Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 24, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-35600 Endosonographic finding of the simultaneous depiction of bile and pancreatic ducts can predict difficult biliary cannulation on endoscopic retrograde cholangiopancreatography PLOS ONE Dear Prof. Ueda, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses all points raised during the review process. Especially the robustness of the chosen threshold should be addressed and possibly substantiated by a cross-validation analysis. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Jun 06 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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We will update your Data Availability statement on your behalf to reflect the information you provide. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The discussed study is a single center, retrospective cohort study, including 80 patients. All patients have curved linear array endoscopic ultrasound (CLAEUS) before endoscopic retrograde cholangiopancreatography (ERCP). The general aim of the study, was to define predictors of difficult selective bile duct cannulation (SBDC). Hereby difficult is described as the simultaneous depiction of bile and pancreatic ducts at the second portion of the duodenum farther than 10 mm away from the papilla. It therefore has been concluded, that if a CLAEUS is done in advance, the risk of a post-ERCP pancreatitis, as well as the risk of complications is reduced. Limitations of the study: I find it irritating, that the division of the patients into two groups were on the basis of the duration of the examination, and more importantly, that the used threshold, was define by the study group. Is this threshold robust? It seems to be necessary, that this threshold is varied. Furthermore additional factors in the definition of the threshold should be considered, such as the mentioned number of papilla contacts. In Addition the number of patients were initially 356, but included in the study were only 80. This strong selected patient group I find very odd and would like a more detailed explanation of why 356 patients were included in the first place. Reviewer #2: The work „Endosonographic finding of the simultaneous depiction of bile and pancreatic ducts can predict difficult biliary cannulation on endoscopic retrograde cholangiopancreaticography“ by Susumu Shinoura et. Al addresses an important question in the field of interventional endocopy: How is it possible to predict a difficult difficult approach to the biliary system before conventional ERCP. In the past, several attempts have been made to improve pre-therapeutic certainity about subsequent risks for patients undergoing ERCP and therefore making an early decision for possible alternative strategies like precut papillotomy or transduodenal approaches for bile drainage. The manuscript is technically sound, the statistical analysis appears to be correct, especially the different statistical tests are chosen correctly for the distinct analyses. Both strength and limitations of the study are well described and discussed together with the current literature. In General, I see only some minor points to be addressed: 1. As the authors state correctly the present work is based on a retrospective analysis of EUS images. This is basically discussed as a potential bias of the study. But I would recommend to further comment on an essential cause of additional errors: It is not clear whether the examiners intended to document a simultaneous depiction. There might have been a number of undocumented patients with “simultaneous depiction” but simply were not documented by the examiners. Is there standard protocol of photo-documentation in EUS, especially in D2 Position to make sure there is a high possibility that a “double depiction” is always being documented? Please comment on that more precisely. 2. In the present version of the manuscript I see some frailty with aspect to image- and graphic presentation. It might be helpful for a less specialized readership to provide a graphical overview that contains: (i) Overview of main anatomical structures, (ii) position of the echoendoscope in the duodenum and (iii) a display of “simultaneous depiction”. I would recommend to better center the region of interest within the images of (i) bile duct collapse (Fig. 1) and simultaneous depiction (Figure 2). 3. Most parts of the text are well written in an intelligible fashion, but it might profit at a very few parts from a stylistic correction by a native speaker: E.g.: “As post-endoscopic retrograde cholangiopancreatography (ERCP) pancreatitis as a complication49 of ERCP becomes (may become) fatal…” ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Endosonographic finding of the simultaneous depiction of bile and pancreatic ducts can predict difficult biliary cannulation on endoscopic retrograde cholangiopancreatography PONE-D-19-35600R1 Dear Dr. Ueda, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Hans A Kestler Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The comments were addressed and precisely differentiated in the revised version. They have added helpful explanations for the reader. Reviewer #2: The authors have fully adressed all of my comments. (Only due to formatting reasons) the Resolution of the Pictures is quite low, this should be corrected within the final version of the manuscript. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-19-35600R1 Endosonographic finding of the simultaneous depiction of bile and pancreatic ducts can predict difficult biliary cannulation on endoscopic retrograde cholangiopancreatography Dear Dr. Ueda: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof. Hans A Kestler Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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