Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 1, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-33282 Activated whole-body arginine pathway in high-active mice PLOS ONE Dear Mr Granados, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Particularly, you will see that reviewers asked for additional information and for clarification on some aspects of your study. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Mar 21 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: General comments: This is a good piece of scientific work presented factually. Of optimal length, the paper flows well and highlights relevant areas of knowledge. This study dealt with the hypothesize that endogenous metabolism may be involved in the regulation of physical activity levels. To determine if metabolites of the arginine pathways were associated with the regulation of physical activity levels, authors studied total amino acid concentrations, using a stable tracer approach to assess whole-body production, and clearance rates of arginine, including metabolic precursors glutamine, glutamate, ornithine, citrulline, and phenylalanine, as well as the products de novo arginine and nitric oxide production in high-active and low-active inbred mice, in order to assess if differences in arginine metabolism were associated with inherent physical activity levels. Overall, the study is relevant and well written. The concept is a good idea and will be a needed addition to the existing body of literature on arginine metabolism. Specific comments: - The abstract background is too long. Authors should reduce the background and increase the wording of the results including the numerical values and the observed statistical significance. - At line 33, describe LC-MS / MS - The graphic quality of all figures needs to be improved. Reviewer #2: The manuscript entitled Activated whole-body arginine pathway in high-active mice aimed to assess ARG metabolism and its precursors [citrulline (CIT), glutamine (GLN), glutamate (GLU), ornithine (ORN), and phenylalanine (PHE)] by measuring plasma concentration and enrichments, whole-body production (WBP), de novo ARG and NO production, and clearance rates in mice previously classified as either low-active (LA) or high-active (HA). The authors concluded that HA active mice have an activated whole-body ARG pathway, which may be associated with regulating PA levels via increased NO production. Major comments: Abstract Some data must be included in the abstract to make clear the results. Methods A number of the Ethical process is necessary according to COPE; It is not clear why the authors keep the temperature in 37o C during the surgical procedures since the ideal for mice is about 20-22 o C. Explain! What time the experimental procedures were carried out? Please insert the reason why the authors have chosen forty-minutes decay for measurements of plasma AAs and their tracers? A reference regarding the pharmacokinetics of these AAs would be useful. Results It is not clear why the HA mice showed a higher lean mass. If they exercised in a wheel-running usually a lower lean mass is expected if they did not, the authors should address this finding properly. Figure 5 is not clear. Please insert the numbers obtained in a Table or draw a figure to make clear the difference between the groups. Please clarify! Discussion First of all, the authors should focus on the discussion of the obtained results of the study and avoiding repeating the results section. Why plasma arginine is not decreased in HA mice since the primary hypothesis is that Arg/NO pathway is up-regulated in this strain mice? Please clarify! Minor comments Please rewrite the discussion section, some phrases do not make sense: ….The basis for the difference between inbred strains is the underlying genomic variations between these strains. …..Other external factors that could have influenced ARG metabolism pathways were controlled for during this study. Reviewer #3: This study aimed to evaluate if metabolites of the arginine pathways are associated with the regulation of mice’s physical activity levels. According to the authors, high active mice presented an activated whole-body arginine pathway, and they suggested that it may be associated with regulating physical activity levels due to higher NO production. The study is of high quality, is well designed, organized and written. Author’s presented a clear hypothesis, which facilitates the comprehension of the manuscript’s rationale. The methods used are all well-accepted and described. Results are presented in a logical manner, which facilitates the comprehension of the paper. All finds are very interesting and will clearly contribute to the academic area. Please find below some suggestions and comments in the attempt to contribute to the quality of the manuscript: 1- The references used in the manuscript are appropriate. However, only 17 from all 54 references used (~31%) are from the last 5 years; 2- Unfortunately, the conversion of the manuscript to the pdf version affected the quality of the figures. They are practically unreadable; 3- As cited before, the manuscript is well written. Only two observations: (1) page 18 line 353; (2) I found the last paragraph of the discussion (conclusion) a little confused; 4- The discussion section should start by presenting the main find of the study, therefore, the entire first phrase could be deleted (repeated information – not necessary); 5- Does this study have any limitations? It would be good to have it described in the discussion. Some “directions” for further studies should be also added; 6- Regarding statistical analysis, why authors preferred to transform data instead use a non-parametric analysis? Lastly, I would suggest authors perform the calculations of the effect size from LA and HA comparisons, and added this information in the referred table. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Activated whole-body arginine pathway in high-active mice PONE-D-19-33282R1 Dear Dr. Granados, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: the author addressed all the comments and th ems is now suitable for publication in PLos One Journal. Reviewer #3: I would like to congratulate authors for the great job performed in this revised version of the manuscript. Most of the reviewers’ comments/suggestions were adequately considered and incorporated in the text. The addition of the calculation of Cohen’s d (effect size) largely contributed to better understand the magnitude of each reported change. Furthermore, the inclusion of the limitation section along with future directions significative contributed to the increase of the manuscript quality. I have no further suggestions/questions. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Claudia Meirelles Reviewer #2: Yes: Angelina Zanesco Reviewer #3: Yes: Rafael Herling Lambertucci |
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PONE-D-19-33282R1 Activated whole-body arginine pathway in high-active mice Dear Dr. Granados: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. François Blachier Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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