Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-02370 Using search engine data to gauge public interest in mental health, politics and violence in the context of mass shootings PLOS ONE Dear Ms. Vargas, I write you in regards to the manuscript PONE-D-20-02370 entitled “Using search engine data to gauge public interest in mental health, politics and violence in the context of mass shootings” which you submitted to PLOS ONE. I have solicited advice from two expert Reviewers, who have returned the reports shown below. Both Reviewers are generally positive about the paper and recommend “Major Revisions”. However, they also raise a number of important issues that need to be resolved before the paper can be publishable. For example, the two Reviewers recommend to adopt a more sophisticated statistical approach. In this respect, they offer different suggestions that could improve the results of the paper. Based on the Reviewers' reports and my own reading of the paper, I came to the decision to offer you the opportunity to revise the manuscript. If you decide to prepare a substantially revised version of the paper, please provide a detailed response to both Reviewers regarding how you have addressed their concerns. If you resubmit, I would ask the same two Reviewers to review again the paper and I would need to see substantial improvements in their assessments in order to proceed with the paper after the next round. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Jun 18 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This paper uses Google Trends to assess the impact on mass shooting events on searches for guns and mental health. Overall, this paper is an exploratory project with few outright hypotheses or hypotheses tests. I think considering this would help this paper and would extract more out of Google Trends. There are several pieces of research that highlight the utility and validity of Google Trends missing from this piece. Some important ones are: Mellon, Jonathan. 2013. “Where and When Can We Use Google Trends to Measure Issue Salience?” PS: Political Science & Politics 46 (2): 280–90. https://doi.org/10.1017/S1049096513000279. ———. 2014. “Internet Search Data and Issue Salience: The Properties of Google Trends as a Measure of Issue Salience.” Journal of Elections, Public Opinion and Parties 24 (1): 45–72. https://doi.org/10.1080/17457289.2013.846346. Reilly, Shauna, Sean Richey, and J. Benjamin Taylor. 2012. “Using Google Search Data for State Politics Research An Empirical Validity Test Using Roll-Off Data.” State Politics & Policy Quarterly 12 (2): 146–59. https://doi.org/10.1177/1532440012438889. A crucial take-away from these papers is that, when using Google Trends, the most appropriate model is a cross-sectional time series. In the case of this paper, the independent variable should be a fixed effect for the gun violence event which allows for a clean pre-post change estimation. As it stands now, this paper is descriptive—which is fine—but the use of Google Trends allows for so much deeper analysis. As for the mental health aspects, again, as this is merely descriptive with no large-scale content analysis for media agenda setting/framing/priming, I am not yet persuaded. I am just not sure I buy that gun violence events are driving searches for mental health. The t-tests are interesting, but cross-section time series are more appropriate. Looking at figure 1, I would argue that the increases in salience for mental health (thus increases in search volume) are occurring because mental health and issues surrounding it are becoming less stigmatized and more common in spaces where it simply was not discussed before. As a result, people may not have thought much about mental health issues before are now heading to their nearest computer and doing a quick Google search. In general, I think this paper has something to add to the conversations on gun violence and mental health attitudes. However, at present, there is more work to be done on this paper so it meets a higher evidentiary standard. Very minor note: I find the use of past tense, passive voice distracting. I know several discipline-specific associations (i.e., APA, APSA, and ASA) now recommend using present tense, active voice. I think that would also help this paper. Reviewer #2: Dear authors, I think you are rising an interesting and novel question. In my opinion you could make a further effort to improve and enrich your data analysis. As it is now, the analysis documents that the American society associates mental health and violence in the context of mass shootings. Additional effort could make it possible to draw conclusions of the type: mass shooting episodes increases societal association of violence and mental health. 1. You could exploit geographical variation. Media coverage and internet searches may be more intense in the state where the mass shooting took place. You could use state data to analyze whether searches of gun violence and mental health become more common in the state of the mass shooting right after the mass shooting with respect to other states. Technically, you could use something in the lines of a Difference-in-Difference estimation. 2. In your methodology, you compare searches before and after the event. In order to take into account pre-existing trends in your current data, you could use something in the lines of an Event Study methodology. 3. In the last section, you mention that the relationship between violence and mental health is a misconception. I think this constitutes an important justification for your research question. Hence, you could use it as part of your motivation in the introductory section. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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