Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 31, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-36071 Sodium–calcium exchanger 1 is the key molecule for urinary potassium excretion against acute hyperkalemia PLOS ONE Dear Mr. Nomura, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. As you will see, Reviewer 1 would appreciate more physiological information in your in vivo studies, Reviewer 2 asks questions about the suitability of your in vivo model using a NCX-1 inhibitor. Reviewer 3, although generally supportive of your manuscript, has several concerns regarding the presentation of your results and the choice of some parameters. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by May 29 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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[Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The study by Wakana Shoda et al. describes the role of the Na/Ca-exchanger 1 and of calcineurin in the K+-dependent inhibition of NCC (through dephosphorylation). They first confirm previous results showing that calcineurin dephosphorylates NCC and then complete this observation by showing that increase of intracellular Ca is a requirement for this effect. Then they show, in vivo and ex vivo (on kidney slices) that NCX1 inhibition alters the adaptation to acute K load by maintaining NCC in its phosphorylated state. The data presented support the conclusion and few points coild be added to improve the manuscript. 1/ The authors should clearly mention in the figure legends the concentrations of K+ they used in the conditions Normal and High K. Could you also comment on why you choose 10 mM KCl for the study on cells ? 2/ Could you include the expression of NCX1 in HEK cells that are depicted in the Supplemental Information S6 into the Fig 3, do you have a western blot in addition to the PCR ? 3/ The modification of activity of NCC, in vivo, is only related to its phosphorylation state (Figure 6 and 7). A test of thiazide sensitivity after SEA0400 and K treatment could be helpful to strengthen the idea that SEA0400 interfere with NCC activity in vivo. The Supplemental information 11 and 12 are the same figures, please include the urine Na and Cl excretion in the figure 7 to outline that the treatment with NCX1 inhibitor leads to Na retention. 4/Could you provide plasma aldosterone concentration for the 4 groups of treated mice? If NCC is not inhibited as it should in the case of NCX1 inhibition + K loading, which induces hypekalemia, and decrease of K and Na excretion, the mice should be hypertensive. I invite the authors to measure the BP of their mice because they may have here a model of Gordon syndrome (fHHt). The authors should discuss the possibility of CaN and NCX1 to participate to this disease. Reviewer #2: The manuscript entitled « sodium-calcium exchanger 1 is a key molecule for urinary potassium excretion against acute hyperkalemia » by Wakana Shoda et al. shows that NCX1 is a key regulator of urine potassium excretion in response to increased (serum/extracellular) potassium levels, promoting the activation of calcineurin and downstream NCC dephosphorylation. Interestingly, thapsigargin inhibiting calcium release from ER did not inhibit NCC dephophorylation, suggesting that only the calcium flux from extracellular space was involved in the response to potassium load. Of note, cells were exposed in vitro to very high potassium levels (10mM), this is understandable but makes in vivo models indispensable to confirm the in vitro experiments. In vitro studies are well designed and the concept is very interesting. Main concern: in vivo studies are based upon pharmacological inhibition of NCX1. A model of acute potassium load in NCX-1 knock-out (heterozygous) mice would be more convincing. These mice seem to be available in Japan. Minor concerns Page 6: “In our previous study, we observed that the CaN inhibitor, tacrolimus....”: reference 22 seems inappropriate. Did the authors mean to reference 17 ? Page 23: reference 47 seems inappropriate too Reviewer #3: The manuscript PONE-D-19-36071, entitled ‘Sodium–calcium exchanger 1 is the key molecule for urinary potassium excretion against acute hyperkalemia’, by Shoda and co-authors, describes the characterisation of the crucial role played by the Na-Ca exchanger NCX1 in the regulation of the activity of the Na-Cl cotransporter NCC in the distal nephron during a K-load. Overall, the results described here support the hypotheses and the conclusions drawn. However, I have the following comments. Major comments: Material and Methods – Animal experiment : why were the kidneys collected 15 minutes after the oral K gavage for protein extraction? The metabolic data were collected every 30 minutes after the oral gavage. Why is it different? Results : (1) Figure 1 : Calcineurin is essential for K+-induced NCC dephosphorylation - I don’t understand the result and relevance of the experiment describing the consequence of the overexpression of CaN-A on NCC phosphorylation. How could CaN-A work without CaN-B, which is barely expressed in HEK293 cells, as explained by the authors in the next paragraph? Conversely, why did the authors overexpress CaN-A when transfecting CaN-B is sufficient to induce NCC dephosphorylation (Fig 1B)? (2) Figure 2D: why did the authors quantify pNCC-S71 in kidney slices and mice rather than NCC-p53, used in vitro? In addition, the figures would be easier to read if the system in which the experiments are conducted were indicated on the figure. (3) Figure S11: why did the authors quantify the pNCC/tNCC ratio rather than pNCC and tNCC separately like in the other experiments? (4) Table 2: ‘Blood K+ level at 120 min following a high-K+ load was significantly higher in SEA0400-treated mice than in vehicle-treated counterparts (Table 2)’. In their previous study, using tacrolimus to inhibit calcineurin, the authors did not observe a change in plasma potassium in tacrolimus-treated animals even though NCC dephosphorylation was inhibited. Could the authors comment on the difference in plasma K between tacrolimus- and SEA0400-treated animals? (5) Have the authors studied the role of NCX1 after a longer exposure to high K ? Minor comments: - Abstract : the authors should remove the following sentence, which is not at the correct place : ‘The mice were housed in metabolic cages for urine sample collection’. - Introduction, page 6 : the reference’s number in the following sentence is incorrect: ‘In our previous study, we observed that the CaN inhibitor, tacrolimus, …urinary K+ excretion in the acute phase[22]’. The authors should check all the other references’ number. - Results: Figures 3 and 5 should be merged. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Sodium–calcium exchanger 1 is the key molecule for urinary potassium excretion against acute hyperkalemia PONE-D-19-36071R1 Dear Dr. Nomura, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Jean-Claude Dussaule Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: I Don't Know Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Juliette Hadchouel |
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PONE-D-19-36071R1 Sodium–calcium exchanger 1 is the key molecule for urinary potassium excretion against acute hyperkalemia Dear Dr. Nomura: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Jean-Claude Dussaule Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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