Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 16, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-00791 ENDOBRONCHIAL ULTRASOUND-GUIDED TRANSBRONCHIAL NEEDLE ASPIRATION VERSUS MEDIASTINOSCOPY FOR MEDIASTINAL STAGING OF LUNG CANCER: SYSTEMATIC REVIEW OF ECONOMIC EVALUATION STUDIES PLOS ONE Dear Dr Steinhauser Motta, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. In this study, Mota, et al. performed a systematic review of 8 studies evaluating the cost effectiveness of EBUS compared to mediastinoscopy in lung cancer. The study is of interest to readers. Several questions and comments were raised by the reviewers. Please consider these suggestions thoughtfully as they are meant to be constructive. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The authors should consider including a funnel plot to their results. The cost-effectiveness and cost-savings data should be combined in a separate table. While the authors demonstrate that EBUS is cost-effective compared to mediastinoscopy, the potential limitations of EBUS should be included in the discussion. EBUS is operator dependent and full mediastinal staging with systematic sampling of multiple lymph node stations should be encouraged rather than FNA of a single lymph node. Training and quality control with rapid on-site evaluation (ROSE) are also important for those early in their experience with EBUS. There also continues to be a role for mediastinoscopy in cases where EBUS is non-diagnostic or there remains a high suspicion of positive mediastinal disease despite a negative EBUS. Please have the paper reviewed by a native English speaker. There are several typographical and grammatical errors in the manuscript as pointed out by the reviewers. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Apr 27 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at http://www.journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and http://www.journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=ba62/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_title_authors_affiliations.pdf [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I would like to thank the authors for allowing us to read their manuscript. This systematic review article evaluates and compares the cost /effectiveness of both EBUS vs mediastinoscopy in patients with lung cancer. The authors have selected an important and difficult area for study. The main goal of this paper is to evaluate the economic impact of EBUS and compared to mediastinoscopy. I do not find problems with this study ethics. Funding is clearly stated. Manuscript Strengths: - Abstract: Well presented, see minor comments - Introduction: Overall, well presented. See comments - Material and methods. I find it focused, with all inclusion/exclusion criteria and informative. There was a comprehensive literature search, the information sources were listed. Not redundant. See comments for suggestions. In regard to the data abstraction, it seems there was not structured data abstraction form used, however, there is description of the number of authors who abstracted the data, how they resolved disagreements, and some characteristics of all the studies used (See comments). - Results: Needs to be re-organized for the reader to follow. See comments - Discussion. The discussion is as well-balanced with mention made of some obvious limitations associated with the heterogeneity’s of the studies. - Conclusions: Well written, clear. I would like to raise the following major points: - In the introduction section: o Please consider including a clinically relevant and focused main study question. The objective is stated, but what is the authors main question to solve? This needs to be explicitly stated and will need to describe primary and secondary objectives. o Please consider adding if the cost /effectiveness of EBUS vs mediastinoscopy has NOT been clearly demonstrated in prior clinical trials. - In the material and methods: o Please explain if a funnel plot was used o Please consider adding � If the author had made attempts at collecting unpublished data � If a structured data abstraction form was used when selecting/scoring the studies � The size (n) of population for each study in Table 1. - Results. o There was repetition in the sub-section outcomes. results and sensitivity analysis’ paragraphs and Table 3. Please consider highlighting most relevant data. Tables and figures both need minor changes. See comments for suggestions. o Could the authors consider cost-effectiveness and cost-savings description of data be be condensed on a separate table? And just include one or two shorter paragraphs to add some additional data/guide the reader? - The discussion is very well written and succinct. It describes the major findings and acknowledges the limitations of this meta-analysis. o There is an obvious trend of EBUS to be more cost effective when compared to mediastinoscopy. My major concern was that the cost items in all eight studies are very heterogenous. The authors elegantly describe how they reconciled this fact. I would like, however ask the authors if were all these eight studies, in their opinion, combinable? If so, please add this in the discussion. I noticed that a funnel plot was not used. Was this necessary, if not, was the sensitivity analysis enough? Please explain. o Please consider mentioning that additionally, EUS will not be able to sample hilar lymph nodes but mediastinal). Minor comments: - Abstract. Correct misspelling “statement”. Consider changing keys for keywords, pulmonary neoplasia for lung cancer or thoracic malignancy. - Line 153, misspelling “Computer” for “Computed”. Should read Chest computed tomography - Line 180, please spell out DRG abbreviation - Line 209, Please clarify if the authors meant EUS or EBUS or both. - Line 269. Maybe a typo. I only found 8 articles used, but it is written “nine” - Line 334. Delete “the” - Table 1. o Please correct the word “cost-effectiveness”, “available”, “months” - Consider changing “thorax CT” for “Chest CT” throughout the document - Table 3. Add in authors column the corresponding # of bibliography. Consider capital letter in sensitivity analysis column. Multiple misspellings: “n.a.” and “available”, computer for “computed”. Summary: In particular, this systematic review confirmed the cost effectiveness of EBUS when compared to mediastinoscopy on patients with thoracic malignancy. Clear limitations of the analysis are stated. I do think that the journal readers, will find this paper - once reviewed- helpful and thought-provoking for future health-economic research. Reviewer #2: The authors conducted a systematic review of the economic evaluation of EBUS vs mediastinoscopy in a contemporary time period. They ultimately included 8 studies in the review and overall this shows that EBUS is a cost-effective procedure for lung cancer staging compared to mediastinoscopy. This is a relevant and interesting topic, as some places in the world do not have full access to this technology. I have a few comments for the authors to help strengthen the manuscript. 1. Abstract intro: EBUS did not change the approach of pulmonary neoplasia. It has changed the approach to staging pulmonary neoplasia. This should be corrected throughout the manuscript. 2. There are several typos throughout the manuscript that need to be corrected prior to publication. 3. I assume the column heading in Table 1 should read "Sensitivity Analysis" and not Sensitive 4. The discussion would be strengthened by mention of the potential limitations of EBUS, in that it is highly operator dependent, ie the time spent doing the procedure by an experienced operator systematically sampling all nodal stations will likely have significantly different outcomes in terms of nodal sampling rate, etc than one done by an inexperienced operator only sampling one node. While this is not directly related to the findings from the included studies, it could impact cost ultimately. Given that most older experienced thoracic surgeons are more familiar with mediastinoscopy than EBUS, I think the inclusion of some discussion about the importance of adequate training and quality control of EBUS, including Rapid On-site Evaluation (ROSE) of specimens should be included, even if not mentioned in the included studies. 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ENDOBRONCHIAL ULTRASOUND-GUIDED TRANSBRONCHIAL NEEDLE ASPIRATION VERSUS MEDIASTINOSCOPY FOR MEDIASTINAL STAGING OF LUNG CANCER: A SYSTEMATIC REVIEW OF ECONOMIC EVALUATION STUDIES PONE-D-20-00791R1 Dear Dr. Steinhauser Motta, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I do thank the authors for providing thoughtful and clear answers to each of my suggestions. I am satisfied with your replies. Reviewer #2: My comments and concerns from the review have been addressed. The manuscript is now stronger for these changes. ********** 7. 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PONE-D-20-00791R1 Endobronchial ultrasound-guided transbronchial needle aspiration versus mediastinoscopy for mediastinal staging of lung cancer: a systematic review of economic evaluation studies Dear Dr. Steinhauser Motta: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Shawn Groth Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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