Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-03534 Main and interacting effects of physical activity and sedentary time on older adults’ BMI: the moderating roles of socio-demographic and environmental attributes PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Van Dyck, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Jun 26 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? 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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Review of the manuscript Main and interacting effects of physical activity and sedentary time on older adults’ BMI: the moderating roles of socio-demographic and environmental attributes. General comments: The manuscript is interesting! The authors have taken already sampled data and made new use of the data to evaluate the relationship between MVPA and sedentary activity. Methods and material: Good methods, well described, and useable, I only have a few comments and questions. The authors are using Actigraphs, and describe the cut points for MVPA and sedentary activity, they have defined non-wear time as 90 minutes? Is there a reference for this, it seems a bit high, personally I would have chosen 60 minutes, but it could be because older adults are less agile might be very still over longer time span than younger people, therefore it might be OKAY, but I would like the authors to use 60 minutes instead of 90 minutes to see if it changes the accelerometer wear time and thereby the results of their analyzes, they might have to exclude some participants as they do not get time enough to be used in the analyzes. Data analyzes are performed using a method that is not used often, but seems to be good for the objective. But when the authors use a rarely used method, I would like to explain why they are using GAMM, from how I understand the literature GAMM are usually used for longitudinal data as GAMM are especially good for estimating trend see e.g. [1]. So please explain why you chose to use GAMM, and what the advantage is compared to e.g. GEE or mixed linear models. Minor problem: line 235, you cite Wood, but without a reference number. Results: It seems that the authors are using a kind of substitution model, but their analyzes are difficult to follow. They state that with lower amount of MVPA then an increase in sedentary activity had a higher likelihood of generating increased BMI or obesity. But as amount of Sedentary activity is highly associated with MVPA (negatively) and including both in the same analysis could be problematic. The participants “only” have 100% time or 24 hour a day, now if they increase ST then they have to reduce either MVPA or low activity, thus when the authors make an assumption of increase of both MVPA and ST activity, it can only come from low activity, now how likely is to increase both ST and MVPA? To my knowledge this has been addressed by Heidemann et al [2] see https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/23452342, the approach will enable a graphical illustration that will it easier to understand the authors point. Discussion: Short and to the point, good. I miss a mentioning or discussion of one important weakness of accelerometry, we measure for a given time, and have the assumption that the activity we measure is the habitual activity! This might not be so, we know that weather and seasons have a large impact on physical activity, so the authors need to address this weakness, al though I do agree that it is a strength they have been using accelerometers rather than questionnaires. Conclusion of review: Interesting cross sectional study that raises new questions and hypotheses, with a few additions and changes it should be ready for publication. 1. Shadish WR, Zuur AF, Sullivan KJ: Using generalized additive (mixed) models to analyze single case designs. J Sch Psychol 2014, 52(2):149-178. 2. Heidemann M, Molgaard C, Husby S, Schou AJ, Klakk H, Moller NC, Holst R, Wedderkopp N: The intensity of physical activity influences bone mineral accrual in childhood: the childhood health, activity and motor performance school (the CHAMPS) study, Denmark. BMC pediatrics 2013, 13:32. Reviewer #2: In the current manuscript, Dyck et al assessed the main and interacting effects of PA and ST with BMI and overweight/obese in Hong Kong and Ghent older adults. They found that ST was linearly and positively related to weight outcomes in Hong Kong and Belgian older adults, while MVPA was not. Although this study have important public health implications, but there are some limitations to the study. The manuscript could be strengthened by addressing the following issues and then reconsidering the potential for publication: 1. The author found the positive association between ST and BMI was significantly stronger at lower than higher values of MVPA in Hong Kong older adults but an opposite trend in Belgian population. Table 1 should compares baseline characteristics of the study participants from Hong Kong and those from Ghent using relevant statistical methods. Knowing differences between these groups helps the reader understand the results of this article. 2. What is the explanation for why the study participants in Hong Kong were mostly women? 3. The author adopted a targeted obesity standard for the Hong Kong population, is there a targeted obesity standard for the Belgian population? 4. A large proportion of the older adults, both in Hong Kong (90.0%) and in Ghent (68.9%) reached the health guideline of 150 minutes of MVPA per week. The author could divide these participants into moderate physical activity group and heavy physical activity group to further explore the association of ST and PA with weight outcomes. 5. Please rephrase with a focus on the public health implications of your findings in terms of its practical utility taking current practices and clinical feasibility into account in Conclusions. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Main and interacting effects of physical activity and sedentary time on older adults’ BMI: the moderating roles of socio-demographic and environmental attributes PONE-D-20-03534R1 Dear Dr. Van Dyck, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Martin Senechal, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The Authors have generally followed the advice form the reviewers, and if not have a good and valid explanation for why not. In my opinion the manuscript should be ready for publication. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Professor Niels Wedderkopp Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-20-03534R1 Main and interacting effects of physical activity and sedentary time on older adults’ BMI: the moderating roles of socio-demographic and environmental attributes Dear Dr. Van Dyck: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Martin Senechal Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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