Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-09667 Uncovering candidate genes responsive to salt stress in Salix matsudana (Koidz) by transcriptomic analysis PLOS ONE Dear Dr Zhang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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3. Please amend the manuscript submission data (via Edit Submission) to include author Guoyuan Liu 4. Please amend your authorship list in your manuscript file to include author Guoliang Liu [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: 1, The author mentioned the use of Nikon Z50 instrument for analysis root phenotype, but did not provide specific manufacturers and country, please add details. 2, The author mentioned that “These clean reads were then mapped to the reference genome sequence.” Which species conference genome is the so-called reference genome? Willow or poplar? 3, Why only select SBP gene for functional analysis by transgenic Arabidopsis? We can use yeast salt sensitive mutants for expression analysis, and then select key genes for Arabidopsis functional verification. And the phenotype of transgenic Arabidopsis was not provided before and after salt stress. 4, What is the role of SBPase gene in Fig8A? I can’t seem to be reflected in this picture? This gene is a osmo-regulation gene, and this pathway is not found in the Fig 8A. 5, In the MS, the data mining of transcriptome is not enough. The co-expression network can be constructed using transcriptome data and then what the hub genes are selected. This result is more convincing for the key genes selected. Reviewer #2: In the manuscript “Uncovering candidate genes responsive to salt stress in Salix matsudana (Koidz) by transcriptomic analysis”, the authors compare the transcriptomes of two Salix matsudana cultivars, i.e., “9901” and “Yanjiang”, thus identifying salt stress responsive genes and genes determining the different salt tolerance in Salix matsudana. The following qRT-PCR of DEGs validates the accuracy of RNA-seq data. Overexpression of the DEG SBPase enhances the salt tolerance in transgenic plants, further suggesting that the identification of candidate genes is highly efficient and credible. This study contributes to dissect the molecular mechanism of salt tolerance on Salix matsudana. The critical genes involved in salt tolerance may be useful for willow breeding. I have couples of doubts and comments: The manuscript has serious problems with English language, and needs to be revised and rewritten from this perspective. Also, there are lots of inconsistencies and errors in the context. For instance, the name of salt-sensitive material is not consistent in the manuscript. Is it “Yanjiang”, “Yanjang” or “Yanjing”? Second, figure 7 and 8 should switch the figure legend. Moreover, the authors ignore to number the line that makes it difficult to label the errors in the manuscript. The authors mention 15 individual lines including 12 F1 lines from crossing of “9901” and “Yanjiang” and 3 parent lines in plant material, but only “9901” and “Yanjiang” are used as described in result. The difference on shooting pattern should be taken into account for the determination of salt tolerance between “9901” and “Yanjiang”. The stems grow in absence of NaCl are necessary for the control in this case. Since root regeneration of Salix matsudana is possible, rooted plants would be better for testing phenotype as root material is also used for RNA-seq. What samples are used in qRT-PCR? Please clarify. It is good that homologs of known and important salt responsive regulators in Salix matsudana are identified from RNA-seq data. however, to better illustrate their interactions under salt stress, I would also suggest to visualize the network by Cytoscape as described by Li et al., 2013 other than the schematic diagram and heatmap. The potential interactors of those components might also be mined by this manner. Sugar content is not enough to determine the salt tolerance of transgenic Arabidopsis plant although SBPase is known to be involved in carbon assimilation. Instead, the survival rate, electrolyte leakage and chlorophyll content under salt stress should be tested. In addition, please specify how SBPase is regulated by salt stress here. The second paragraph of discussion is basically repeating the result, lacking the further prediction of functions of TFs discovered in the RNA-seq. Jia et al. studied drought response of a desert willow which revealed important roles of TFs in the regulatory network. The authors could further compare differentially expressed TFs under salt and drought stress within willow species, thereby illustrating the identical and different strategies how willow fights against various abiotic stresses. Except for nine genes identified in “Yanjiang” NT vs “9901” NT, the other DEGs in “9901” CK vs “9901” NT may also account for the stronger salt tolerance of “9901” as “9901” has more DEGs compared with “Yanjiang” in response to salinity. Detailed discussion is necessary on this point. Minor points: Please cite the literature where the agrobacteria-mediated protocol comes from. What does “NT” indicate in the legends of Figure 3 and Figure 4? Do asterisks in figure 9 indicate significant differences? Reference Li, Q.T., Liu, J., Tan, D.X., Andrew, A.C., Jiang, Y.Z., Xu, X.F., Han, Z.H. and Kong, J. (2013) A genome-wide expression profile of salt-responsive genes in the apple rootstock Malus zumi. Int. J. Mol. Sci. 14, 21053-2107. Jia, H., Zhang, J., Li, J., Sun, P., Zhang, Y., Xin, X., Lu, M., and Hu, J. (2019). Genome-wide transcriptomic analysis of a desert willow, Salix psammophila, reveals the function of hub genes SpMDP1 and SpWRKY33 in drought tolerance. BMC Plant Biol. 19, 356. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Qingtian Li [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-20-09667R1 Uncovering candidate genes responsive to salt stress in Salix matsudana (Koidz) by transcriptomic analysis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Zhang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, the reviewer 2 is still not satisfied. I agree with his comments. Please provide a photo for both materials used and show the regeneration of shoots under normal growth condition. This photo should be placed in Fig1. In addition, please provide pictures of the two transgenic Arabidopsis lines in comparison to the WT to show salt tolerance under salt stress condition. The growth of these plants under normal growth condition should also be provided for comparison. These may be placed in Fig9. Moreover, please recheck the English writing as many mistakes were noted. Specifically, line 486, the 'oxidase stress' should be 'oxidative stress'. Line 503, 'was' should be 'were'. Line 505, the second 'were' should be 'was'. Please check all the other text, legends and method section etc. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 31 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Based on the analysis of transcriptome of willow under salt stress, the molecular bsis of salt tolerance was identified, and the preliminary functional verification of the SBP gene was carried out. The author had made the changes according to the reviewer's comments Reviewer #2: In the revised manuscript, the authors present a clearer transcriptomic analysis on salt-responsive mechanism of Salix matsudana compared with the original version, however, fail to respond to my minor points. I believe 9901 and Yanjiang shoot normally without NaCl but the images of control are necessary for the manuscript. As 200 mM NaCl does not make an obvious difference on survival rate between WT and SBPase transgenic Arabidopsis plant, I do not think any more experiments are necessary on this point, but I would encourage the authors to try a higher concentration of NaCl because it suggests that SBPase might not be that important for salt-tolerance if transgenic plant does not show higher survival rate in comparison with WT. Alternatively, the authors could measure the biomass of plants under 200 mM NaCl treatment. Also, please specify the background of Arabidopsis used for transformation. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Renying Zhuo Reviewer #2: Yes: Qingtian Li [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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