Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 29, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-08982 Guided screen for synergistic three-drug combinations PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Cokol, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. More specifically, reviewer #3 made important comments on the statistical analysis. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Jul 05 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Methods to better predict higher order drug-drug interactions has multiple applications. Cokol and colleagues have developed several of the methods that have made significant advances in this field. Here, the authors look at 3 drug interactions for 7 treatments for the plant pathogen Erwinia. They identify that only the detergent SDS reliably results in synergistic interactions, with many antagonistic interactions, cautioning against a rationale that ‘multi-drug’ therapy is always superior. Overall, the study is well-performed and ready for publication. My only recommendation is that the title is too general, and needs to state that this screen was performed in Erwinia. Babak Javid Reviewer #2: The article by Cokol-Cakmak and colleagues addresses an important, old, and for a long time unsolved problem in pharmacology, namely how to choose among the astronomically large number of permutations of multiple drugs that could potentially be used in a combination therapy. In the domain of antimicrobial and anti-cancer chemotherapy, recent discoveries from multiple groups (including from the senior author) have suggested a possible solution. Specifically, it has been observed in each of bacteria, fungi, and cancer that the most substantial drug interactions occur at the 'pairwise' level, whereas 'higher-order' interactions (among 3 or more drugs) are comparatively minor. The implication of this observation is that the combined potency of cocktails of 3 or more drugs may be predictable from measurement of drug pairs. The current manuscript tests this idea and demonstrates how a synthesis of experiments and predictions makes it possible to systematically search a very large number of potential combinations and find the most strongly synergistic many-drug combinations. The proposed approach consists of 1) experimentally measure pairwise drug interactions (using a very experimentally efficient 'diagonal' approach) 2) use pairwise data to predict the effects of high-order combinations 3) experimentally test most promising high-order combinations This approach is novel and eminently sensible, and I think this article describing and demonstrating this approach will be an important contribution to the field. I am grateful that the approach does not rely on prediction alone, but uses prediction to guide experimental measurements to the most promising options. Theory plays a role but the final result is empirical. With respect to the potential generality and applicability of the observations, two points are worth noting in review. First, the pharmacological principles that guide this approach have been supported in many different diseases and model systems, and therefore I am satisfied that this proposal on how to practically apply these principles is one that has general interest beyond the particular model system being studied. (The application here to a plant pathogen is outside of my expertise but looks interesting). Second, the use of 'many-drug' combinations is routine in many areas of infectious disease and cancer medicine, so this topic certainly has medical relevance. Any use of novel combinations in humans of course requires phase 1 trials of safety, and combination design for human use should involve considerations of overlapping or non-overlapping toxicities. I think if one were to apply the approach described here to therapies for human use, the approach could take this into account, by narrowing the search space to only one agent per mode of dose-limiting toxicity (i.e. only one agent with dose-limiting hepatotoxicity, only one with dose-limiting cardiotoxicity, etc). So while toxicity is an important consideration in developing human combination therapies it does not override the practicality of the approach here, because these aspects could be considered simultaneously in prediction-guided experiments. Of course this is not relevant to Erwinia amylovora, and I leave it to the authors to decide if they should like to mention these considerations in the discussion. The most substantial advance of the work is describing and demonstrating the approach to searching for synergistic multidrug combinations. For me the experimental findings in Erwinia amylovora are of secondary significance. The drug interactions observed in this system are of small magnitude making the overall effect of synergy minor. The measurements of pairwise interactions show substantial variation among replicates, although not worse than is typical of high-throughput screens. Although experimental noise in pairwise interactions will propagate into noisy predictions, this concern is overridden by the study ultimately conducting experimental measurements of the high-order combinations of interest. Overall, the strategy described here is interesting, theoretically rigorous, and useful. I expect this article will have general relevance to many efforts to find superior combination therapies for the treatment of pathogens or other diseases. Reviewer #3: This is an interesting article that may have substantial impact on design of drug combination screens particularly those involving higher order combinations. The article is well written and overall has sufficient clarity. The experiment designs are interesting and does not suffer from any major deficiency to the best of my understanding. There is however need for increased statistical rigor and clarification in certain parts of the paper. 1. The authors claim that their results are “in agreement with numerous studies.” With no justification and in same instances not even a citation. The authors should clarify and detail the nature of the agreement, cite appropriate papers and also justify such agreements. There is also a need for discussion on what such agreements would imply. 2. The data is fairly interesting yet I have not seen in a detailed analysis of biological or technical replicates. The authors need to provide a detailed account of the fit between replicates particularly in the paired combinations and compare the variation/noise in the underlying data to the accuracy of predictions. 3. The authors predicted higher order drug-drug interactions based on the average of paired drug interactions. They explained their strategy as “For all three-drug combinations of these 8 compounds, we generated predictions by using the arithmetic mean of interaction scores for all 3 pairwise combinations among 3 drugs. For combination A+B+C, the mean (AB, AC, BC) provides the expectation for A+B+C if there is no additional synergy/antagonism associated with the three-drug combination of these drugs”. This is an interesting yet extremely simple method. This approach needs better explanation/justification. How did the authors chose this simple approach, what are the examples in the literature, how does their method compare to others? Even If they do not provide a detailed benchmark, a good discussion and scientific justification would strengthen the paper. 4. The prediction power seems to be sufficiently strong based on the analysis in the manuscript. Yet we do not know about the specificity f the predictions. The authors should take a bootstrapping approach to test the predictive power of shuffled data. The predictions from shuffled data will generate a null model of predictions and statistical comparison of their actual predictions to this null model can provide better insight on the value of the predictions. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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