Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 19, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-18920 Quantitative definition of neurobehavior, vision, hearing and brain volumes in macaques congenitally exposed to Zika virus PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Mohr, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Academic editor comments: First of all, my sincere apologies on the delay on the review process. The subject of the manuscript certainly merits an in-depth investigation. Although the manuscript is interesting and may provide a significant contribution to the literature, there are still some methodological concerns raised by the reviewers that must be clarified before the paper is further considered for publication. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 13 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2.Thank you for stating the following in the Competing Interests section: [DHO is a paid consultant for Battelle, devoted to research in the areas of assisting in the design and interpretation of their nonhuman primate ZIKV studies. His relationship does not carry with it any restrictions on publication, and any associated intellectual property will be disclosed and processed according to UW-Madison policy. None of the animals used in this study are involved in any studies with Battelle.]. Please confirm that this does not alter your adherence to all PLOS ONE policies on sharing data and materials, by including the following statement: "This does not alter our adherence to PLOS ONE policies on sharing data and materials.” (as detailed online in our guide for authors http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/competing-interests). 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Please follow this link to our website for more details on competing interests: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/competing-interests [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you very much for the opportunity to review the paper titled: "Quantitative definition of neurobehavior, vision, hearing and brain volumes in macaques congenitally exposed to Zika virus". This a dense, but very interesting study on Zika virus infection and brings a lot of knowledge on the different fields. The authors assessed the methodological and statistical feasibility of a congenital ZIKV exposure macaque model for identifying brain abnormalities and also other sensitive organs (eye and ear) that may underlie neurodevelopmental deficits. The text is very well writen and the language is clear. I congratulate the authors for this study! I just have few comments regarding this study on its present format. 1. Introduction: I would write the full term before abbreviation (ZIKV). 2. In Materials and Methods: the authors wrote: "Indian-origin rhesus macaques (Macaca mulatta) were inoculated with ZIKV or phosphate buffered saline (PBS)." It is not clear if the PBS should act as a control or the ZIKV was inoculated WITH PBS. What is the idea of using PBS? Please clarify. 3. What was assessed in indirect ophthalmoscopy? Please describe the parameters. 4. Why the authors decided to observe wave IV (superior olivary complex) behavior instead of wave III (cochlear nucleus) or maybe V (inferior coliculus and lateral lemniscus)? 5. In references, please use the complete references format according to what is described in PlosONE webpage. Reviewer #2: The article entitled "Quantitative definition of neurobehavior, vision, hearing and brain volumes in macaques congenitally exposed to Zika virus" by Koenig and colleagues describes a quantitative definition to analyse various phenotypes of the Congenital Zika Syndrome in macaques. I find this study could be of interest and the authors could contribute to a better characterisation of developmental events impaired caused by Zika virus infection. However, some key points should be addressed: 1) Microcephaly is the hallmark of Congenital Zika Syndrome. What could account for the lack of this phenotype in your model? 2) It is not clear if the authors managed to produce the Congenital Zika Syndrome model with ZIKV vertical transmission. 3) Even without the statistical analysis there could have been an effort to describe qualitatively the various phenotypes. 4) The paper could be re-written as a method paper or a qualitative paper. Reviewer #3: Synopsis: This manuscript describes detailed evaluation of neonatal rhesus macaques born to dams exposed to Zika virus (n=5) or an uninfected control dam (n=1). In this study, the authors followed the neonates for 8 d post Caesarean birth at 155 dGA, followed by necropsy. Assessments of neurobehavior, visual and hearing function, as well as brain MRI were conducted during the time of observation, and histopathology post-necropsy. In general, the sample size was too small to reveal significant statistical differences in any of the observed parameters with the control animal. This is not surprising, as previous studies indicate a broad spectrum of phenotypes in the Rhesus macaque congenital infection model. This model has also been shown to result in pregnancy loss, which occurred in one of this studies’ animals. Nevertheless, a strength of this study is the wide range of assays deployed to evaluate ZIKV-associated phenotypes, potentially setting the standard for future studies. Specific comments/ concerns: 1. The post-hoc power analysis has the potential to add significant value to this study by contributing information to future experimental design. However, it is unclear if it is valid to calculate and effect size based on the single control animal, since no standard deviation can be calculated from the control group. Would it be preferable to treat all animals as a single population to calculate SD? Such results could still be extrapolated to a power analysis. 2. Has the NBAS or similar test been applied to human neonates post in utero ZIKV exposure? If so, is an effect of viral infection detected early after birth, or, as mentioned in the introduction (lines 63-64), are abnormalities observed later? Could such results suggest a time post-birth in the NHP model that subtle phenotypes due to in utero infection might be observed. 3. Minor point: In figure 1, the figure has the abbreviation NBAS, while the legend uses the abbreviation SNAP. 4. Minor point: Could the color for the control animal be changed to bright green or something else that makes it more easily identified in the figures? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Quantitative definition of neurobehavior, vision, hearing and brain volumes in macaques congenitally exposed to Zika virus PONE-D-20-18920R1 Dear Dr. Mohr, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Rafael da Costa Monsanto, M.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #3: No |
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PONE-D-20-18920R1 Quantitative definition of neurobehavior, vision, hearing and brain volumes in macaques congenitally exposed to Zika virus Dear Dr. Mohr: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Rafael da Costa Monsanto Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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