Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 10, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-17584 Kernel Methods and their Derivatives: Concept and Perspectives for the Earth System Sciences PLOS ONE Dear Mr Johnson, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR:
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Please explain the rationale for the development of your approach in light of recent research in this area, clearly indicating which problem with existing methods you are addressing. 3. Please clearly report at the beginning of your methods or results section which the key performance measures were to establish validity and utility of your method. Please also report clearly which statistical analysis was used to establish robustness of performance measures. 4. Please note that PLOS ONE requires that experiments, statistics, and other analyses must be performed to a high technical standard and described in sufficient detail to allow for reproducibility of the study (http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/criteria-for-publication#loc-3). To demonstrate the performance of the method, we would expect comparisons to be drawn between existing state-of-the-art methods. Additional Editor Comments: This paper has been well-written with interesting topic. The reviewers return some critical comments, especially the novelty of the contribution as the kernel methods have been widely used. Moreover, some typos have to be corrected in the revised manuscript. Thus I believe that a major revision is necessary to improve the quality of the manuscript. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I have read the paper, “Kernel Methods and their derivatives: Concept and perspectives for the Earth system sciences”. The paper is well organized, well written and of high academic quality. I am happy to see that the authors have made a really good effort to apply the kernel methods and their derivatives for the Earth system sciences. The majority of the work is very well, but there are some minor issues that I would recommend to address in the final version of the paper. These issues are provided as follows; (1) The citation of Figure is not consistent. Cite the figure as (Fig. xx) or (Figure xx). (2) At line # 216 citation is missing (3) At line # 61 what mean of m-th order? As it is not defined before. (4) At line # 83 change the text, Section 7.4 with Section 6. (5) The detail is missing in conclusion section, What was done in this paper related to Earth system sciences? Reviewer #2: Manuscript Draft: PONE-D-19-17584 - Kernel Methods and their Derivatives: Concept and Perspectives for the Earth System Sciences I. Summary This article surveys the application of kernel methods to several supervised and unsupervised machine learning tasks, including Gaussian processes for regression, SVMs for classification, density estimation, and dependence estimation, with specific focus on showing the potentials of using the derivatives of kernel functions to gain insight of the function learned and to design kernel machines. This study claims the following contributions: • To show a way to interpret the functions learned by various kernel methods by using their derivatives; • To provide the explicit analytic form of the 1st and 2nd derivatives of some kernel functions and generic formulas to compute arbitrary order derivatives; • To provide illustrative toy examples as well as a real-world problem with earth system data to demonstrate the usefulness of the derivatives. While the topic of the article is interesting and the paper is well organized, I don’t think the current version of the article is ready for publication because the paper provides neither a synergistic framework for better understanding the kernel methods nor sufficient evidences to demonstrate their effectiveness in earth system science, failing to well justify the claimed contribution. I provide more specific comments in the following section. II. Major issues 1. As the derivations of kernel functions’ derivatives are not new, one key theoretical contribution of this paper is to give more insights into the supervised and unsupervised kernel learning methods by relating the derivatives to the associated characteristic information, such as margin, sensitivity, and leverage. However, the new development of the present article is not clear to me compared to the previous study, i.e. [28,29,51,30], instead of summarizing the findings in these papers and running new toy examples. To make the article clearer, can the authors provide more details and discussion about the differences compared to the above mentioned study? 2. The definition 1 and Theorem 1 in Page 5 seem not relevant to the main material. Are they serve any purpose? 3. Following last comment, the kernel classification in Section 4 is not used in the earth system problem. 4. Section 7 looks interesting. But it is too short without sufficient evidences to demonstrate the effectiveness of kernel methods. Besides, the readers may want to know the background of spatio-temporal earth system data and the state-of-art of kernel methods in this domain, but this information is missing in the article. 5. What does the color bar in Figure 7 mean? Also, the font size of the numeric values in the plots is too small. 6. What are the values of a and b to generate the data in Figure 10? There are typos in the caption. III. Minor issues 1. In Abstract, the phrase “…various kernel methods in a much more intuitively that commonly assumed…” is strange and should be reworded. 2. In the last paragraph of Introduction, the sentence “Section 7.4 pays attention to …” seems to have a wrong reference to the section number. Please double check. 3. Please double check the symbol in Eq. (9) 4. The reference is missing in Section 3.1. 5. In the caption of Figure 2, it seems the regularized and unregularized cases are wrongly referred. 6. A symbol error in Line 260, Page 11 7. In the caption of Figure 3, the phrase “The predicted has red and green…” has typos. Typos are also found in Figure 10. Please double check the spelling and grammar in all the captions to avoid unnecessary confusion to the readers. 8. What are the u, v in Line 494, Page 19. There are more typos in the paper, I encourage the authors check the writing carefully in the revised version. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Kernel Methods and their Derivatives: Concept and Perspectives for the Earth System Sciences PONE-D-19-17584R1 Dear Dr. Johnson, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: The manuscript was well revised and Reviewer's comments have been well addressed. Please note that there are still few typos about the inconsistent notations: e.g., in the last paragraph of Introduction, "section 8" is not capitalized. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-19-17584R1 Kernel Methods and their Derivatives: Concept and Perspectives for the Earth System Sciences Dear Dr. Johnson: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Qichun Zhang Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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