Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 5, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-03332 Efficacy of an ultrasound training program for nurse midwives to assess high-risk conditions at labor triage in rural Uganda PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Shah, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Jun 05 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The aim of the study was to demonstrate that nurse-midwives were able to build confidence and skills after an ultrasound training course to detect high risk conditions during labor triage. This intervention is particularly effective in the study setting (low income country) to improve maternal and fetal outcomes during labour, with a relevant impact on public health. Therefor the qualitative analysis allowed to identify best practices for training. However there are some aspects that should be explored or clarified: 1. In the quantitative analysis is unclear how the sample size was defined. I suggest to better describe the inclusion and exclusion criteria of healthcare professional included. It should be defined the selection process of subjects included into research, and their characteristics in term of professional experience, attitude,.... This aspect is needed to extend the results in other setting. 2. In the qualitative analysis it should be describe the result in both groups (district hospital and health centers) because they received a different training course protocol. I suggest to explore deeply the experience of "training of trainers" Reviewer #2: This is a mixed-method study to evaluate a 2 weeks ultrasound training protocol for nurses, midwives and doctors in rural Uganda in order to detect seven high-risk conditions in labor: fetal demise, fetal distress, malpresentation, multiple gestation, placenta previa, oligohydramnios and preterm delivery. This a very important topic because many high-risk conditions of pregnancy are undetected until the time of delivery in low-income countries This study demonstrate that nurse midwives without previous ultrasound experience can detect high-risk conditions during labor with a high rate of quality and accuracy after training Here some comments to the authors. Materials and Methods - Line 154: the authors report that in the public district hospital there were 20% of deliveries complicated; what were the complications observed? - Line 160: “complicated patients from these sites are referred to the district hospital”. What kind of complicated patients are referred to the district hospital and which patients are managed in the regional health centers? - Line 177: What are the specific differences between phase 1 and phase 2? It may be helpful to enter a table. - Line 184-187: please specify the criteria and guidelines used to diagnose fetal distress and other indicated risk conditions. It may be helpful to enter a table. - Tab 1: I'd change the table. Since the differences and characteristics of the training of phase 1 and phase 2 have already been reported previously, at this point I would insert in the table only the data related to the training of trainers course. About the training course for trainers...did only the three midwife nurses mentioned above who had participated in phase 1 or did someone else participate in this course? - Line 200: How were the ultrasound trainers chosen? Did all ultrasound trainers use the same guidelines and reference methods? - Line 205: “TOT master trainers” please specify who they are and how they were chosen - Line 226-227: Why were these two different time intervals chosen? to make sure that there were more or less the same number of births between the district hospital and the HCs? And how many births have there been at these intervals of time? - Line 229-230: Why weren't the two doctors involved? - Line 248: Why weren't all the participants interviewed? Results - Line 291-300: The characteristics of the participants should be put into materials and methods (“ participants ” line 165-171) - Line 311-332: The characteristics and differences between phase 1 and phase 2 should be put into materials and methods - Line 336-338: Specify why there is no data on all trainees - Line 360: “ asking other people”: specify who these people are - Table 3: why the average final passing score for health centers is 90.4%? - With respect to the reported results, it might also be useful to make an analysis of the differences between phase 1 and phase 2. Discussion - Line 495: How many and what complications have the trainees diagnosed? Did they miss any complications? This data should also be put into materials and methods - Line 510-519: I would describe the differences from the study mentioned: in the study mentioned how was the training organized? 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