Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 24, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-35595 Community structure of actively growing bacteria in a coastal fish-farming area PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Taniguchi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. While most points must be addressed, particular attention should be paid to the lack of any information on the statistical methods in the methods section. For example there is no analysis of any temporal patterns and no analysis of environmental-bacteria relationships. Although cluster analysis is obvious in the text later on, it is not described in the methods and we have no idea of either the cluster method nor the distance measure used. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Apr 23 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Introduction Line 46 – Would be beneficial for the reader to define what do you mean by environmental capacity in this context? Line 55 – rephrase: Previous studies looking at the community structures of particle-attached bacteria [9-12] showed that Gammaproteobacteria and the Bacteroidetes frequently dominated these particles. Line 56 – rephrase: Further, most studies have focused on describing the general phylogenetic affiliations of these particle-attached bacteria, but information on the actively growing species remain little. Line 62 – remove word ‘should’ Line 64 – replace protozoa with ‘heterotrophic or mixotrophic protists.’ Protozoa is not used anymore in microbial ecology Line 71 – rephrase: For example, the diversity and spatio-temporal variability of AGB were investigated in coastal and oceanic environments using BrdU magnetic bead immunocapture coupled with PCR-denaturing gradient gel electrophoresis (BUMP-DGGE) techniques. Line 76 – the shift to the next paragraph seems to be very abrupt. What’s the knowledge gap in terms of the technique use in aquaculture? Line 78 – rephrase: The objectives of the present study then were to utilize this BrdU technique to determine the phylogenetic affiliations of AGB in the subsurface (ca. 10 m) of a coastal shallow fish-farming area to reveal their seasonal variations. We specifically looked at the free-living and particle-attached AGB in the water column. Line 80-83 – the sentence seems to not fit. The ending of this paragraph seems abrupt and not well structured. So, what are the new knowledge and insights? Why is this study actually important? Materials and Methods Line 93 – what is the goal why do bimonthly sampling? Justify. Line 97 – ‘using a van dorn water sampler’ Line 124-135 – move this justification before describing the serial filtration Line 140 – what were the in-situ water temperatures? Line 175- Solgent based in what country? Line 177 – what particular BLAST method? Results Line 187 – what’s a regular pattern? Or you meant seasonal patterns? When you describe the patterns, what were the seasons identified? What characteristics do you associate with what season? What were the markers of these seasons? Be more specific in describing the results. Table 1 – did you only measure once for each sample? Don’t the values should have standard errors? Line 218 – so what the ‘variation’ that the communities clearly showed? Figure 2 – Wouldn’t the data better presented in an ordinate system? Line 227 – resuspendable or resuspended? Line 245-248 – remove the 1st and 2nd sentences as they are not needed, just a repeat of the methods. Line 248 – you mentioned of 29 bands, but why only 25 out of the 27? What are the other 2? Line 257 – remove ‘bacteria throughout the studied period’. Redundant. Table 3 can be moved as a supplementary material. Discussions Line 279 - In this environment, large quantities of allochthonous organic matter such as from feed wastes and fish feces are present, with the degree of organic load depending on aquaculture activities. Line 285 – again, what do you mean by ‘environmental capacity’? or are you referring to ecosystem functions? Line 290 – ‘were still actively growing when the sediments….’ Line 307-309 – why are they usually attached to particles? Major comment; Roseobacter is one of the most studied bacterial groups, with many genome representatives. The recommendation to study them is too broad. What were the characteristics that allowed them to be attached? Why are they usually attached? Any suggestions from the literature? Line 313- ‘also determined’ Line 315 – contextualize in what oceans and conditions? Line 320 – so what if they have more proteases then glycoside hydrolases? What’s the implication of these to the particle? Line 343 – how do they contribute to the ‘environmental capacity’ and carbon cycling? These are very general descriptions with no substantiation. Other major comments - There were no discussions why there was separate clustering between the total and binding, sediment vs. pelagic. - The patterns of seasonality were not discussed especially relative to potential community drivers. - There were no insights on the succession of the actively growing bacteria spatially and temporally, which were included in the design of the study. - The discussions were more like a review of literature with limited insights and interpretations of generated results. - Limited analysis especially on ecological statistics. - Overall, the objectives were not answered or discussed accordingly particularly the 1) seasonality, and 2) the resuspension via waves and currents since there were no data generated for this. - the manuscript will benefit from edits and improvement of the language used. Reviewer #2: This study provides some information about the bacterial population present in the water column and sediment of a fish-farm area including both free-living and particle attached and the actively growing part of the population.the study is rigorous and well presented and the results are based on correct data. My only concern is that the objective and the application and interest of the study is not well described. I suggest the authors to explain the specific interest of the study and its contribution to the analysis, managing and monitoring and of the aquaculture areas ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Community structure of actively growing bacteria in a coastal fish-farming area PONE-D-19-35595R1 Dear Dr. Taniguchi, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Judi Hewitt Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-19-35595R1 Community structure of actively growing bacteria in a coastal fish-farming area Dear Dr. Taniguchi: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Judi Hewitt Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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