intensity was too low? Which program have the authors used for data processing? 4. Page 9 line 153: “CAG urine metabolomics analysis is corrected positive ion data”, what did the authors mean? 5. Have xenobiotics been eliminated from the list of possible metabolites? As far as I know, compounds as marmesin acetate, syringic acid o taxifolin are not endogenous. Have the authors performed potential biomarker identification with the analysis of standard compounds or MS/MS experiments? I also suggest to add to Table 1 the following information for each compound: features (tR and m/z), detected adduct, calculated m/z and delta m/z in ppm. 6. The authors could report if the metabolites belonging to the most relevant pathways were up regulated or down regulated in model group. 7. Lines 221-250 at pages 16-18 in my opinion are not useful, as they do not contribute to a critical discussion. The authors should rather discuss their results at the light of the existing literature, reporting differences respect to previous works and enlightening the novelty of their own. Several works, where authors identified potential biomarkers associated with CAG pathology in rat urine sample by NMR and LC‐MS, have not been cited nor discussed. See: - Cui, Jiajia, et al. "NMR-based metabonomics and correlation analysis reveal potential biomarkers associated with chronic atrophic gastritis." Journal of Pharmaceutical and Biomedical Analysis 132 (2017): 77-86. - Liu, Cai-chun, et al. "Comparative metabolomics study on therapeutic mechanism of electro-acupuncture and moxibustion on rats with chronic atrophic gastritis (CAG)." Scientific Reports 7.1 (2017): 1-11. - Liu, YueTao, et al. "Urinary metabolomics research for Huangqi Jianzhong Tang against chronic atrophic gastritis rats based on 1H NMR and UPLC‐Q/TOF MS." Journal of Pharmacy and Pharmacology 72.5 (2020): 748-760. - Liu, Yuetao, et al. "Material basis research for Huangqi Jianzhong Tang against chronic atrophic gastritis rats through integration of urinary metabonomics and SystemsDock." Journal of ethnopharmacology 223 (2018): 1-9. 8. Images resolution is not sufficient and should be improved. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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PONE-D-20-19248R1 Urine metabolomics of rats with chronic atrophic gastritis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Tao Han, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by 13th November 2020. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The article is well structured, easy to read and will be interesting to readers. The authors significantly corrected the article in accordance with the comments of the reviewers at the previous stage of the review. I believe that the article in its present form can be recommended for publication. Reviewer #2: The authors have sufficiently addressed part of the previous comments. English has been improved, as well as the discussion. See the appended file for minor comments. Please answer to each question separately, point-to-point, and add any relevant information to the manuscript. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Urine metabolomics of rats with chronic atrophic gastritis PONE-D-20-19248R2 Dear Dr. Tao Han, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Tommaso Lomonaco, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments: Dear Authors, the current version of the manuscript is improved and thus it's now suitable to be published in PloSone Journal. |
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PONE-D-20-19248R2 Urine metabolomics of rats with chronic atrophic gastritis Dear Dr. Han: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Tommaso Lomonaco Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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