Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 12, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-34404 Gender Difference in ASAS HI among Patients with Ankylosing Spondylitis PLOS ONE Dear Dr Chen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Specifically, you should address all concerns raised by the reviewers, especially those raised by reviewer 2 where it is recommended a more concise manuscript with consideration of the objectives stated and results described. In addition the apparent conflicts of previous published work to be carefully addressed. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Mar 26 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: 1. Concerns about data analysis 1) It has been previously reported that female AS patients tend to have more pain and low QoL despite of lesser radiographic progression of spine compared to male patients with AS. And fibromyalgia is supposed to be one of the reason for that. But your data seem to be somewhat different from previous reports. Could you explain? Did you investigate the prevalence of fibromyalgia in this study? 2) mSASSS can be highly variable according to the evaluator. Who did mSASSS scoring? Was it performed by same evaluator? It needs to be described. 3) In table 1, does the prevalence of each manifestation mean ever present or at presentation? 4) In ASAS HI, female patients have worse score mainly in the subjective features. What do you think about it? 2. All participants were recruited from a single regional hospital, thus limiting the generalisability of the results. And there is discrepancy between the number of female and male patientsv enrolled. Thus, propensity score matching (PSM) would be better to control selection bias. 4. There are a few typos - line 3, page 10 : antheses-> entheses - line5 page 18,: thn-> than Reviewer #2: In general: The manuscript describes a novel subject, the ASAS HI and its association with gender, and is interesting. The manuscript is too comprehensive, which makes the manuscript unclear. The authors investigate far more than their stated objective, namely to investigate the influence of gender on the ASAS HI. The manuscript would benefit from shortening the text, tables and variables. Detailed feedback Introduction: 1. The ASAS HI was developed to quantify health in patients with all forms of SpA, please adjust this in the text. 2. Please use more recent literature about gender and AS patients. 3. Do the authors think that having a longer delay for the AS diagnosis in female patients could explain worse outcomes in female patients? Please describe this shorty in the introduction. Methods 4. Please describe if consecutive patients were included in the study or if a selection was made in the patients participating in the study. How many patients did not complete the questionnaires and were not included in the study and why? Please describe. 5. Why are patients excluded if they did not complete the BASDAI, ASDAS or BASFI questionnaires? The authors are investigating the influence of gender on the ASAS HI not the influence of gender on other questionnaires. This could introduce bias in the cohort. 6. Please match the objective to the methods or vice versa. 7. Please mention under data collection which EAMs, previous histories and commorbidities are investigated. 8. Too many variables have included in the analyses, which makes it very complex and a bit of a fishing expedition. Please consider less variables and/or make a correction for multiple testing. Please do not forget that the group of female patients is small and therefore not too many variables could be used in the analyses. 9. Please explain of each variable why they are considered to be confounder in the association between gender and ASAS HI, preferably using literature. A confounder should have a association with both the ASAS HI (outcome) and gender (dependent variable) and should not be in the causal path between gender and ASAS HI. If they not fulfill these criteria, a variable should not be considered to be a confounder. Or wanted the author to make a prediction model? This has different rules. 10. It is unclear to me why disease activity was investigated by four different measures and what the added value of this is. Results 11. Please show the results of the association between gender alone and the ASAS HI. All analyses are corrected for disease activity, why could be in the causal path of the association. 12. The result could be shortened by removing the associations already mentioned in the tables. 13. Why are also the associations with BASFI and mSASSS investigated? Table 3 is very interesting. Discussion 13. What are the implication of the research on the clinical practice and describe how the worse health status could be improved in female AS patients. 14. Could the results also be applicable to axSpA patients (so radiographic and non-radiographic patients) and why? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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PONE-D-19-34404R1 Gender Difference in ASAS HI among Patients with Ankylosing Spondylitis PLOS ONE Dear Dt Chen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Please address the concerns raised by reviewer 2. I would draw your attention to point 3, which should be addressed as fully as possible. All other issues suggested should also be addressed on resubmission. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Jun 19 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Antony Nicodemus Antoniou, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for your effort to revise manuscript and address comments raised sincerely. The manuscript describes the association of ASAS HI with gender, and is interesting. Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed most of my comments. I have several comments: 1. Previous question 5. Where patients excluded if they did not fill out the BASDAI, BASFI or ASDAS questionnaire even though they did fill out the ASAS HI? If yes, please mention this in the methods. 2. Why were patients excluded if the mSASSS was not assessed? The main analysis is about the influence of gender on the ASAS HI and not about the influence of the mSASSS on the ASAS HI. The mSASSS is used as a confounder. 3. Previous question 11. I am concerned that disease activity might in the causal path between gender and the ASAS HI. This means that disease activity is no longer a confounder. If you correct the analyses for disease activity, the association between gender and ASAS HI might be biased. I understand that the authors would like to investigate the association between ASAS HI with gender and feel that disease activity is an important factor in this association. However, by adding all other factors from the univariable analysis, the effect of disease activity on the association between ASAS HI and gender is blurred by the other factors from the univariable analysis such as smoking. Please provide the results of the analysis between ASAS HI and gender with disease activity and no other factors. This would help to determine if disease activity is in the causal path or not. If not, it also shows the importance and the size of the influence of disease activity. 4. Some important features are now missing from Table 1 as they were removed. Please do not remove HLA-B27 status from Table 1 as it is an important SpA feature and the number of patients on NSAIDs and the number of patients on biologicals to get an idea about the study population. 5. Are the first seven variable of Table 2 measured as part of the ASDAS or BASDAI? ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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